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(A)
成长本就是不断迎接挑战、突破自我的旅程。在学习与生活中，我们都难免遇到需要突破自身局限的经历。请你结合自身经历，根据以下问题提示，写一篇关于挑战自我的英语小短文。
(13分)
要求:1. 语句通顺,语法正确;2. 不少于50词。
提示:1. What was your experience? 2. What did you gain(获得) from this experience?
3. How did you feel?
成长本就是不断迎接挑战、突破自我的旅程。在学习与生活中，我们都难免遇到需要突破自身局限的经历。请你结合自身经历，根据以下问题提示，写一篇关于挑战自我的英语小短文。
(13分)
要求:1. 语句通顺,语法正确;2. 不少于50词。
提示:1. What was your experience? 2. What did you gain(获得) from this experience?
3. How did you feel?
Last term, our school held a speech contest. I was always shy and afraid of speaking in front of others, but I really wanted to have a try.
At first, I was so worried that I could not choose a topic. With my teacher's help, I finally picked one. Every day after school, I practised hard at home. Then the big day came. My heart was going fast. But when I stood on the stage, I told myself to be brave.
I didn't win first place in the end, but I finished my speech well. This experience taught me that facing my fears can make me stronger.
I was proud of myself for trying my best.
答案
Last term, our school held a speech contest. I was always shy and afraid of speaking in front of others, but I really wanted to have a try.
At first, I was so worried that I could not choose a topic. With my teacher's help, I finally picked one. Every day after school, I practised hard at home. Then the big day came. My heart was going fast. But when I stood on the stage, I told myself to be brave.
I didn't win first place in the end, but I finished my speech well. This experience taught me that facing my fears can make me stronger. I was proud of myself for trying my best.
At first, I was so worried that I could not choose a topic. With my teacher's help, I finally picked one. Every day after school, I practised hard at home. Then the big day came. My heart was going fast. But when I stood on the stage, I told myself to be brave.
I didn't win first place in the end, but I finished my speech well. This experience taught me that facing my fears can make me stronger. I was proud of myself for trying my best.
解析
【分析】本题要求围绕“挑战自我”主题，结合自身经历写英语小短文，需紧扣三个提示问题展开：明确自身经历、阐述经历带来的收获、表达当时的感受。写作时要先确定具体的个人经历（如参加演讲比赛），再描述克服自身不足、努力准备的过程，最后点明收获与感受，同时保证语句通顺、语法正确，字数不少于50词。
【解析】写作时，首先点明具体经历（如参加学校演讲比赛），说明自身原本的不足（害羞不敢当众发言）；接着描述准备过程（在老师帮助下确定主题，每日刻苦练习）；然后写比赛时的状态（紧张但自我鼓励，勇敢站上舞台）；最后点明收获（学会面对恐惧，变得更强大，为自己尽力尝试而骄傲），确保内容紧扣提示，符合语法规范与字数要求。
【答案】Last term, our school held a speech contest. I was always shy and afraid of speaking in front of others, but I really wanted to have a try.
At first, I was so worried that I could not choose a topic. With my teacher's help, I finally picked one. Every day after school, I practised hard at home. Then the big day came. My heart was going fast. But when I stood on the stage, I told myself to be brave.
I didn't win first place in the end, but I finished my speech well. This experience taught me that facing my fears can make me stronger. I was proud of myself for trying my best.
【知识点】英语话题作文、记叙文写作
【点评】本文紧扣“挑战自我”主题，结合真实的个人经历，清晰回应了三个提示问题，语句通顺、语法正确，达到字数要求，准确表达了经历、收获与感受，是一篇符合要求的优秀短文。
【难度系数】0.7
【解析】写作时，首先点明具体经历（如参加学校演讲比赛），说明自身原本的不足（害羞不敢当众发言）；接着描述准备过程（在老师帮助下确定主题，每日刻苦练习）；然后写比赛时的状态（紧张但自我鼓励，勇敢站上舞台）；最后点明收获（学会面对恐惧，变得更强大，为自己尽力尝试而骄傲），确保内容紧扣提示，符合语法规范与字数要求。
【答案】Last term, our school held a speech contest. I was always shy and afraid of speaking in front of others, but I really wanted to have a try.
At first, I was so worried that I could not choose a topic. With my teacher's help, I finally picked one. Every day after school, I practised hard at home. Then the big day came. My heart was going fast. But when I stood on the stage, I told myself to be brave.
I didn't win first place in the end, but I finished my speech well. This experience taught me that facing my fears can make me stronger. I was proud of myself for trying my best.
【知识点】英语话题作文、记叙文写作
【点评】本文紧扣“挑战自我”主题，结合真实的个人经历，清晰回应了三个提示问题，语句通顺、语法正确，达到字数要求，准确表达了经历、收获与感受，是一篇符合要求的优秀短文。
【难度系数】0.7
(B)
每个人都有自己的人生楷模。我的人生楷模是我的妈妈。她是一位知识渊博的(learned)语文教师，她关爱每个学生，学生们都非常喜欢她。她也是学校的模范教师(model teacher)。妈妈无微不至地(in every possible way)关心着我，希望我成为一个诚实、勇敢、有担当(responsible)的男子汉。请以“My role model”为题，根据提示用英语写一篇小短文。(13 分)
要求:1. 内容需包含所提供的所有信息，可适当发挥；2. 书写认真，句子通顺；3. 词数 50词左右(已给内容不计入总词数)。
My role model
Everyone has his or her own role model. My role model is
(C)
目前，学校中存在部分学生考试作弊的现象。某英文杂志就此向学生征文，标题为“My opinion on cheating in exams”。请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇征文稿。(14 分)
要求:1. 短文必须包含提示的所有内容要求，可适当发挥；2. 语法正确，语句通顺，书写规范；3. 词数 60 词左右(已给内容不计入总词数)。
每个人都有自己的人生楷模。我的人生楷模是我的妈妈。她是一位知识渊博的(learned)语文教师，她关爱每个学生，学生们都非常喜欢她。她也是学校的模范教师(model teacher)。妈妈无微不至地(in every possible way)关心着我，希望我成为一个诚实、勇敢、有担当(responsible)的男子汉。请以“My role model”为题，根据提示用英语写一篇小短文。(13 分)
要求:1. 内容需包含所提供的所有信息，可适当发挥；2. 书写认真，句子通顺；3. 词数 50词左右(已给内容不计入总词数)。
My role model
Everyone has his or her own role model. My role model is
my mother. She is a learned Chinese teacher who cares about every student.
All her students love her, and she is a model teacher at school. At home, my mother takes care of me in every possible way.
She hopes I can grow up to be a real man—honest, brave and responsible.
I really admire her and will try my best to follow her example.
(C)
目前，学校中存在部分学生考试作弊的现象。某英文杂志就此向学生征文，标题为“My opinion on cheating in exams”。请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇征文稿。(14 分)
要求:1. 短文必须包含提示的所有内容要求，可适当发挥；2. 语法正确，语句通顺，书写规范；3. 词数 60 词左右(已给内容不计入总词数)。
答案
B.
My role model
Everyone has his or her own role model. My role model is my mother. She is a learned Chinese teacher who cares about every student. All her students love her, and she is a model teacher at school. At home, my mother takes care of me in every possible way. She hopes I can grow up to be a real man—honest, brave and responsible. I really admire her and will try my best to follow her example.
C.
My opinion on cheating in exams
It's known to us all that some students cheat in exams at school. As students, we often take exams at school, but sometimes we have too many exams that are too difficult for us. Besides, some of us are lazy and don't work hard at our lessons. So when taking exams, some students cheat to get better results to please their parents and teachers.
I think it is wrong to cheat in exams, because it breaks the school rules. We should be honest and try to get good results by studying hard instead of cheating. What's more, we should improve our study habits and get ready for exams.
My role model
Everyone has his or her own role model. My role model is my mother. She is a learned Chinese teacher who cares about every student. All her students love her, and she is a model teacher at school. At home, my mother takes care of me in every possible way. She hopes I can grow up to be a real man—honest, brave and responsible. I really admire her and will try my best to follow her example.
C.
My opinion on cheating in exams
It's known to us all that some students cheat in exams at school. As students, we often take exams at school, but sometimes we have too many exams that are too difficult for us. Besides, some of us are lazy and don't work hard at our lessons. So when taking exams, some students cheat to get better results to please their parents and teachers.
I think it is wrong to cheat in exams, because it breaks the school rules. We should be honest and try to get good results by studying hard instead of cheating. What's more, we should improve our study habits and get ready for exams.
解析
【分析】
B题需围绕“My role model”主题，涵盖所有提示信息：妈妈是博学的语文教师、关爱学生、是学校模范教师、无微不至关心自己、希望自己成为诚实勇敢有担当的男子汉，可适当添加对妈妈的敬佩之情，注意词数50左右、语句通顺；C题围绕“My opinion on cheating in exams”主题，按“现象-原因-观点”结构，先点明考试作弊现象，再分析作弊原因，最后表达正确观点，覆盖所有提示，词数60左右、语法正确。
【解析】
B题按要求组织语言，涵盖所有要点并适当发挥；C题按“现象-原因-观点”结构组织语言，覆盖所有提示内容。
【答案】
My role model
Everyone has his or her own role model. My role model is my mother. She is a learned Chinese teacher who cares about every student. All her students love her, and she is a model teacher at school. At home, my mother takes care of me in every possible way. She hopes I can grow up to be a real man—honest, brave and responsible. I really admire her and will try my best to follow her example.
My opinion on cheating in exams
It's known to us all that some students cheat in exams at school. As students, we often take exams at school, but sometimes we have too many exams that are too difficult for us. Besides, some of us are lazy and don't work hard at our lessons. So when taking exams, some students cheat to get better results to please their parents and teachers.
I think it is wrong to cheat in exams, because it breaks the school rules. We should be honest and try to get good results by studying hard instead of cheating. What's more, we should improve our study habits and get ready for exams.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作，英语词汇运用，英语句子表达
【点评】
这两道题是初中英语常见写作题型，分别考察人物描写与观点表达能力，要求覆盖所有给定要点、符合词数要求，注重语言准确性与通顺性，能有效考查学生英语综合运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
B题需围绕“My role model”主题，涵盖所有提示信息：妈妈是博学的语文教师、关爱学生、是学校模范教师、无微不至关心自己、希望自己成为诚实勇敢有担当的男子汉，可适当添加对妈妈的敬佩之情，注意词数50左右、语句通顺；C题围绕“My opinion on cheating in exams”主题，按“现象-原因-观点”结构，先点明考试作弊现象，再分析作弊原因，最后表达正确观点，覆盖所有提示，词数60左右、语法正确。
【解析】
B题按要求组织语言，涵盖所有要点并适当发挥；C题按“现象-原因-观点”结构组织语言，覆盖所有提示内容。
【答案】
My role model
Everyone has his or her own role model. My role model is my mother. She is a learned Chinese teacher who cares about every student. All her students love her, and she is a model teacher at school. At home, my mother takes care of me in every possible way. She hopes I can grow up to be a real man—honest, brave and responsible. I really admire her and will try my best to follow her example.
My opinion on cheating in exams
It's known to us all that some students cheat in exams at school. As students, we often take exams at school, but sometimes we have too many exams that are too difficult for us. Besides, some of us are lazy and don't work hard at our lessons. So when taking exams, some students cheat to get better results to please their parents and teachers.
I think it is wrong to cheat in exams, because it breaks the school rules. We should be honest and try to get good results by studying hard instead of cheating. What's more, we should improve our study habits and get ready for exams.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作，英语词汇运用，英语句子表达
【点评】
这两道题是初中英语常见写作题型，分别考察人物描写与观点表达能力，要求覆盖所有给定要点、符合词数要求，注重语言准确性与通顺性，能有效考查学生英语综合运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
