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九、实验班原创 书面表达25分
同学们对《愚公移山》的故事一定有很深的印象吧?请根据以下提示词语,以“The Story of Yu Gong”为题,把愚公移山的故事用英语简要叙述出来,并谈一谈你从故事中学到了什么。80词左右。文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词语:move the mountains, start digging, Zhi Sou, it is impossible..., sons and grandsons, continue, the story teaches us...
The Story of Yu Gong
Once there lived an old man named Yu Gong.
同学们对《愚公移山》的故事一定有很深的印象吧?请根据以下提示词语,以“The Story of Yu Gong”为题,把愚公移山的故事用英语简要叙述出来,并谈一谈你从故事中学到了什么。80词左右。文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词语:move the mountains, start digging, Zhi Sou, it is impossible..., sons and grandsons, continue, the story teaches us...
The Story of Yu Gong
Once there lived an old man named Yu Gong.
Two high mountains in front of his house made it difficult for his family to reach the other side. So Yu Gong decided to move the mountains.
Although old, he started digging at the mountains with his family day after day. A man named Zhi Sou laughed at him and said it was impossible. Yu Gong answered that even if he could not finish, his sons and grandsons would continue, and the mountains would eventually be moved.
The story teaches us that nothing is impossible with a strong will. We must not give up.
答案
九、One possible version:
The Story of Yu Gong
Once there lived an old man named Yu Gong. Two high
mountains in front of his house made it difficult for his family
to reach the other side. So Yu Gong decided to move the
mountains.
Although old, he started digging at the mountains with
his family day after day. A man named Zhi Sou laughed at him
过去分词短语作后置定
语,修饰其前的名词。
and said it was impossible. Yu Gong answered that even if he
could not finish, his sons and grandsons would continue, and
the mountains would eventually be moved.
The story teaches us that nothing is impossible with a
strong will. We must not give up.
The Story of Yu Gong
Once there lived an old man named Yu Gong. Two high
mountains in front of his house made it difficult for his family
to reach the other side. So Yu Gong decided to move the
mountains.
Although old, he started digging at the mountains with
his family day after day. A man named Zhi Sou laughed at him
过去分词短语作后置定
语,修饰其前的名词。
and said it was impossible. Yu Gong answered that even if he
could not finish, his sons and grandsons would continue, and
the mountains would eventually be moved.
The story teaches us that nothing is impossible with a
strong will. We must not give up.
解析
【分析】
本题要求以“The Story of Yu Gong”为题写英语短文，需完成两部分内容：一是根据提示词简要叙述愚公移山的故事，二是阐述从故事中学到的道理。解题思路为：1. 承接给定开头，说明愚公移山的原因（家前有大山阻碍出行）；2. 运用提示词“start digging”“Zhi Sou”“it is impossible”“sons and grandsons”“continue”叙述故事发展：愚公带家人挖山，智叟嘲笑说不可能，愚公表示子孙会继续挖；3. 用提示词“the story teaches us”点明故事蕴含的道理，控制字数在80词左右，确保内容连贯、结构完整。
【解析】
写作时需紧扣题目要求和提示词，分内容连贯完成：
1. 承接开头说明移山缘由：Two high mountains in front of his house made it difficult for his family to reach the other side, so Yu Gong decided to move the mountains.
2. 叙述故事经过：Although old, he started digging at the mountains with his family day after day. A man named Zhi Sou laughed at him and said it was impossible. Yu Gong answered that even if he could not finish, his sons and grandsons would continue.
3. 阐述感悟：The story teaches us that nothing is impossible with a strong will. We must not give up.
【答案】
One possible version:
The Story of Yu Gong
Once there lived an old man named Yu Gong. Two high mountains in front of his house made it difficult for his family to reach the other side. So Yu Gong decided to move the mountains.
Although old, he started digging at the mountains with his family day after day. A man named Zhi Sou laughed at him and said it was impossible. Yu Gong answered that even if he could not finish, his sons and grandsons would continue, and the mountains would eventually be moved.
The story teaches us that nothing is impossible with a strong will. We must not give up.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、英语记叙文写作、提示语运用
【点评】
本题结合经典寓言故事，以书面表达形式考查学生的英语综合运用能力，既要求准确运用提示词叙述故事，又需提炼故事内涵阐述感悟，兼顾语言基础与理解能力，是一道优质的综合考查题。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求以“The Story of Yu Gong”为题写英语短文，需完成两部分内容：一是根据提示词简要叙述愚公移山的故事，二是阐述从故事中学到的道理。解题思路为：1. 承接给定开头，说明愚公移山的原因（家前有大山阻碍出行）；2. 运用提示词“start digging”“Zhi Sou”“it is impossible”“sons and grandsons”“continue”叙述故事发展：愚公带家人挖山，智叟嘲笑说不可能，愚公表示子孙会继续挖；3. 用提示词“the story teaches us”点明故事蕴含的道理，控制字数在80词左右，确保内容连贯、结构完整。
【解析】
写作时需紧扣题目要求和提示词，分内容连贯完成：
1. 承接开头说明移山缘由：Two high mountains in front of his house made it difficult for his family to reach the other side, so Yu Gong decided to move the mountains.
2. 叙述故事经过：Although old, he started digging at the mountains with his family day after day. A man named Zhi Sou laughed at him and said it was impossible. Yu Gong answered that even if he could not finish, his sons and grandsons would continue.
3. 阐述感悟：The story teaches us that nothing is impossible with a strong will. We must not give up.
【答案】
One possible version:
The Story of Yu Gong
Once there lived an old man named Yu Gong. Two high mountains in front of his house made it difficult for his family to reach the other side. So Yu Gong decided to move the mountains.
Although old, he started digging at the mountains with his family day after day. A man named Zhi Sou laughed at him and said it was impossible. Yu Gong answered that even if he could not finish, his sons and grandsons would continue, and the mountains would eventually be moved.
The story teaches us that nothing is impossible with a strong will. We must not give up.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、英语记叙文写作、提示语运用
【点评】
本题结合经典寓言故事，以书面表达形式考查学生的英语综合运用能力，既要求准确运用提示词叙述故事，又需提炼故事内涵阐述感悟，兼顾语言基础与理解能力，是一道优质的综合考查题。
【难度系数】
0.6
