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三、教材佳句仿写·核心句式训练
1. 教材原句: Everybody tries their best to make things better.
仿写:我们会尽最大努力解决这个问题。
2. 教材原句: It's good to keep our school area clean.
仿写:帮助需要帮助的朋友真的很好。
3. 教材原句: We learn how to take care of the plants there.
仿写:这个活动帮助我学习如何让事情变得更好。
1. 教材原句: Everybody tries their best to make things better.
仿写:我们会尽最大努力解决这个问题。
We (will) try our best to solve the problem.
2. 教材原句: It's good to keep our school area clean.
仿写:帮助需要帮助的朋友真的很好。
It's good to help friends in need.
3. 教材原句: We learn how to take care of the plants there.
仿写:这个活动帮助我学习如何让事情变得更好。
This activity helps me learn how to make things better.
答案
1. We (will) try our best to solve the problem.
2. It's good to help friends in need.
3. This activity helps me learn how to make things better.
2. It's good to help friends in need.
3. This activity helps me learn how to make things better.
四、典例剖析·主题写作行文指导
人称：第一人称
假如你是学校外联部主席李华，美国学生Peter即将来你校进行短暂的交流学习。他给你发了一封电子邮件，想要了解你们学校的情况。请根据邮件内容和你校的实际情况用英语回复，词数70左右。
语篇类型：应用文
Dear Li Hua,
I am an exchange student from the US. Next month I will go to your school to study. I want to know about your school life.
• What subjects do you study at school?
• What are your daily activities at school?
• How do you feel about your school life?
Drop me a line if you have time.
Best wishes,
Peter
注意:1.开头已写好,不计入总词数;
2.必须包括所有要点,可适当发挥;
3.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to receive your email. Let me tell you about my school life.
Yours,
Li Hua
Step 1 谋篇布局指导
Step 2 高阶表达应用
1. Practising English at the English Corner is helpful for me. (用“It is + adj. + for sb. + to do sth.”句型升格)
2. I enjoy my school life. (补充具体原因,扩写句子)
Step3 佳作展示评析
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to receive your email. Let me tell you about my school life.
I am a little busy this term. I start my school at 8:00 a.m. and I usually finish my classes at 5:00 p.m. My
school subjects are very interesting. I have Chinese, English, Maths, History and other subjects. English is my favourite subject. There is an English Corner in the school. It is helpful for me to practise English at the English Corner. What's more①, we have a big sports meeting twice a year. I often take part in② the long jump. To my delight, our teachers are kind and my classmates are warm-hearted. They always help me in every possible way③.
I enjoy my school life because④ it is meaningful and colourful.
Yours,
Li Hua
①what's more 引出学校生活的其他方面,使文章更加连贯。
②take part in 为本单元新学表达,做到了学以致用。
③in every possible way 体现了老师和同学对作者无微不至的关怀。
④because 引导原因状语从句,说明作者享受学校生活的原因,丰富文章句式。
本文从课程安排、学校活动、学校人员、对学校生活的感受四方面介绍学校生活,语言流畅,要点齐全,有助于同学们交流学校生活等话题。
人称：第一人称
假如你是学校外联部主席李华，美国学生Peter即将来你校进行短暂的交流学习。他给你发了一封电子邮件，想要了解你们学校的情况。请根据邮件内容和你校的实际情况用英语回复，词数70左右。
语篇类型：应用文
Dear Li Hua,
I am an exchange student from the US. Next month I will go to your school to study. I want to know about your school life.
• What subjects do you study at school?
• What are your daily activities at school?
• How do you feel about your school life?
Drop me a line if you have time.
Best wishes,
Peter
注意:1.开头已写好,不计入总词数;
2.必须包括所有要点,可适当发挥;
3.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to receive your email. Let me tell you about my school life.
Yours,
Li Hua
Step 1 谋篇布局指导
Step 2 高阶表达应用
1. Practising English at the English Corner is helpful for me. (用“It is + adj. + for sb. + to do sth.”句型升格)
It is helpful for me to practise English at the English Corner.
2. I enjoy my school life. (补充具体原因,扩写句子)
I enjoy my school life because it is meaningful and colourful.
Step3 佳作展示评析
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to receive your email. Let me tell you about my school life.
I am a little busy this term. I start my school at 8:00 a.m. and I usually finish my classes at 5:00 p.m. My
school subjects are very interesting. I have Chinese, English, Maths, History and other subjects. English is my favourite subject. There is an English Corner in the school. It is helpful for me to practise English at the English Corner. What's more①, we have a big sports meeting twice a year. I often take part in② the long jump. To my delight, our teachers are kind and my classmates are warm-hearted. They always help me in every possible way③.
I enjoy my school life because④ it is meaningful and colourful.
Yours,
Li Hua
①what's more 引出学校生活的其他方面,使文章更加连贯。
②take part in 为本单元新学表达,做到了学以致用。
③in every possible way 体现了老师和同学对作者无微不至的关怀。
④because 引导原因状语从句,说明作者享受学校生活的原因,丰富文章句式。
本文从课程安排、学校活动、学校人员、对学校生活的感受四方面介绍学校生活,语言流畅,要点齐全,有助于同学们交流学校生活等话题。
答案
1. It is helpful for me to practise English at the English Corner.
2. I enjoy my school life because it is meaningful and colourful.
2. I enjoy my school life because it is meaningful and colourful.
