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Ⅲ. 书面表达
学校社团将组织一次演讲比赛，邀请同学们上台分享自己最喜欢的节气。你最喜欢的是冬至(Winter Solstice)。请你根据以下提示，写一篇英文演讲稿。
(1) 冬至通常在每年12月21日至23日之间到来。
(2) 它意味着冬季最寒冷日子的到来，我国在这一天白天最短、夜晚最长。
(3) 冬至是家人团聚的重要时刻。
(4) 中国南北方有不同的传统习俗，比如北方吃饺子，南方吃汤圆。
(5) 你对冬至的感受或喜欢这个节气的原因。
参考词汇：汤圆 glutinous rice balls
写作要求：
(1) 词数：80—100。
(2) 题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
(3) 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
Winter Solstice
Winter Solstice is one of the most important solar terms in Chinese culture.
学校社团将组织一次演讲比赛，邀请同学们上台分享自己最喜欢的节气。你最喜欢的是冬至(Winter Solstice)。请你根据以下提示，写一篇英文演讲稿。
(1) 冬至通常在每年12月21日至23日之间到来。
(2) 它意味着冬季最寒冷日子的到来，我国在这一天白天最短、夜晚最长。
(3) 冬至是家人团聚的重要时刻。
(4) 中国南北方有不同的传统习俗，比如北方吃饺子，南方吃汤圆。
(5) 你对冬至的感受或喜欢这个节气的原因。
参考词汇：汤圆 glutinous rice balls
写作要求：
(1) 词数：80—100。
(2) 题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
(3) 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
Winter Solstice
Winter Solstice is one of the most important solar terms in Chinese culture.
It usually falls between December 21st and 23rd each year. It means the arrival of the coldest days of winter. On this day, we have the shortest daytime and the longest nighttime of the year.
It is an important time for family members to get together. Different areas have different customs. People in northern China often eat dumplings, while people in southern China prefer glutinous rice balls.
I like Winter Solstice very much. It not only lets me taste delicious food but also gives me a chance to stay with my family.
It is an important time for family members to get together. Different areas have different customs. People in northern China often eat dumplings, while people in southern China prefer glutinous rice balls.
I like Winter Solstice very much. It not only lets me taste delicious food but also gives me a chance to stay with my family.
答案
Ⅲ. (One possible version)
Winter Solstice
Winter Solstice is one of the most important solar
terms in Chinese culture. It usually falls between
December 21st and 23rd each year. It means the arrival
of the coldest days of winter. On this day, we have the
shortest daytime and the longest nighttime of the year.
It is an important time for family members to get
together. Different areas have different customs. People
in northern China often eat dumplings, while people in
southern China prefer glutinous rice balls.
I like Winter Solstice very much. It not only lets me
taste delicious food but also gives me a chance to stay
with my family.
Winter Solstice
Winter Solstice is one of the most important solar
terms in Chinese culture. It usually falls between
December 21st and 23rd each year. It means the arrival
of the coldest days of winter. On this day, we have the
shortest daytime and the longest nighttime of the year.
It is an important time for family members to get
together. Different areas have different customs. People
in northern China often eat dumplings, while people in
southern China prefer glutinous rice balls.
I like Winter Solstice very much. It not only lets me
taste delicious food but also gives me a chance to stay
with my family.
解析
【分析】
这是一篇主题为介绍冬至节气的校园演讲稿写作，解题时首先要梳理题干给出的全部5个写作要点，按照逻辑顺序排布内容：首先承接已给出的开头，先介绍冬至的公历时间，接着说明它对应的昼夜特点和气候含义，之后过渡到它的人文意义，也就是家人团聚的属性，再介绍南北方不同的饮食习俗，最后补充自己对冬至的感受，全程注意控制词数在80-100之间，选用简单准确的表达，保证行文连贯符合演讲稿的口语化风格，不要遗漏任何给定要点。
【解析】
1. 承接开篇句，首先对应要点1，用常用表达It usually falls between December 21st and 23rd each year清晰说明冬至的时间范围。
2. 接下来对应要点2，顺承介绍冬至的自然属性：说明它意味着冬季最冷日子到来，同时点明我国冬至当天昼最短夜最长的特点。
3. 之后对应要点3，过渡到人文层面，说明冬至是家人团聚的重要时刻。
4. 对应要点4，用while作对比连接词，分别介绍北方吃饺子、南方吃汤圆的不同习俗，正确使用题干给出的参考词汇glutinous rice balls。
5. 最后对应要点5，补充自己喜欢冬至的原因，既可以吃到美食又能陪伴家人，收尾自然，整体内容连贯，词数符合要求。
【答案】
Winter Solstice
Winter Solstice is one of the most important solar terms in Chinese culture. It usually falls between December 21st and 23rd each year. It means the arrival of the coldest days of winter. On this day, we have the shortest daytime and the longest nighttime of the year.
It is an important time for family members to get together. Different areas have different customs. People in northern China often eat dumplings, while people in southern China prefer glutinous rice balls.
I like Winter Solstice very much. It not only lets me taste delicious food but also gives me a chance to stay with my family.
【知识点】
英语演讲稿写作，节气相关表达，连词while用法
【点评】
本篇范文完整覆盖了题干给出的全部5个要点，逻辑顺承自然，用词准确地道，用while清晰对比南北方的习俗差异，整体篇幅符合80-100词的要求，语气贴合校园演讲的场景，没有冗余内容，是非常规范的考场作文范例。同学们写作时要注意不要遗漏要点，正确使用题干给出的参考词汇，避免出现基础语法错误。
【难度系数】
0.7
这是一篇主题为介绍冬至节气的校园演讲稿写作，解题时首先要梳理题干给出的全部5个写作要点，按照逻辑顺序排布内容：首先承接已给出的开头，先介绍冬至的公历时间，接着说明它对应的昼夜特点和气候含义，之后过渡到它的人文意义，也就是家人团聚的属性，再介绍南北方不同的饮食习俗，最后补充自己对冬至的感受，全程注意控制词数在80-100之间，选用简单准确的表达，保证行文连贯符合演讲稿的口语化风格，不要遗漏任何给定要点。
【解析】
1. 承接开篇句，首先对应要点1，用常用表达It usually falls between December 21st and 23rd each year清晰说明冬至的时间范围。
2. 接下来对应要点2，顺承介绍冬至的自然属性：说明它意味着冬季最冷日子到来，同时点明我国冬至当天昼最短夜最长的特点。
3. 之后对应要点3，过渡到人文层面，说明冬至是家人团聚的重要时刻。
4. 对应要点4，用while作对比连接词，分别介绍北方吃饺子、南方吃汤圆的不同习俗，正确使用题干给出的参考词汇glutinous rice balls。
5. 最后对应要点5，补充自己喜欢冬至的原因，既可以吃到美食又能陪伴家人，收尾自然，整体内容连贯，词数符合要求。
【答案】
Winter Solstice
Winter Solstice is one of the most important solar terms in Chinese culture. It usually falls between December 21st and 23rd each year. It means the arrival of the coldest days of winter. On this day, we have the shortest daytime and the longest nighttime of the year.
It is an important time for family members to get together. Different areas have different customs. People in northern China often eat dumplings, while people in southern China prefer glutinous rice balls.
I like Winter Solstice very much. It not only lets me taste delicious food but also gives me a chance to stay with my family.
【知识点】
英语演讲稿写作，节气相关表达，连词while用法
【点评】
本篇范文完整覆盖了题干给出的全部5个要点，逻辑顺承自然，用词准确地道，用while清晰对比南北方的习俗差异，整体篇幅符合80-100词的要求，语气贴合校园演讲的场景，没有冗余内容，是非常规范的考场作文范例。同学们写作时要注意不要遗漏要点，正确使用题干给出的参考词汇，避免出现基础语法错误。
【难度系数】
0.7
