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假期生活可以让我们身心放松、健康快乐,还可以让我们学习技能、了解社会。假如你是学校英语社团的一名成员,将参加社团举行的主题为"Colourful holidays"的征文活动,请根据下图提示,选择其中三个方面,用英语写一篇短文。
注意:1.要点齐全,可适当发挥;2.文中请勿提及真实的校名及人名;3.词数90左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Colourful Holidays
Nowadays, holidays play an important part in our lives. How can we make our holidays more colourful?
假期生活可以让我们身心放松、健康快乐,还可以让我们学习技能、了解社会。假如你是学校英语社团的一名成员,将参加社团举行的主题为"Colourful holidays"的征文活动,请根据下图提示,选择其中三个方面,用英语写一篇短文。
注意:1.要点齐全,可适当发挥;2.文中请勿提及真实的校名及人名;3.词数90左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Colourful Holidays
Nowadays, holidays play an important part in our lives. How can we make our holidays more colourful?
答案
One possible version:
Colourful Holidays
Nowadays, holidays play an important part in our lives. How can we make our holidays more colourful?
First, we can take part in different voluntary activities in our community, such as helping the old people in the neighbourhood buy something or cleaning the public places. Second, we can have a day out with our family or friends because enjoying beautiful landscapes makes us relaxed and understand the beauty of our earth. Third, we can go to the museums to learn more about Chinese crafts. Besides, we can learn to make something for ourselves or our friends and family.
In a word, we can do a lot of activities to make our holidays more colourful and meaningful.
Colourful Holidays
Nowadays, holidays play an important part in our lives. How can we make our holidays more colourful?
First, we can take part in different voluntary activities in our community, such as helping the old people in the neighbourhood buy something or cleaning the public places. Second, we can have a day out with our family or friends because enjoying beautiful landscapes makes us relaxed and understand the beauty of our earth. Third, we can go to the museums to learn more about Chinese crafts. Besides, we can learn to make something for ourselves or our friends and family.
In a word, we can do a lot of activities to make our holidays more colourful and meaningful.
解析
【分析】这是一篇英语话题征文，主题为“Colourful Holidays”。解题思路：首先审题，明确需从图片提示的多个方面中选三个，围绕“让假期丰富多彩”展开写作；接着确定选择的要点，结合提示内容适当发挥；再按照“开头引出问题—中间分述具体活动—结尾总结”的结构组织语言，注意词数要求，不提及真实信息，用合适连接词让行文连贯。
【解析】1. 审题：确定主题和要求，开头已给出，需从图片选三个方面写短文，词数90左右。2. 选点：选取“友好社区（帮助他人）”“自然景观（欣赏地球之美）”“中国手工艺品（了解中国工艺）”三个方向。3. 行文：开头承接问题，用First、Second、Third等连接词分述具体活动，如社区志愿帮老人、外出赏自然、学中国手工艺品，最后总结假期活动的意义，确保语句通顺符合要求。
【答案】Colourful Holidays
Nowadays, holidays play an important part in our lives. How can we make our holidays more colourful?
First, we can take part in different voluntary activities in our community, such as helping the old people in the neighbourhood buy something or cleaning the public places. Second, we can have a day out with our family or friends because enjoying beautiful landscapes makes us relaxed and understand the beauty of our earth. Third, we can go to the museums to learn more about Chinese crafts. Besides, we can learn to make something for ourselves or our friends and family.
In a word, we can do a lot of activities to make our holidays more colourful and meaningful.
【知识点】英语话题作文；英语应用文写作；要点式写作
【点评】本文紧扣主题，选取三个不同提示方向，内容充实，结构清晰，连接词使用恰当，语言准确，符合征文要求，完成了写作任务。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】1. 审题：确定主题和要求，开头已给出，需从图片选三个方面写短文，词数90左右。2. 选点：选取“友好社区（帮助他人）”“自然景观（欣赏地球之美）”“中国手工艺品（了解中国工艺）”三个方向。3. 行文：开头承接问题，用First、Second、Third等连接词分述具体活动，如社区志愿帮老人、外出赏自然、学中国手工艺品，最后总结假期活动的意义，确保语句通顺符合要求。
【答案】Colourful Holidays
Nowadays, holidays play an important part in our lives. How can we make our holidays more colourful?
First, we can take part in different voluntary activities in our community, such as helping the old people in the neighbourhood buy something or cleaning the public places. Second, we can have a day out with our family or friends because enjoying beautiful landscapes makes us relaxed and understand the beauty of our earth. Third, we can go to the museums to learn more about Chinese crafts. Besides, we can learn to make something for ourselves or our friends and family.
In a word, we can do a lot of activities to make our holidays more colourful and meaningful.
【知识点】英语话题作文；英语应用文写作；要点式写作
【点评】本文紧扣主题，选取三个不同提示方向，内容充实，结构清晰，连接词使用恰当，语言准确，符合征文要求，完成了写作任务。
【难度系数】0.5
