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写作实战 答案（含基础版范文和进阶版范文）D20
请以“If I Go to the Moon”为题，根据下列提示，写一篇不少于80词的英语短文，除提示外还可以适当自由拓展。
提示:1.住在太空旅馆;2.去月球漫步,拍很多照片;3.在月球上踢足球;4.在太空旅馆旁边种很多树。
要求:1.使用一般将来时;2.语句通顺。
If I Go to the Moon
请以“If I Go to the Moon”为题，根据下列提示，写一篇不少于80词的英语短文，除提示外还可以适当自由拓展。
提示:1.住在太空旅馆;2.去月球漫步,拍很多照片;3.在月球上踢足球;4.在太空旅馆旁边种很多树。
要求:1.使用一般将来时;2.语句通顺。
If I Go to the Moon
If I go to the Moon, I will have an amazing experience. I will live in a space hotel. It will be very comfortable and convenient.
I will go for a walk on the Moon and take a lot of photos. How wonderful it will be!
I also want to play football on the Moon. It must be very interesting.
Besides, I will plant many trees near the space hotel. I believe the Moon will become more and more beautiful in the future.
答案
主题写作专项
基础版范文
If I Go to the Moon
If I go to the Moon, I will have an amazing experience. I will live in a space hotel. It will be very comfortable and convenient. I will go for a walk on the Moon and take a lot of photos. How wonderful it will be! I also want to play football on the Moon. It must be very interesting. Besides, I will plant many trees near the space hotel. I believe the Moon will become more and more beautiful in the future.
进阶版范文
If I Go to the Moon
I dream of travelling to the Moon.
If I have a chance to go to the Moon, I will have an amazing experience. I will live in a space hotel. It will be very comfortable and convenient. I will go for a walk on the Moon and take as many photos as I can. How wonderful it will be! I also want to play football on the Moon. It must be very interesting. Moreover, I am going to plant lots of trees near the space hotel. I'm sure that the Moon will become more and more beautiful in the future.
All in all, I really look forward to travelling to the Moon someday!
基础版范文
If I Go to the Moon
If I go to the Moon, I will have an amazing experience. I will live in a space hotel. It will be very comfortable and convenient. I will go for a walk on the Moon and take a lot of photos. How wonderful it will be! I also want to play football on the Moon. It must be very interesting. Besides, I will plant many trees near the space hotel. I believe the Moon will become more and more beautiful in the future.
进阶版范文
If I Go to the Moon
I dream of travelling to the Moon.
If I have a chance to go to the Moon, I will have an amazing experience. I will live in a space hotel. It will be very comfortable and convenient. I will go for a walk on the Moon and take as many photos as I can. How wonderful it will be! I also want to play football on the Moon. It must be very interesting. Moreover, I am going to plant lots of trees near the space hotel. I'm sure that the Moon will become more and more beautiful in the future.
All in all, I really look forward to travelling to the Moon someday!
解析
【分析】本题为英语话题写作题，要求以“If I Go to the Moon”为题，用一般将来时，结合给定的4个提示要点（住太空旅馆、月球漫步拍照、月球踢足球、太空旅馆旁种树）写一篇不少于80词的短文。解题思路：①开头点明去月球的经历是很棒的体验，引出主题；②依次展开提示内容，每部分用一般将来时表达计划；③适当补充细节（如太空旅馆舒适、月球踢球有趣等），最后总结表达对月球变美的期待，确保语句通顺、符合词数要求。
【解析】写作时需遵循以下步骤：1. 确定时态：全程使用一般将来时，用“will + 动词原形”结构；2. 结构安排：开头引入主题，中间分述4个提示要点（住太空旅馆→月球漫步拍照→月球踢足球→种树），结尾总结升华；3. 语言润色：适当添加细节使内容更生动，确保语句连贯，词数达标。
【答案】If I Go to the Moon
If I go to the Moon, I will have an amazing experience. I will live in a space hotel. It will be very comfortable and convenient. I will go for a walk on the Moon and take a lot of photos. How wonderful it will be! I also want to play football on the Moon. It must be very interesting. Besides, I will plant many trees near the space hotel. I believe the Moon will become more and more beautiful in the future.
【知识点】英语话题写作；一般将来时
【点评】本文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖所有提示要点，正确运用一般将来时，语句通顺、逻辑清晰，符合词数要求，是一篇符合标准的话题作文。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】写作时需遵循以下步骤：1. 确定时态：全程使用一般将来时，用“will + 动词原形”结构；2. 结构安排：开头引入主题，中间分述4个提示要点（住太空旅馆→月球漫步拍照→月球踢足球→种树），结尾总结升华；3. 语言润色：适当添加细节使内容更生动，确保语句连贯，词数达标。
【答案】If I Go to the Moon
If I go to the Moon, I will have an amazing experience. I will live in a space hotel. It will be very comfortable and convenient. I will go for a walk on the Moon and take a lot of photos. How wonderful it will be! I also want to play football on the Moon. It must be very interesting. Besides, I will plant many trees near the space hotel. I believe the Moon will become more and more beautiful in the future.
【知识点】英语话题写作；一般将来时
【点评】本文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖所有提示要点，正确运用一般将来时，语句通顺、逻辑清晰，符合词数要求，是一篇符合标准的话题作文。
【难度系数】0.5
