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五、书面表达
观看电影是一种很好的消遣方式，能够让我们在忙碌的生活中放松身心。当然，不同的人喜欢的电影种类不同，同一个人在不同的心情下也会选择不同的电影。你喜欢什么样的电影？请以“Movies that I like”为题写一篇短文表达自己的观点。
写作要求：100词左右，可适当发挥。
观看电影是一种很好的消遣方式，能够让我们在忙碌的生活中放松身心。当然，不同的人喜欢的电影种类不同，同一个人在不同的心情下也会选择不同的电影。你喜欢什么样的电影？请以“Movies that I like”为题写一篇短文表达自己的观点。
写作要求：100词左右，可适当发挥。
答案
写作指导 [审题步骤]
①体裁:本文是一篇议论文,表达个人观点。②时态:主要使用一般现在时,描述个人的喜好和观点。③提示:写作围绕“喜欢的电影类型”展开,可结合心情、电影特点等补充细节,突出个人偏好的原因。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题,说明看电影是常见的消遣方式,并引出自己喜欢的电影类型;第二步,具体阐述喜欢的电影类型,结合电影特点说明喜欢的原因,还可补充不同心情下的电影选择差异;第三步,结尾总结,强调电影对自己生活的积极影响。
[词句积累]
①at first 起初 ②believe in myself 相信我自己
③bring laughter to my life 给我的生活带来笑声
④When I'm free, I love watching movies to relax. (when引导时间状语从句)
⑤No matter what type of movie it is, I appreciate it when it has a good story, interesting characters, and a bit of humour or inspiration. (No matter what 引导让步状语从句;when 引导时间状语从句)
One possible version:
Movies that I Like
When I'm free, I love watching movies to relax. My favourite kind of movies are animated ones, and Kung Fu Panda is my top pick.
In Kung Fu Panda, a regular panda named Po learns kung fu from his master. At first, he doesn't have any special skills, but he keeps practicing hard and never gives up. Finally, he becomes really good at kung fu and beats Tai Lung. This movie is both funny and meaningful. It teaches me to believe in myself, work hard, and never quit.
Besides animated movies, I also like dramas and comedies. Dramas make me think deeply about life, and comedies bring laughter to my life. No matter what type of movie it is, I appreciate it when it has a good story, interesting characters, and a bit of humour or inspiration.
So, when I want to watch a movie, I usually choose something fun, like Kung Fu Panda or any other animated film that makes me feel good.
①体裁:本文是一篇议论文,表达个人观点。②时态:主要使用一般现在时,描述个人的喜好和观点。③提示:写作围绕“喜欢的电影类型”展开,可结合心情、电影特点等补充细节,突出个人偏好的原因。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题,说明看电影是常见的消遣方式,并引出自己喜欢的电影类型;第二步,具体阐述喜欢的电影类型,结合电影特点说明喜欢的原因,还可补充不同心情下的电影选择差异;第三步,结尾总结,强调电影对自己生活的积极影响。
[词句积累]
①at first 起初 ②believe in myself 相信我自己
③bring laughter to my life 给我的生活带来笑声
④When I'm free, I love watching movies to relax. (when引导时间状语从句)
⑤No matter what type of movie it is, I appreciate it when it has a good story, interesting characters, and a bit of humour or inspiration. (No matter what 引导让步状语从句;when 引导时间状语从句)
One possible version:
Movies that I Like
When I'm free, I love watching movies to relax. My favourite kind of movies are animated ones, and Kung Fu Panda is my top pick.
In Kung Fu Panda, a regular panda named Po learns kung fu from his master. At first, he doesn't have any special skills, but he keeps practicing hard and never gives up. Finally, he becomes really good at kung fu and beats Tai Lung. This movie is both funny and meaningful. It teaches me to believe in myself, work hard, and never quit.
Besides animated movies, I also like dramas and comedies. Dramas make me think deeply about life, and comedies bring laughter to my life. No matter what type of movie it is, I appreciate it when it has a good story, interesting characters, and a bit of humour or inspiration.
So, when I want to watch a movie, I usually choose something fun, like Kung Fu Panda or any other animated film that makes me feel good.
解析
【分析】
首先明确本题为英语书面表达题，要求以“Movies that I like”为题写100词左右的短文，表达个人对电影的喜好。解题思路：1. 审题：确定体裁为观点类议论文，时态以一般现在时为主，围绕“喜欢的电影类型”展开；2. 结构：采用“总-分-总”结构，开篇点题说明看电影是放松方式，引出喜欢的电影类型；中间具体阐述喜欢的类型（如动画、喜剧、戏剧），结合具体例子（如《功夫熊猫》）说明原因，还可补充不同心情下的电影选择；结尾总结电影的积极影响；3. 语言：适当运用从句提升表达，控制词数在要求范围内。
【解析】
写作步骤：
1. 开篇：点明空闲时看电影放松，引出最喜欢动画电影及代表作品，如“When I'm free, I love watching movies to relax. My favourite kind of movies are animated ones, and Kung Fu Panda is my top pick.”
2. 中间：介绍《功夫熊猫》的内容，说明其有趣且有意义，传递“相信自己、努力不放弃”的道理；再补充喜欢喜剧和戏剧的原因，如“Besides animated movies, I also like dramas and comedies. Dramas make me think deeply about life, and comedies bring laughter to my life.”
3. 结尾：总结选电影的标准，呼应主题，如“So, when I want to watch a movie, I usually choose something fun that makes me feel good.”
需注意控制词数，运用所学从句，确保内容连贯、符合要求。
【答案】
Movies that I Like
When I'm free, I love watching movies to relax. My favourite kind of movies are animated ones, and Kung Fu Panda is my top pick.
In Kung Fu Panda, a regular panda named Po learns kung fu from his master. At first, he doesn't have any special skills, but he keeps practicing hard and never gives up. Finally, he becomes really good at kung fu and beats Tai Lung. This movie is both funny and meaningful. It teaches me to believe in myself, work hard, and never quit.
Besides animated movies, I also like dramas and comedies. Dramas make me think deeply about life, and comedies bring laughter to my life. No matter what type of movie it is, I appreciate it when it has a good story, interesting characters, and a bit of humour or inspiration.
So, when I want to watch a movie, I usually choose something fun, like Kung Fu Panda or any other animated film that makes me feel good.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、一般现在时、状语从句
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要求，结构清晰，开篇点题，中间举例具体，结尾呼应主题；内容充实，结合具体电影阐述喜好原因，运用多种从句提升语言表达，符合词数要求，是一篇优秀的书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先明确本题为英语书面表达题，要求以“Movies that I like”为题写100词左右的短文，表达个人对电影的喜好。解题思路：1. 审题：确定体裁为观点类议论文，时态以一般现在时为主，围绕“喜欢的电影类型”展开；2. 结构：采用“总-分-总”结构，开篇点题说明看电影是放松方式，引出喜欢的电影类型；中间具体阐述喜欢的类型（如动画、喜剧、戏剧），结合具体例子（如《功夫熊猫》）说明原因，还可补充不同心情下的电影选择；结尾总结电影的积极影响；3. 语言：适当运用从句提升表达，控制词数在要求范围内。
【解析】
写作步骤：
1. 开篇：点明空闲时看电影放松，引出最喜欢动画电影及代表作品，如“When I'm free, I love watching movies to relax. My favourite kind of movies are animated ones, and Kung Fu Panda is my top pick.”
2. 中间：介绍《功夫熊猫》的内容，说明其有趣且有意义，传递“相信自己、努力不放弃”的道理；再补充喜欢喜剧和戏剧的原因，如“Besides animated movies, I also like dramas and comedies. Dramas make me think deeply about life, and comedies bring laughter to my life.”
3. 结尾：总结选电影的标准，呼应主题，如“So, when I want to watch a movie, I usually choose something fun that makes me feel good.”
需注意控制词数，运用所学从句，确保内容连贯、符合要求。
【答案】
Movies that I Like
When I'm free, I love watching movies to relax. My favourite kind of movies are animated ones, and Kung Fu Panda is my top pick.
In Kung Fu Panda, a regular panda named Po learns kung fu from his master. At first, he doesn't have any special skills, but he keeps practicing hard and never gives up. Finally, he becomes really good at kung fu and beats Tai Lung. This movie is both funny and meaningful. It teaches me to believe in myself, work hard, and never quit.
Besides animated movies, I also like dramas and comedies. Dramas make me think deeply about life, and comedies bring laughter to my life. No matter what type of movie it is, I appreciate it when it has a good story, interesting characters, and a bit of humour or inspiration.
So, when I want to watch a movie, I usually choose something fun, like Kung Fu Panda or any other animated film that makes me feel good.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、一般现在时、状语从句
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要求，结构清晰，开篇点题，中间举例具体，结尾呼应主题；内容充实，结合具体电影阐述喜好原因，运用多种从句提升语言表达，符合词数要求，是一篇优秀的书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.6
