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任务五 书面表达
（一）写作任务
学校 DIY 俱乐部正在开展 DIY 作品比赛。假如你是李华,请根据提示要求,用英语将你上周日为妈妈亲手制作生日礼物的经历写成一篇短文,向俱乐部投稿。
1. DIY 的原因；
2. DIY 的过程及感受；
3. 结果。
（二）写作语料
1. I decide to decorate...
2. I made a mistake when I...
3. ... helped me with the work.
4. We had fun working together.
5. Everything was fine.
6. I felt so glad because...
（三）谋篇布局
Part 1:起因
my mum's birthday；make her a music box
Part 2:过程
preparing a small box, tape and some other materials；something is wrong；buy a rose and stick it
Part 3:结果
open the music box；hear the birthday song；deeply moved
（四）习作欣赏
It was my mum's birthday last Sunday. I decided to make her a music box as a surprise.
After preparing a small box, tape and some other materials, I began to make it. It took me over three hours to finish it. When I was making the music box, something went wrong. I was so careless as to make the cover untidy, so I had to buy a rose and stick it on the cover.
After opening the music box, Mum heard the birthday song. It was my first time to make a present for Mum by myself. Mum was happy, and I was even happier.
（五）我的习作
（一）写作任务
学校 DIY 俱乐部正在开展 DIY 作品比赛。假如你是李华,请根据提示要求,用英语将你上周日为妈妈亲手制作生日礼物的经历写成一篇短文,向俱乐部投稿。
1. DIY 的原因；
2. DIY 的过程及感受；
3. 结果。
（二）写作语料
1. I decide to decorate...
2. I made a mistake when I...
3. ... helped me with the work.
4. We had fun working together.
5. Everything was fine.
6. I felt so glad because...
（三）谋篇布局
Part 1:起因
my mum's birthday；make her a music box
Part 2:过程
preparing a small box, tape and some other materials；something is wrong；buy a rose and stick it
Part 3:结果
open the music box；hear the birthday song；deeply moved
（四）习作欣赏
It was my mum's birthday last Sunday. I decided to make her a music box as a surprise.
After preparing a small box, tape and some other materials, I began to make it. It took me over three hours to finish it. When I was making the music box, something went wrong. I was so careless as to make the cover untidy, so I had to buy a rose and stick it on the cover.
After opening the music box, Mum heard the birthday song. It was my first time to make a present for Mum by myself. Mum was happy, and I was even happier.
（五）我的习作
答案
Last Sunday was my mum's birthday. Instead of buying a common present from the store, I decided to make her a special music box by myself to give her a big surprise.
I first got a small box, tape and all other necessary materials ready. I decided to decorate the box with colourful paper at the very beginning. Unluckily, I made a mistake when I stuck the paper to the box cover, the surface of the cover became very untidy. Just then, my dad passed by and he helped me with the work. We had fun working together, and later we bought a nice rose and stuck it on the messy part of the cover. Soon everything was fine, my DIY music box was finished at last.
When Mum received the gift, she opened the music box slowly, and the warm birthday song came out right away. She was deeply moved and held me tightly. I felt so glad because the little DIY present carried all my true love for my mum.
I first got a small box, tape and all other necessary materials ready. I decided to decorate the box with colourful paper at the very beginning. Unluckily, I made a mistake when I stuck the paper to the box cover, the surface of the cover became very untidy. Just then, my dad passed by and he helped me with the work. We had fun working together, and later we bought a nice rose and stuck it on the messy part of the cover. Soon everything was fine, my DIY music box was finished at last.
When Mum received the gift, she opened the music box slowly, and the warm birthday song came out right away. She was deeply moved and held me tightly. I felt so glad because the little DIY present carried all my true love for my mum.
解析
这是一篇主题为DIY经历的记叙文写作题，要求以李华的身份介绍自己上周日为妈妈制作生日礼物的经历，写作注意要点：1. 以第一人称叙事，整体时态以一般过去时为主；2. 完整覆盖DIY的原因、DIY的过程与感受、最终结果三个核心要求，合理使用题干给出的指定写作语料，表达贴合八年级上册DIY单元的知识点，语句通顺逻辑连贯即可。
