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一、话题词汇
1. 假期;度假
2. 旅行
3. 厌倦的;烦闷的
4. 忘记;遗忘
5. 数以千计的;成千上万的
6. 在阳光下
7. 转身;翻转
8. 寻找
1. 假期;度假
vacation
2. 旅行
travel/trip
3. 厌倦的;烦闷的
bored
4. 忘记;遗忘
forget
5. 数以千计的;成千上万的
thousands of
6. 在阳光下
in the sun
7. 转身;翻转
turn around
8. 寻找
look for
答案
1. vacation 2. travel/trip 3. bored 4. forget
5. thousands of
6. in the sun 7. turn around 8. look for
5. thousands of
6. in the sun 7. turn around 8. look for
二、佳句仿写
9.【教材原句】Did you go anywhere interesting?
（不定代词+形容词）
→仿写:孩子们总是期待去特别的地方。
10.【教材原句】... I was ready to go on a holiday somewhere. (ready to do sth)
→仿写:我总是愿意在假期探索新的地方。
11.【教材原句】We were so happy that we didn't notice the time. (so... that...)
→仿写:夏令营活动如此有趣,以至于孩子们都不想离开了。
12.【教材原句】But, during dinner, I didn't feel like eating because I felt sick. (feel like doing sth)
→仿写:长假第一天,我想为家人做一顿大餐来庆祝假期。
9.【教材原句】Did you go anywhere interesting?
（不定代词+形容词）
→仿写:孩子们总是期待去特别的地方。
The children always look forward to going somewhere special.
10.【教材原句】... I was ready to go on a holiday somewhere. (ready to do sth)
→仿写:我总是愿意在假期探索新的地方。
I am always ready to explore new places during the holidays.
11.【教材原句】We were so happy that we didn't notice the time. (so... that...)
→仿写:夏令营活动如此有趣,以至于孩子们都不想离开了。
The summer camp activities were so interesting that the kids didn’t want to leave.
12.【教材原句】But, during dinner, I didn't feel like eating because I felt sick. (feel like doing sth)
→仿写:长假第一天,我想为家人做一顿大餐来庆祝假期。
On the first day of the long holiday, I felt like cooking a big meal for my family to celebrate the vacation.
答案
9. The children always look forward to going somewhere special.
10. I am always ready to explore new places during the holidays.
11. The summer camp activities were so interesting that the kids didn’t want to leave.
12. On the first day of the long holiday, I felt like cooking a big meal for my family to celebrate the vacation.
10. I am always ready to explore new places during the holidays.
11. The summer camp activities were so interesting that the kids didn’t want to leave.
12. On the first day of the long holiday, I felt like cooking a big meal for my family to celebrate the vacation.
[2026 山东青岛质检·改编]假如你是李华,你校微信公众号正在开展“暑假游记”的英语征文活动,请你根据下面的信息,用英语写一篇短文,100词左右,介绍你和家人的暑假旅行经历。
要点提示:(1)Where did you go?
(2)What did you do there?
(3)How did you feel?
My Summer Holiday in
第1步 审题目
体 裁:记叙文
时 态:以一般过去时为主
人 称:以第一人称为主
内容要点:地点、所做的事情、感受
第2步 列提纲
本文适宜采用的作文结构为“总—分—总”。
要点提示:(1)Where did you go?
(2)What did you do there?
(3)How did you feel?
My Summer Holiday in
第1步 审题目
体 裁:记叙文
时 态:以一般过去时为主
人 称:以第一人称为主
内容要点:地点、所做的事情、感受
第2步 列提纲
本文适宜采用的作文结构为“总—分—总”。
答案
My Summer Holiday in Qingdao
My summer holiday was really great because I went to Qingdao with my parents this summer.
We stayed there for five days. During the trip, we walked along the beautiful beach and swam in the clear sea. We also tried lots of delicious local seafood, and took hundreds of photos of the sea scenery. We visited the famous Qingdao Olympic Sailing Center too.
I felt so relaxed and happy during this trip. It was one of my best summer experiences, and I hope I can visit this nice city again next summer!
My summer holiday was really great because I went to Qingdao with my parents this summer.
We stayed there for five days. During the trip, we walked along the beautiful beach and swam in the clear sea. We also tried lots of delicious local seafood, and took hundreds of photos of the sea scenery. We visited the famous Qingdao Olympic Sailing Center too.
I felt so relaxed and happy during this trip. It was one of my best summer experiences, and I hope I can visit this nice city again next summer!
解析
这是一篇八年级水平的记叙文写作题，要求以第一人称书写，整体时态以一般过去时为主，词数控制在100词左右，需要完整覆盖三个核心要点：旅行的目的地、旅行期间开展的活动、个人的旅行感受。写作采用总-分-总结构即可：1. 开篇补全标题的地点，直接点明自己和家人的暑假旅行目的地；2. 中间部分具体描述旅行中的各类活动，选用八年级已学的简单词汇和句式表达即可；3. 结尾抒发旅行的真实感受，表达对这次旅行的喜爱和未来重游的期待，避免使用超纲的复杂表达。
