十三、Think and write. 书面表达。(10分)
在小学六年中,相信你有了许多变化与成长。请你从外貌、爱好、能力等方面来写一写,50词左右,以下句型供参考。
句型:Before I was... Now, I am... I liked... I like...
I couldn't... I could...
How time flies! Six years ago, I
在小学六年中,相信你有了许多变化与成长。请你从外貌、爱好、能力等方面来写一写,50词左右,以下句型供参考。
句型:Before I was... Now, I am... I liked... I like...
I couldn't... I could...
How time flies! Six years ago, I
答案
One possible version:
How time flies! Six years ago, I was short and thin. Now, I am tall and strong. I often play sports with my classmates after class. I liked playing badminton before, but now I like playing basketball. At first, I couldn't run fast to pass the ball. After a few days, I could do it well. Exercise makes me become stronger and taller. We should do more exercise.
How time flies! Six years ago, I was short and thin. Now, I am tall and strong. I often play sports with my classmates after class. I liked playing badminton before, but now I like playing basketball. At first, I couldn't run fast to pass the ball. After a few days, I could do it well. Exercise makes me become stronger and taller. We should do more exercise.
解析
【分析】
本题要求围绕“小学六年的成长变化”进行书面表达,需从外貌、爱好、能力等维度,运用给定的对比句型(Before/Now, I liked/I like, I couldn't/I could),控制在50词左右。解题思路为:1. 用“How time flies!”开头引出成长主题;2. 选取外貌、爱好、能力三个方面,分别用“过去状态+现在状态”的对比结构组织内容;3. 用简单句表达,可添加简短感悟,符合小学英语的表达水平。
【解析】
1. 开头点题:How time flies! Six years ago, I was short and thin.
2. 外貌对比:Now, I am tall and strong.
3. 爱好对比:I liked playing badminton before, but now I like playing basketball.
4. 能力对比:At first, I couldn't run fast to pass the ball. After a few days, I could do it well.
5. 补充感悟:Exercise makes me become stronger and taller. We should do more exercise.
【答案】
One possible version:
How time flies! Six years ago, I was short and thin. Now, I am tall and strong. I often play sports with my classmates after class. I liked playing badminton before, but now I like playing basketball. At first, I couldn't run fast to pass the ball. After a few days, I could do it well. Exercise makes me become stronger and taller. We should do more exercise.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、时态对比运用
【点评】
本题是小学英语常见的成长话题写作,给定句型降低了写作难度,考查学生对过去与现在状态的对比表达能力,贴近学生生活实际,能有效锻炼语言组织与表达能力。
【难度系数】
0.7
本题要求围绕“小学六年的成长变化”进行书面表达,需从外貌、爱好、能力等维度,运用给定的对比句型(Before/Now, I liked/I like, I couldn't/I could),控制在50词左右。解题思路为:1. 用“How time flies!”开头引出成长主题;2. 选取外貌、爱好、能力三个方面,分别用“过去状态+现在状态”的对比结构组织内容;3. 用简单句表达,可添加简短感悟,符合小学英语的表达水平。
【解析】
1. 开头点题:How time flies! Six years ago, I was short and thin.
2. 外貌对比:Now, I am tall and strong.
3. 爱好对比:I liked playing badminton before, but now I like playing basketball.
4. 能力对比:At first, I couldn't run fast to pass the ball. After a few days, I could do it well.
5. 补充感悟:Exercise makes me become stronger and taller. We should do more exercise.
【答案】
One possible version:
How time flies! Six years ago, I was short and thin. Now, I am tall and strong. I often play sports with my classmates after class. I liked playing badminton before, but now I like playing basketball. At first, I couldn't run fast to pass the ball. After a few days, I could do it well. Exercise makes me become stronger and taller. We should do more exercise.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、时态对比运用
【点评】
本题是小学英语常见的成长话题写作,给定句型降低了写作难度,考查学生对过去与现在状态的对比表达能力,贴近学生生活实际,能有效锻炼语言组织与表达能力。
【难度系数】
0.7
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