登录
识别出错
答案
Period 8 Assessment & Further study(单元主题写作)
One possible version:
Dear Mike,
How is everything going? I'm glad to hear from you. In your email, you asked about my favourite music. Well, I love pop music best because it has strong rhythms and always makes me energetic.
Let me share a story with you. Last month, I felt very sad after failing an exam. I turned on my music player and listened to You Raise Me Up. The song touched my heart deeply and made me believe in myself again. I felt much better and studied harder.
To me, music is like a true friend. It brings me comfort and hope whenever I need it. What kind of music do you like? I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
One possible version:
Dear Mike,
How is everything going? I'm glad to hear from you. In your email, you asked about my favourite music. Well, I love pop music best because it has strong rhythms and always makes me energetic.
Let me share a story with you. Last month, I felt very sad after failing an exam. I turned on my music player and listened to You Raise Me Up. The song touched my heart deeply and made me believe in myself again. I felt much better and studied harder.
To me, music is like a true friend. It brings me comfort and hope whenever I need it. What kind of music do you like? I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】本题为英语单元主题写作题，任务是李华给Mike写邮件介绍自己最喜欢的音乐，需明确写作思路：先确定书信格式，再规划内容结构（问候回应→说明喜欢的音乐及原因→分享相关经历→表达感悟并询问对方喜好），最后确保语言通顺、内容完整。
【解析】1. 遵循英语书信格式：开头用Dear Mike称呼，结尾用Yours, Li Hua署名；2. 内容安排：①开篇问候并回应来信，点明最喜欢流行音乐的原因（有强节奏、让人精力充沛）；②分享具体事例：上月考试失利时，听《You Raise Me Up》重拾信心，学习更努力；③表达对音乐的感悟（像朋友，带来安慰和希望）；④询问对方喜好，期待回复。
【答案】Dear Mike,
How is everything going? I'm glad to hear from you. In your email, you asked about my favourite music. Well, I love pop music best because it has strong rhythms and always makes me energetic.
Let me share a story with you. Last month, I felt very sad after failing an exam. I turned on my music player and listened to You Raise Me Up. The song touched my heart deeply and made me believe in myself again. I felt much better and studied harder.
To me, music is like a true friend. It brings me comfort and hope whenever I need it. What kind of music do you like? I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语书信写作、音乐话题表达、单元主题写作
【点评】本题围绕音乐话题考查英语书信写作能力，要求内容连贯、情感真挚，既检验学生对书信格式的掌握，又考查话题相关词汇和语句的运用，符合单元主题写作的考查目标。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】1. 遵循英语书信格式：开头用Dear Mike称呼，结尾用Yours, Li Hua署名；2. 内容安排：①开篇问候并回应来信，点明最喜欢流行音乐的原因（有强节奏、让人精力充沛）；②分享具体事例：上月考试失利时，听《You Raise Me Up》重拾信心，学习更努力；③表达对音乐的感悟（像朋友，带来安慰和希望）；④询问对方喜好，期待回复。
【答案】Dear Mike,
How is everything going? I'm glad to hear from you. In your email, you asked about my favourite music. Well, I love pop music best because it has strong rhythms and always makes me energetic.
Let me share a story with you. Last month, I felt very sad after failing an exam. I turned on my music player and listened to You Raise Me Up. The song touched my heart deeply and made me believe in myself again. I felt much better and studied harder.
To me, music is like a true friend. It brings me comfort and hope whenever I need it. What kind of music do you like? I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语书信写作、音乐话题表达、单元主题写作
【点评】本题围绕音乐话题考查英语书信写作能力，要求内容连贯、情感真挚，既检验学生对书信格式的掌握，又考查话题相关词汇和语句的运用，符合单元主题写作的考查目标。
【难度系数】0.5
