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It's time for running. Let's go to the sports ground. How can we keep safe?
We should warm up before running. ¹When we are running, we shouldn't pull others' clothes ²or push others. That's dangerous. We ³may hurt others. After running, we shouldn't sit down right now. We should walk slowly and drink a little warm water.
We should always keep safe! It's so important.
名师点评
①运用“When we are running”表达特定场景。
②运用连词or表示否定句中的“和”。
③运用“may + 动词(短语)原形”描述可能造成的后果。
文章运用should/shouldn't多方面描述如何保证自身安全。文章按照“跑前、跑中、跑后”的时间线展开，全面且具体，句式富有变化，且能灵活运用本单元的词汇和句式。
结构分析
高分实战
小明打算去学校新建的图书馆借阅故事书。他应该怎样在图书馆里保证安全？请你结合下面的图片，发挥想象，写一篇关于图书馆内的注意事项的短文，提醒一下他吧！
要求:1. 用should/shouldn't准确表达图片内容,可适当发挥；
2. 语句连贯,条理清晰,不少于50词。
高分范文
It's time for running. Let's go to the sports ground. How can we keep safe?
We should warm up before running. ¹When we are running, we shouldn't pull others' clothes ²or push others. That's dangerous. We ³may hurt others. After running, we shouldn't sit down right now. We should walk slowly and drink a little warm water.
We should always keep safe! It's so important.
名师点评
①运用“When we are running”表达特定场景。
②运用连词or表示否定句中的“和”。
③运用“may + 动词(短语)原形”描述可能造成的后果。
文章运用should/shouldn't多方面描述如何保证自身安全。文章按照“跑前、跑中、跑后”的时间线展开，全面且具体，句式富有变化，且能灵活运用本单元的词汇和句式。
结构分析
高分实战
小明打算去学校新建的图书馆借阅故事书。他应该怎样在图书馆里保证安全？请你结合下面的图片，发挥想象，写一篇关于图书馆内的注意事项的短文，提醒一下他吧！
要求:1. 用should/shouldn't准确表达图片内容,可适当发挥；
2. 语句连贯,条理清晰,不少于50词。
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You should keep safe in the library. How can you keep safe there?
First, you should keep to the right on the stairs. Second, you should wait in line. You shouldn’t push others. You may hurt others. Third, you shouldn’t run in the library. It’s not safe. Lastly, you shouldn’t jump on the chair. It’s so important!
You should keep safe in the library. How can you keep safe there?
First, you should keep to the right on the stairs. Second, you should wait in line. You shouldn’t push others. You may hurt others. Third, you shouldn’t run in the library. It’s not safe. Lastly, you shouldn’t jump on the chair. It’s so important!
