XⅢ. Writing. 家是温暖的港湾，家人是幸福的源泉。写作社发起了以“My father”为题的写作小练笔比赛。假如你是Sandra，请你根据所给信息介绍一下你的爸爸。(10分)
要求:1. 不少于5个句子。2. 条理清晰，句子连贯通顺，标点正确，书写工整规范。3. 体现提示的信息，可适当发挥想象。
Name: Daniel Born: August
Job: a doctor Hobby: run in the park
Hero: Zhong Nanshan
Precious thing: an old watch

【参考范文】 My father
This is my father. His name is Daniel. He was born in August. He is a doctor in a hospital. He works hard every day. He is fit and strong. He likes to run in the park. Zhong Nanshan is his hero. His precious thing is an old watch. It's a gift from me. I love my dad. He is my hero!

【分析】
本次写作主题为“My father”，核心是介绍父亲，需包含题目给出的所有关键信息：姓名Daniel、出生于八月、职业医生、爱好公园跑步、偶像钟南山、珍贵物品旧手表。解题思路为：先引出介绍对象，再按“基本信息→职业→爱好→偶像→珍贵物品→情感表达”的顺序组织内容，确保句子连贯、数量达标，可适当添加细节让内容更饱满。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 开头用“This is my father.”引出介绍对象；
2. 依次介绍基本信息：“His name is Daniel. He was born in August.”；
3. 说明职业及补充细节：“He is a doctor in a hospital. He works hard every day.”；
4. 描述爱好：“He likes to run in the park.”；
5. 写出偶像和珍贵物品：“Zhong Nanshan is his hero. His precious thing is an old watch. It's a gift from me.”；
6. 结尾表达情感：“I love my dad. He is my hero!”，满足不少于5个句子的要求，所有信息点均覆盖。
【答案】
My father
This is my father. His name is Daniel. He was born in August. He is a doctor in a hospital. He works hard every day. He is fit and strong. He likes to run in the park. Zhong Nanshan is his hero. His precious thing is an old watch. It's a gift from me. I love my dad. He is my hero!
【知识点】
英语人物介绍写作、英语句子连贯、英语词汇运用
【点评】
该范文完整覆盖题目要求的所有信息点，结构清晰、逻辑连贯，添加了合理细节（旧手表是“我”送的），符合不少于5个句子的要求，是人物介绍类写作的优秀范例，适合学生模仿学习。
【难度系数】
0.3