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Ⅷ. 书面表达。(共1小题,计10分)
86. 假如 Celine 即将搬家到 Garden Community,可却对这个社区不甚了解。请根据下面这幅宣传海报中的内容,帮助社区中心的服务人员给她写一封信。要点如下：
注意:
(1)内容涵盖所有要点,适当发挥,全文连贯通顺；
(2)词数 100 左右(征文开头及结尾已给出,不计入总词数)；
(3)文中不得提及有关考生和教师个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
Dear Celine,
Thank you for coming to our community.
We hope you can enjoy your future life here every day.
Yours sincerely,
Garden Community
86. 假如 Celine 即将搬家到 Garden Community,可却对这个社区不甚了解。请根据下面这幅宣传海报中的内容,帮助社区中心的服务人员给她写一封信。要点如下：
注意:
(1)内容涵盖所有要点,适当发挥,全文连贯通顺；
(2)词数 100 左右(征文开头及结尾已给出,不计入总词数)；
(3)文中不得提及有关考生和教师个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
Dear Celine,
Thank you for coming to our community.
Life in Garden Community is comfortable and easy. Firstly, you'll enjoy fresh air and green trees here, and there's a beautiful park nearby for walks or exercise. Though it's peaceful, it's not far from the city centre—just 30 minutes by car. Our community has 20 tall buildings. Wanda Shopping Mall and SG Supermarket meet your daily needs. You can also find nice restaurants, a school, and a theatre around. What makes us special is the warm neighbourhood. Neighbours often meet at the community centre, sharing different skills—like cooking or fixing things. Whenever you have problems, everyone is ready to help.
We hope you can enjoy your future life here every day.
Yours sincerely,
Garden Community
答案
86.【范文】
Dear Celine,
Thank you for coming to our community. Life in Garden Community is comfortable and easy. Firstly, you’ll enjoy fresh air and green trees here, and there’s a beautiful park nearby for walks or exercise. Though it’s peaceful, it’s not far from the city centre—just 30 minutes by car.
Our community has 20 tall buildings. Wanda Shopping Mall and SG Supermarket meet your daily needs. You can also find nice restaurants, a school, and a theatre around.
What makes us special is the warm neighbourhood. Neighbours often meet at the community centre, sharing different skills—like cooking or fixing things. Whenever you have problems, everyone is ready to help.
We hope you can enjoy your future life here every day.
Yours sincerely,
Garden Community
Dear Celine,
Thank you for coming to our community. Life in Garden Community is comfortable and easy. Firstly, you’ll enjoy fresh air and green trees here, and there’s a beautiful park nearby for walks or exercise. Though it’s peaceful, it’s not far from the city centre—just 30 minutes by car.
Our community has 20 tall buildings. Wanda Shopping Mall and SG Supermarket meet your daily needs. You can also find nice restaurants, a school, and a theatre around.
What makes us special is the warm neighbourhood. Neighbours often meet at the community centre, sharing different skills—like cooking or fixing things. Whenever you have problems, everyone is ready to help.
We hope you can enjoy your future life here every day.
Yours sincerely,
Garden Community
解析
【分析】
本题要求以Garden Community服务人员的身份给即将搬家的Celine写一封信，需结合海报内容介绍社区情况。解题思路：1. 先提取海报所有核心要点：环境（新鲜空气、绿树、附近公园）、地理位置（距市中心仅30分钟车程）、配套设施（20栋高楼、万达商场、SG超市、餐馆、学校、剧院）、邻里关系（社区中心见面、分享技能、互助）；2. 以书信格式写作，开头已给出，中间用衔接词串联要点，适当添加合理发挥，确保内容连贯、词数符合要求；3. 结尾用给定句子收尾，语气友好亲切。
【解析】
写作时，先承接开头点明社区生活舒适，接着依次介绍环境优势（新鲜空气、绿树、附近公园可散步锻炼）、地理位置便利（离市中心近，车程30分钟）；再说明社区配套设施：20栋高楼内有各类场所，周边有商场、超市满足日常需求，还有餐馆、学校、剧院；最后突出邻里特色：邻居常聚在社区中心，分享技能、帮忙解决问题，让Celine感受到温暖，整体语句通顺，涵盖所有要点，符合书信语气。
【答案】
Dear Celine,
Thank you for coming to our community. Life in Garden Community is comfortable and easy. Firstly, you’ll enjoy fresh air and green trees here, and there’s a beautiful park nearby for walks or exercise. Though it’s peaceful, it’s not far from the city centre—just 30 minutes by car.
Our community has 20 tall buildings. Wanda Shopping Mall and SG Supermarket meet your daily needs. You can also find nice restaurants, a school, and a theatre around.
What makes us special is the warm neighbourhood. Neighbours often meet at the community centre, sharing different skills—like cooking or fixing things. Whenever you have problems, everyone is ready to help.
We hope you can enjoy your future life here every day.
Yours sincerely,
Garden Community
【知识点】
英语书信写作、信息提取整合、语句连贯表达
【点评】
本题是初中英语书面表达常规题型，考查学生从海报提取信息并组织成通顺书信的能力，要求涵盖所有要点，适当发挥，符合书信格式，贴近生活实际，难度适中，能有效考查学生的语言运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求以Garden Community服务人员的身份给即将搬家的Celine写一封信，需结合海报内容介绍社区情况。解题思路：1. 先提取海报所有核心要点：环境（新鲜空气、绿树、附近公园）、地理位置（距市中心仅30分钟车程）、配套设施（20栋高楼、万达商场、SG超市、餐馆、学校、剧院）、邻里关系（社区中心见面、分享技能、互助）；2. 以书信格式写作，开头已给出，中间用衔接词串联要点，适当添加合理发挥，确保内容连贯、词数符合要求；3. 结尾用给定句子收尾，语气友好亲切。
【解析】
写作时，先承接开头点明社区生活舒适，接着依次介绍环境优势（新鲜空气、绿树、附近公园可散步锻炼）、地理位置便利（离市中心近，车程30分钟）；再说明社区配套设施：20栋高楼内有各类场所，周边有商场、超市满足日常需求，还有餐馆、学校、剧院；最后突出邻里特色：邻居常聚在社区中心，分享技能、帮忙解决问题，让Celine感受到温暖，整体语句通顺，涵盖所有要点，符合书信语气。
【答案】
Dear Celine,
Thank you for coming to our community. Life in Garden Community is comfortable and easy. Firstly, you’ll enjoy fresh air and green trees here, and there’s a beautiful park nearby for walks or exercise. Though it’s peaceful, it’s not far from the city centre—just 30 minutes by car.
Our community has 20 tall buildings. Wanda Shopping Mall and SG Supermarket meet your daily needs. You can also find nice restaurants, a school, and a theatre around.
What makes us special is the warm neighbourhood. Neighbours often meet at the community centre, sharing different skills—like cooking or fixing things. Whenever you have problems, everyone is ready to help.
We hope you can enjoy your future life here every day.
Yours sincerely,
Garden Community
【知识点】
英语书信写作、信息提取整合、语句连贯表达
【点评】
本题是初中英语书面表达常规题型，考查学生从海报提取信息并组织成通顺书信的能力，要求涵盖所有要点，适当发挥，符合书信格式，贴近生活实际，难度适中，能有效考查学生的语言运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
