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[开头句]
1. Have you got a hobby? （提出问题）
2. Interest is the best teacher. （引用名言）
3. Everyone has his or her own hobby. Today I want to talk about my hobby. （引出话题）
[中间句]
1. Sometimes I write songs and share them online. （人物行为）
2. Reading makes me relaxed. （阐述益处）
3. He is interested in comic books. （陈述兴趣）
[结尾句]
1. It feels great to enjoy our hobby together. （抒发感受）
2. Hobbies can make our lives colourful. （升华主题）
[名言警句]
1. Interest is the first step to knowledge. 兴趣是通往知识的第一步。
2. Choose a job you love, and you will never have to work a day in your life. 选择一份你热爱的工作，你将永远不会感受到工作的辛苦。
写作演练
每个人的爱好都有所不同，假如你是李明，你所在的年级正在举行以“健康的爱好，快乐地生活”为主题的英语征文比赛。请你根据以下提示写一篇英语短文，介绍一下自己的爱好。词数80左右。
提示：1. 简单介绍你的爱好（至少两点）；2. 你的其中一个爱好的相关经历（经过以及结果）；3. 你的收获。
[思路点拨]
1. 时态：以一般现在时为主；2. 人称：以第一人称为主；3. 写作时：第一段叙述爱好，第二段介绍一个爱好的相关经历，第三段介绍对爱好的感受。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
（更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”）
[开头句]
1. Have you got a hobby? （提出问题）
2. Interest is the best teacher. （引用名言）
3. Everyone has his or her own hobby. Today I want to talk about my hobby. （引出话题）
[中间句]
1. Sometimes I write songs and share them online. （人物行为）
2. Reading makes me relaxed. （阐述益处）
3. He is interested in comic books. （陈述兴趣）
[结尾句]
1. It feels great to enjoy our hobby together. （抒发感受）
2. Hobbies can make our lives colourful. （升华主题）
[名言警句]
1. Interest is the first step to knowledge. 兴趣是通往知识的第一步。
2. Choose a job you love, and you will never have to work a day in your life. 选择一份你热爱的工作，你将永远不会感受到工作的辛苦。
写作演练
每个人的爱好都有所不同，假如你是李明，你所在的年级正在举行以“健康的爱好，快乐地生活”为主题的英语征文比赛。请你根据以下提示写一篇英语短文，介绍一下自己的爱好。词数80左右。
提示：1. 简单介绍你的爱好（至少两点）；2. 你的其中一个爱好的相关经历（经过以及结果）；3. 你的收获。
[思路点拨]
1. 时态：以一般现在时为主；2. 人称：以第一人称为主；3. 写作时：第一段叙述爱好，第二段介绍一个爱好的相关经历，第三段介绍对爱好的感受。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
（更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”）
答案
One possible version:
Different people have different hobbies, such as reading, writing and doing sports.
I have many hobbies, such as swimming and playing football. But my favourite hobby is playing chess. My father taught me to play chess when I was only five years old. I have played for the school team as well as in many competitions. It takes up most of my free time. And as a result, I am good at it now.
Playing chess makes me serious and doing sports makes me healthy.
Different people have different hobbies, such as reading, writing and doing sports.
I have many hobbies, such as swimming and playing football. But my favourite hobby is playing chess. My father taught me to play chess when I was only five years old. I have played for the school team as well as in many competitions. It takes up most of my free time. And as a result, I am good at it now.
Playing chess makes me serious and doing sports makes me healthy.
解析
【分析】
本题要求围绕“健康的爱好，快乐地生活”主题写英语征文，词数80左右，需分三段完成：第一段引出不同人的爱好并点明自身爱好；第二段详细阐述其中一个爱好的相关经历（学习时间、过程、结果）；第三段说明爱好带来的收获，呼应主题。写作时以一般现在时为主，用第一人称，结合素材内容丰富表达。
【解析】
1. 第一段：用“Different people have different hobbies...”引出话题，列举游泳、足球等爱好，点明最喜欢下棋，完成爱好介绍；
2. 第二段：讲述爸爸五岁教自己下棋，加入校队、参加比赛，最终擅长下棋，覆盖经历及结果的要求；
3. 第三段：分别说明下棋让自己严谨、运动让自己健康，升华主题，呼应征文主题，控制词数符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Different people have different hobbies, such as reading, writing and doing sports.
I have many hobbies, such as swimming and playing football. But my favourite hobby is playing chess. My father taught me to play chess when I was only five years old. I have played for the school team as well as in many competitions. It takes up most of my free time. And as a result, I am good at it now.
Playing chess makes me serious and doing sports makes me healthy.
【知识点】
英语话题写作（爱好主题）、一般现在时运用
【点评】
本文严格遵循三段式结构，覆盖所有提示要点，内容具体真实，语言通顺自然，契合征文主题，词数恰当，是符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求围绕“健康的爱好，快乐地生活”主题写英语征文，词数80左右，需分三段完成：第一段引出不同人的爱好并点明自身爱好；第二段详细阐述其中一个爱好的相关经历（学习时间、过程、结果）；第三段说明爱好带来的收获，呼应主题。写作时以一般现在时为主，用第一人称，结合素材内容丰富表达。
【解析】
1. 第一段：用“Different people have different hobbies...”引出话题，列举游泳、足球等爱好，点明最喜欢下棋，完成爱好介绍；
2. 第二段：讲述爸爸五岁教自己下棋，加入校队、参加比赛，最终擅长下棋，覆盖经历及结果的要求；
3. 第三段：分别说明下棋让自己严谨、运动让自己健康，升华主题，呼应征文主题，控制词数符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Different people have different hobbies, such as reading, writing and doing sports.
I have many hobbies, such as swimming and playing football. But my favourite hobby is playing chess. My father taught me to play chess when I was only five years old. I have played for the school team as well as in many competitions. It takes up most of my free time. And as a result, I am good at it now.
Playing chess makes me serious and doing sports makes me healthy.
【知识点】
英语话题写作（爱好主题）、一般现在时运用
【点评】
本文严格遵循三段式结构，覆盖所有提示要点，内容具体真实，语言通顺自然，契合征文主题，词数恰当，是符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
