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七、书面表达。（共20分）
学校英语社团正在举办征文比赛，请你根据以下提示内容，用英语写一篇题为“The person who has influenced me most”的90词左右的文章。
内容要点:1. 对我影响最大的人是我的妈妈，她四十多岁；
2. 她总是耐心倾听我的问题，并建议我如何解决问题；
3. 作为一名医生，她常说再怎么仔细也不为过。她总是加班，把她的大部分时间都奉献给了工作；
4. 所以，我认为她不仅是一位好妈妈，也是一名好医生；
5. 我希望……(展开合理想象，用2—3句话补充完整)
The person who has influenced me most
学校英语社团正在举办征文比赛，请你根据以下提示内容，用英语写一篇题为“The person who has influenced me most”的90词左右的文章。
内容要点:1. 对我影响最大的人是我的妈妈，她四十多岁；
2. 她总是耐心倾听我的问题，并建议我如何解决问题；
3. 作为一名医生，她常说再怎么仔细也不为过。她总是加班，把她的大部分时间都奉献给了工作；
4. 所以，我认为她不仅是一位好妈妈，也是一名好医生；
5. 我希望……(展开合理想象，用2—3句话补充完整)
The person who has influenced me most
答案
七、One possible version:
The person who has influenced me most
My mother is the person who has influenced me most. She is in her forties. She always listens to my problems patiently. And she advises me how to solve them. As a doctor, she often says she can't be too careful. She often works extra hours. She has devoted most of her time to her work. So I think she is not only a good mother but also a good doctor. I hope I can be a person like her. I also hope she will pay more attention to her own health. She'd better have more time to relax herself.
The person who has influenced me most
My mother is the person who has influenced me most. She is in her forties. She always listens to my problems patiently. And she advises me how to solve them. As a doctor, she often says she can't be too careful. She often works extra hours. She has devoted most of her time to her work. So I think she is not only a good mother but also a good doctor. I hope I can be a person like her. I also hope she will pay more attention to her own health. She'd better have more time to relax herself.
解析
【分析】本题为英语书面表达题，要求以“The person who has influenced me most”为题写一篇90词左右的记叙文。解题思路：①确定核心人物为妈妈，对应内容要点1；②围绕妈妈的双重身份（家人、医生）展开，分别对应要点2、3；③总结妈妈的优秀之处，对应要点4；④补充合理的个人希望，对应要点5，确保所有要点覆盖，语言通顺，符合字数要求。
【解析】根据题目要求，结合内容要点，运用恰当的英语句型组织语言，写出符合要求的短文如下：
The person who has influenced me most
My mother is the person who has influenced me most. She is in her forties. She always listens to my problems patiently. And she advises me how to solve them. As a doctor, she often says she can't be too careful. She often works extra hours. She has devoted most of her time to her work. So I think she is not only a good mother but also a good doctor. I hope I can be a person like her. I also hope she will pay more attention to her own health. She'd better have more time to relax herself.
【答案】The person who has influenced me most
My mother is the person who has influenced me most. She is in her forties. She always listens to my problems patiently. And she advises me how to solve them. As a doctor, she often says she can't be too careful. She often works extra hours. She has devoted most of her time to her work. So I think she is not only a good mother but also a good doctor. I hope I can be a person like her. I also hope she will pay more attention to her own health. She'd better have more time to relax herself.
【知识点】英语书面表达、人物介绍写作、常用英语句型运用
【点评】该作文紧扣主题，完整覆盖所有给定内容要点，语言流畅自然，运用了定语从句、not only...but also...等常用句型，补充内容合理，符合题目要求，是一篇优秀的书面表达范例。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】根据题目要求，结合内容要点，运用恰当的英语句型组织语言，写出符合要求的短文如下：
The person who has influenced me most
My mother is the person who has influenced me most. She is in her forties. She always listens to my problems patiently. And she advises me how to solve them. As a doctor, she often says she can't be too careful. She often works extra hours. She has devoted most of her time to her work. So I think she is not only a good mother but also a good doctor. I hope I can be a person like her. I also hope she will pay more attention to her own health. She'd better have more time to relax herself.
【答案】The person who has influenced me most
My mother is the person who has influenced me most. She is in her forties. She always listens to my problems patiently. And she advises me how to solve them. As a doctor, she often says she can't be too careful. She often works extra hours. She has devoted most of her time to her work. So I think she is not only a good mother but also a good doctor. I hope I can be a person like her. I also hope she will pay more attention to her own health. She'd better have more time to relax herself.
【知识点】英语书面表达、人物介绍写作、常用英语句型运用
【点评】该作文紧扣主题，完整覆盖所有给定内容要点，语言流畅自然，运用了定语从句、not only...but also...等常用句型，补充内容合理，符合题目要求，是一篇优秀的书面表达范例。
【难度系数】0.6
