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七、书面表达。
作为中学生，我们在学习和生活中不可避免地会有很多问题。那么，我们应该如何面对并解决这些问题呢？假设你校英文报Growth专栏近期举行了主题为“Growing pains”的征文活动。请你根据以下提示，写一篇英语文章投稿。
写作要点：
1. What's your main problem now?
2. Can you share an experience about how to deal with it?
3. What have you learnt from the experience?
写作要求：
1. 词数100左右(开头已经给出,不计入总词数)；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和学校名称；
3. 根据要点提示,可以适当发挥。
Recently our class have talked about “Growing pains” of teenagers.
作为中学生，我们在学习和生活中不可避免地会有很多问题。那么，我们应该如何面对并解决这些问题呢？假设你校英文报Growth专栏近期举行了主题为“Growing pains”的征文活动。请你根据以下提示，写一篇英语文章投稿。
写作要点：
1. What's your main problem now?
2. Can you share an experience about how to deal with it?
3. What have you learnt from the experience?
写作要求：
1. 词数100左右(开头已经给出,不计入总词数)；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和学校名称；
3. 根据要点提示,可以适当发挥。
Recently our class have talked about “Growing pains” of teenagers.
I have a problem that I'm a little shy and have trouble making friends.
Once, there was a group project in class. I was really nervous about working with others. But I knew I had to face it. I took a deep breath and started to communicate with my classmates. I listened carefully to their ideas and shared my own thoughts too. Slowly, I became more confident and we completed the project successfully.
From this experience, I learned that we should be brave to step out of our comfort zone. When we face difficulties, we should try to overcome them instead of avoiding them. Only in this way can we grow up and become better.
Once, there was a group project in class. I was really nervous about working with others. But I knew I had to face it. I took a deep breath and started to communicate with my classmates. I listened carefully to their ideas and shared my own thoughts too. Slowly, I became more confident and we completed the project successfully.
From this experience, I learned that we should be brave to step out of our comfort zone. When we face difficulties, we should try to overcome them instead of avoiding them. Only in this way can we grow up and become better.
答案
One possible version:
Recently our class have talked about "Growing pains" of teenagers. I have a problem that I'm a little shy and have trouble making friends.
Once, there was a group project in class. I was really nervous about working with others. But I knew I had to face it. I took a deep breath and started to communicate with my classmates. I listened carefully to their ideas and shared my own thoughts too. Slowly, I became more confident and we completed the project successfully.
From this experience, I learned that we should be brave to step out of our comfort zone. When we face difficulties, we should try to overcome them instead of avoiding them. Only in this way can we grow up and become better.
Recently our class have talked about "Growing pains" of teenagers. I have a problem that I'm a little shy and have trouble making friends.
Once, there was a group project in class. I was really nervous about working with others. But I knew I had to face it. I took a deep breath and started to communicate with my classmates. I listened carefully to their ideas and shared my own thoughts too. Slowly, I became more confident and we completed the project successfully.
From this experience, I learned that we should be brave to step out of our comfort zone. When we face difficulties, we should try to overcome them instead of avoiding them. Only in this way can we grow up and become better.
解析
【分析】首先明确本次写作主题为“Growing pains”，需覆盖三个核心要点：1. 自身当前的主要问题；2. 解决该问题的具体经历；3. 从经历中获得的感悟。由于开头已给定，需承接开头内容，先点明自身问题（如害羞、交友困难），再选取具体事件（如班级小组项目）叙述解决过程，最后总结感悟，同时控制词数在100左右，避免真实信息，语言贴合中学生表达。
【解析】写作步骤如下：1. 承接给定开头，明确写出自身的主要问题（对应要点1）；2. 选取具体的学习/生活经历（如小组合作项目），详细描述面对问题时的心理变化及采取的行动（对应要点2）；3. 从经历中提炼出积极面对困难、走出舒适区的感悟，升华主题（对应要点3）；写作时注意语言简洁连贯，符合词数要求，不出现真实人名、校名。
【答案】One possible version:
Recently our class have talked about "Growing pains" of teenagers. I have a problem that I'm a little shy and have trouble making friends.
Once, there was a group project in class. I was really nervous about working with others. But I knew I had to face it. I took a deep breath and started to communicate with my classmates. I listened carefully to their ideas and shared my own thoughts too. Slowly, I became more confident and we completed the project successfully.
From this experience, I learned that we should be brave to step out of our comfort zone. When we face difficulties, we should try to overcome them instead of avoiding them. Only in this way can we grow up and become better.
【知识点】英语书面表达、要点式写作、成长主题表达
【点评】范文紧扣主题，全面覆盖所有写作要点，结构清晰，语言自然流畅，符合中学生的英语水平，传递了积极面对成长烦恼的正确价值观，是一篇符合要求的优秀征文。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】写作步骤如下：1. 承接给定开头，明确写出自身的主要问题（对应要点1）；2. 选取具体的学习/生活经历（如小组合作项目），详细描述面对问题时的心理变化及采取的行动（对应要点2）；3. 从经历中提炼出积极面对困难、走出舒适区的感悟，升华主题（对应要点3）；写作时注意语言简洁连贯，符合词数要求，不出现真实人名、校名。
【答案】One possible version:
Recently our class have talked about "Growing pains" of teenagers. I have a problem that I'm a little shy and have trouble making friends.
Once, there was a group project in class. I was really nervous about working with others. But I knew I had to face it. I took a deep breath and started to communicate with my classmates. I listened carefully to their ideas and shared my own thoughts too. Slowly, I became more confident and we completed the project successfully.
From this experience, I learned that we should be brave to step out of our comfort zone. When we face difficulties, we should try to overcome them instead of avoiding them. Only in this way can we grow up and become better.
【知识点】英语书面表达、要点式写作、成长主题表达
【点评】范文紧扣主题，全面覆盖所有写作要点，结构清晰，语言自然流畅，符合中学生的英语水平，传递了积极面对成长烦恼的正确价值观，是一篇符合要求的优秀征文。
【难度系数】0.6
