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五、书面表达
假设学校英语社团以“My Friend and I”为题向学生征稿，请根据以下思维导图的内容提示写一篇100词左右的短文，介绍你和你的朋友。
注意：1. 文中应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯。
2. 文中不得出现考生真实姓名、校名等信息。
My Friend and I
假设学校英语社团以“My Friend and I”为题向学生征稿，请根据以下思维导图的内容提示写一篇100词左右的短文，介绍你和你的朋友。
注意：1. 文中应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯。
2. 文中不得出现考生真实姓名、校名等信息。
My Friend and I
答案
One possible version:
My Friend and I
I have a good friend. We share many things in common, but we also have our differences.
We are both 14 years old. My friend is tall and has short hair. He wears glasses and looks very smart. I'm of medium height with curly hair. We both like to dress casually. My friend is outgoing and loves to make friends. He is always cheerful and enjoys the life of the party. I am more quiet and like to read books. But we both have a sense of humour and like to make each other laugh. My friend loves playing football, while I enjoy playing basketball. We often play together after school. Although we don't talk much about our future plans, I know my friend wants to be a football coach, and I dream of becoming a professional basketball player.
No matter what happens, we will always be good friends and support each other.
My Friend and I
I have a good friend. We share many things in common, but we also have our differences.
We are both 14 years old. My friend is tall and has short hair. He wears glasses and looks very smart. I'm of medium height with curly hair. We both like to dress casually. My friend is outgoing and loves to make friends. He is always cheerful and enjoys the life of the party. I am more quiet and like to read books. But we both have a sense of humour and like to make each other laugh. My friend loves playing football, while I enjoy playing basketball. We often play together after school. Although we don't talk much about our future plans, I know my friend wants to be a football coach, and I dream of becoming a professional basketball player.
No matter what happens, we will always be good friends and support each other.
解析
【分析】本题为英语书面表达题，要求以“My Friend and I”为题，结合思维导图的四个核心要点（个人信息、爱好、外貌性格、未来计划）完成短文写作。解题思路：1. 开篇点明“我和朋友”的主题，说明彼此有共同点也有差异；2. 围绕思维导图的四个模块，分别对比“我”与朋友的相关内容，适当补充细节让文章连贯；3. 结尾升华主题，表达友谊的意义，注意控制字数在100词左右，避免出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
【解析】首先开篇引出“我有一个好朋友，我们有共同点也有不同点”；接着介绍个人信息（年龄）、外貌特征（朋友高、短发戴眼镜，“我”中等身高、卷发）；然后描述性格（朋友外向开朗，“我”安静爱读书，共同点是有幽默感）；再写爱好（朋友爱踢足球，“我”爱打篮球，常一起活动）；之后提及未来计划（朋友想当足球教练，“我”想当职业篮球运动员）；最后总结表达会一直是好朋友，互相支持。
【答案】One possible version:
My Friend and I
I have a good friend. We share many things in common, but we also have our differences.
We are both 14 years old. My friend is tall and has short hair. He wears glasses and looks very smart. I'm of medium height with curly hair. We both like to dress casually. My friend is outgoing and loves to make friends. He is always cheerful and enjoys the life of the party. I am more quiet and like to read books. But we both have a sense of humour and like to make each other laugh. My friend loves playing football, while I enjoy playing basketball. We often play together after school. Although we don't talk much about our future plans, I know my friend wants to be a football coach, and I dream of becoming a professional basketball player.
No matter what happens, we will always be good friends and support each other.
【知识点】英语书面表达、话题写作、思维导图写作
【点评】本题结合思维导图考查英语写作能力，要求学生准确涵盖所有要点，合理对比人物异同，适当拓展内容使文章连贯，符合字数要求，能有效考查学生的语言组织与表达能力，是一道中等难度的写作题。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】首先开篇引出“我有一个好朋友，我们有共同点也有不同点”；接着介绍个人信息（年龄）、外貌特征（朋友高、短发戴眼镜，“我”中等身高、卷发）；然后描述性格（朋友外向开朗，“我”安静爱读书，共同点是有幽默感）；再写爱好（朋友爱踢足球，“我”爱打篮球，常一起活动）；之后提及未来计划（朋友想当足球教练，“我”想当职业篮球运动员）；最后总结表达会一直是好朋友，互相支持。
【答案】One possible version:
My Friend and I
I have a good friend. We share many things in common, but we also have our differences.
We are both 14 years old. My friend is tall and has short hair. He wears glasses and looks very smart. I'm of medium height with curly hair. We both like to dress casually. My friend is outgoing and loves to make friends. He is always cheerful and enjoys the life of the party. I am more quiet and like to read books. But we both have a sense of humour and like to make each other laugh. My friend loves playing football, while I enjoy playing basketball. We often play together after school. Although we don't talk much about our future plans, I know my friend wants to be a football coach, and I dream of becoming a professional basketball player.
No matter what happens, we will always be good friends and support each other.
【知识点】英语书面表达、话题写作、思维导图写作
【点评】本题结合思维导图考查英语写作能力，要求学生准确涵盖所有要点，合理对比人物异同，适当拓展内容使文章连贯，符合字数要求，能有效考查学生的语言组织与表达能力，是一道中等难度的写作题。
【难度系数】0.5
