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七、书面表达(本题有1小题,共计20分)(真题·台州玉环)
76. 假设你是李华,在过去的一学年里,你一定经历了很多,获得了不同的成长。近期你校英语社团正在举办以“My School Year Journey(我的学年历程)”为主题的征文活动,请你回顾过去一学年的经历,根据以下提示,任选两个方面,写一篇英语短文投稿。
Book(s) I have read: • what book(s) • what I learnt • ...
Place(s) I have been to: • which place(s) • what I experienced • ...
Volunteer work I have done: • what work • how I felt • ...
Special thing(s) I have had: • what thing(s) • why it is/they are special • ...
要求:(1)短文必须包括任意两方面的所有提示内容,并适当拓展;(2)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息;(3)100词左右;(4)短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
The past school year has been a colourful journey for me.
76. 假设你是李华,在过去的一学年里,你一定经历了很多,获得了不同的成长。近期你校英语社团正在举办以“My School Year Journey(我的学年历程)”为主题的征文活动,请你回顾过去一学年的经历,根据以下提示,任选两个方面,写一篇英语短文投稿。
Book(s) I have read: • what book(s) • what I learnt • ...
Place(s) I have been to: • which place(s) • what I experienced • ...
Volunteer work I have done: • what work • how I felt • ...
Special thing(s) I have had: • what thing(s) • why it is/they are special • ...
要求:(1)短文必须包括任意两方面的所有提示内容,并适当拓展;(2)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息;(3)100词左右;(4)短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
The past school year has been a colourful journey for me.
答案
Possible version 1:
The past school year has been a colourful journey for me. Let me tell you something about it.
Firstly, I have read many interesting books, including Harry Potter. It is about a brave young boy and his friends' adventures at a magical school. From the book, I got to know something about bravery and friendship.
Besides, I have done a lot of volunteer work. In July, I went to the old people's home with my classmates. I talked with the old people and helped them clean their rooms. Seeing their smiles, I got a strong feeling of satisfaction. It made me realize that small acts of kindness can bring great warmth to others.
As I step into the new school year, I hope to read more good books and do more volunteer work to make my life more fulfilling.
(128 words)
Possible version 2:
The past school year has been a colourful journey for me. Let me tell you something about it.
Firstly, I have been to many wonderful places and learnt a lot. Among them, the most interesting place I have ever been to is the film museum. I loved the old movie cameras there and learnt about the inventions that led to colour movies.
Besides, the most special thing I have had this year is some seashells. I got them during a family trip to the beach. The shells always bring back sweet memories and remind me of the fun times on the beach.
As I step into the new school year, I hope I will visit more places that inspire me and collect more special things that bring joy and knowledge.
(119 words)
写作指导
【话题点拨】
本文为谈论个人经历与成长的记叙文,围绕学生在校园生活中的经历(阅读、志愿、活动等)及收获展开,描述过去的经历多采用一般过去时。
【提纲演示】
开头:概述过去一年的经历 The past school year has been a colourful journey for me.
正文:具体描述经历及收获 books/places/volunteer work/special things(choose two)
结尾:对新学年的期待 As I step into the new school year, I hope I will ...
The past school year has been a colourful journey for me. Let me tell you something about it.
Firstly, I have read many interesting books, including Harry Potter. It is about a brave young boy and his friends' adventures at a magical school. From the book, I got to know something about bravery and friendship.
Besides, I have done a lot of volunteer work. In July, I went to the old people's home with my classmates. I talked with the old people and helped them clean their rooms. Seeing their smiles, I got a strong feeling of satisfaction. It made me realize that small acts of kindness can bring great warmth to others.
As I step into the new school year, I hope to read more good books and do more volunteer work to make my life more fulfilling.
(128 words)
Possible version 2:
The past school year has been a colourful journey for me. Let me tell you something about it.
Firstly, I have been to many wonderful places and learnt a lot. Among them, the most interesting place I have ever been to is the film museum. I loved the old movie cameras there and learnt about the inventions that led to colour movies.
Besides, the most special thing I have had this year is some seashells. I got them during a family trip to the beach. The shells always bring back sweet memories and remind me of the fun times on the beach.
As I step into the new school year, I hope I will visit more places that inspire me and collect more special things that bring joy and knowledge.
(119 words)
写作指导
【话题点拨】
本文为谈论个人经历与成长的记叙文,围绕学生在校园生活中的经历(阅读、志愿、活动等)及收获展开,描述过去的经历多采用一般过去时。
【提纲演示】
开头:概述过去一年的经历 The past school year has been a colourful journey for me.
正文:具体描述经历及收获 books/places/volunteer work/special things(choose two)
结尾:对新学年的期待 As I step into the new school year, I hope I will ...
解析
【分析】
本题要求以“My School Year Journey”为主题写英语短文，需从四个提示方向中任选两个，涵盖各方向的提示内容并适当拓展，开头已给出，字数约100词。解题思路：1. 确定选取的两个方向（如书籍和志愿工作）；2. 每个方向需包含核心提示要素：书籍要说明书名、学到的内容；志愿工作要说明具体内容、个人感受；3. 结构安排：开头承接给定句引出分享内容，正文分两点具体描述，结尾表达新学年期待；4. 注意时态（描述经历用一般过去时，涉及收获用现在完成时），避免真实信息，控制字数。
【解析】
1. 开头：承接给定句“The past school year has been a colourful journey for me.”，添加“Let me tell you something about it.”引出下文。
2. 正文第一点（书籍）：选取《哈利波特》，说明“我读了很多有趣的书，包括《哈利波特》，它是关于勇敢男孩和朋友在魔法学校的冒险，从中学到了勇敢和友谊”。
3. 正文第二点（志愿工作）：选取敬老院志愿，说明“我做了很多志愿工作，七月和同学去敬老院，陪老人聊天、打扫房间，看到他们的笑容，我有强烈的满足感，意识到小善举能带来温暖”。
4. 结尾：表达新学年期待，“进入新学年，我希望读更多好书、做更多志愿，让生活更充实”。
5. 调整语言确保流畅，字数符合要求，无真实信息。
【答案】
The past school year has been a colourful journey for me. Let me tell you something about it.
Firstly, I have read many interesting books, including Harry Potter. It is about a brave young boy and his friends' adventures at a magical school. From the book, I got to know something about bravery and friendship.
Besides, I have done a lot of volunteer work. In July, I went to the old people's home with my classmates. I talked with the old people and helped them clean their rooms. Seeing their smiles, I got a strong feeling of satisfaction. It made me realize that small acts of kindness can bring great warmth to others.
As I step into the new school year, I hope to read more good books and do more volunteer work to make my life more fulfilling.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、记叙文写作、时态运用
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，选取读书和志愿工作两个方向，完整涵盖各提示内容，适当拓展细节，结构清晰，语言流畅，符合征文要求，是一篇优秀的习作。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题要求以“My School Year Journey”为主题写英语短文，需从四个提示方向中任选两个，涵盖各方向的提示内容并适当拓展，开头已给出，字数约100词。解题思路：1. 确定选取的两个方向（如书籍和志愿工作）；2. 每个方向需包含核心提示要素：书籍要说明书名、学到的内容；志愿工作要说明具体内容、个人感受；3. 结构安排：开头承接给定句引出分享内容，正文分两点具体描述，结尾表达新学年期待；4. 注意时态（描述经历用一般过去时，涉及收获用现在完成时），避免真实信息，控制字数。
【解析】
1. 开头：承接给定句“The past school year has been a colourful journey for me.”，添加“Let me tell you something about it.”引出下文。
2. 正文第一点（书籍）：选取《哈利波特》，说明“我读了很多有趣的书，包括《哈利波特》，它是关于勇敢男孩和朋友在魔法学校的冒险，从中学到了勇敢和友谊”。
3. 正文第二点（志愿工作）：选取敬老院志愿，说明“我做了很多志愿工作，七月和同学去敬老院，陪老人聊天、打扫房间，看到他们的笑容，我有强烈的满足感，意识到小善举能带来温暖”。
4. 结尾：表达新学年期待，“进入新学年，我希望读更多好书、做更多志愿，让生活更充实”。
5. 调整语言确保流畅，字数符合要求，无真实信息。
【答案】
The past school year has been a colourful journey for me. Let me tell you something about it.
Firstly, I have read many interesting books, including Harry Potter. It is about a brave young boy and his friends' adventures at a magical school. From the book, I got to know something about bravery and friendship.
Besides, I have done a lot of volunteer work. In July, I went to the old people's home with my classmates. I talked with the old people and helped them clean their rooms. Seeing their smiles, I got a strong feeling of satisfaction. It made me realize that small acts of kindness can bring great warmth to others.
As I step into the new school year, I hope to read more good books and do more volunteer work to make my life more fulfilling.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、记叙文写作、时态运用
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，选取读书和志愿工作两个方向，完整涵盖各提示内容，适当拓展细节，结构清晰，语言流畅，符合征文要求，是一篇优秀的习作。
【难度系数】
0.5
