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三、教材佳句仿写·核心句式训练
1. 教材原句: Many people think it's a festival to remember the great poet, Qu Yuan.
仿写:他们认为这是一个庆祝春天到来的假期。
2. 教材原句: On this day, people often go mountain climbing and enjoy the natural beauty of autumn.
仿写:在那一天,人们经常去街上欣赏五颜六色的灯笼。
3. 教材原句: During the holiday, people visit relatives and friends and send each other good wishes.
仿写:在节日期间,人们聚在一起,互相分享美味的食物。
4. 教材原句: My favourite festival is the Spring Festival.
仿写:我最喜欢的节日是端午节。
1. 教材原句: Many people think it's a festival to remember the great poet, Qu Yuan.
仿写:他们认为这是一个庆祝春天到来的假期。
They think it's a holiday to celebrate the coming of spring.
2. 教材原句: On this day, people often go mountain climbing and enjoy the natural beauty of autumn.
仿写:在那一天,人们经常去街上欣赏五颜六色的灯笼。
On that day, people often go to the streets to enjoy the colourful lanterns.
3. 教材原句: During the holiday, people visit relatives and friends and send each other good wishes.
仿写:在节日期间,人们聚在一起,互相分享美味的食物。
During the festival, people get together and share delicious food with each other.
4. 教材原句: My favourite festival is the Spring Festival.
仿写:我最喜欢的节日是端午节。
My favourite festival is the Dragon Boat Festival.
答案
1. They think it's a holiday to celebrate the coming of spring.
2. On that day, people often go to the streets to enjoy the colourful lanterns.
3. During the festival, people get together and share delicious food with each other.
4. My favourite festival is the Dragon Boat Festival.
2. On that day, people often go to the streets to enjoy the colourful lanterns.
3. During the festival, people get together and share delicious food with each other.
4. My favourite festival is the Dragon Boat Festival.
四、典例剖析·主题写作行文指导
人称：第三人称为主 时态：一般现在时
主题：人与社会
你的英国笔友Peter对中国传统节日很感兴趣，想要了解元宵节（The Lantern Festival）。请根据所给信息，写一篇短文介绍元宵节。短文必须包括所有提示内容，并适当发挥。词数不少于70。
1. 这个节日通常会在二月或三月。
2. 节日前几天，制作兔子灯或者花灯；节日当天家庭成员共聚吃汤圆，晚饭后出门赏月、赏灯、猜灯谜。
3. ……
提示词：汤圆 tangyuan；灯谜 lantern riddles
人称：第三人称为主 时态：一般现在时
主题：人与社会
你的英国笔友Peter对中国传统节日很感兴趣，想要了解元宵节（The Lantern Festival）。请根据所给信息，写一篇短文介绍元宵节。短文必须包括所有提示内容，并适当发挥。词数不少于70。
1. 这个节日通常会在二月或三月。
2. 节日前几天，制作兔子灯或者花灯；节日当天家庭成员共聚吃汤圆，晚饭后出门赏月、赏灯、猜灯谜。
3. ……
提示词：汤圆 tangyuan；灯谜 lantern riddles
答案
The Lantern Festival is one of the most important traditional festivals in China. It usually comes in February or March.
A few days before the festival, many families make rabbit lanterns or different beautiful flower lanterns by themselves. On the day of the festival, all family members get together and have a big dinner. They usually eat tangyuan, a kind of sweet rice dumpling, for the meal. After dinner, people go out to enjoy the bright full moon, watch all kinds of lovely lanterns and play interesting lantern riddles. If you get the right answer of a riddle, you can get a small nice gift.
People all have a great time on that day, and the festival shows their good wishes for a happy life.
A few days before the festival, many families make rabbit lanterns or different beautiful flower lanterns by themselves. On the day of the festival, all family members get together and have a big dinner. They usually eat tangyuan, a kind of sweet rice dumpling, for the meal. After dinner, people go out to enjoy the bright full moon, watch all kinds of lovely lanterns and play interesting lantern riddles. If you get the right answer of a riddle, you can get a small nice gift.
People all have a great time on that day, and the festival shows their good wishes for a happy life.
解析
1. 审题要点：本文要求以第三人称为主、使用一般现在时介绍中国元宵节，需覆盖全部提示信息，词数不少于70词，属于介绍节日的主题说明文。
2. 行文思路：
① 开篇点题：先说明元宵节是中国的重要传统节日，点明它通常在每年二月或者三月到来；
② 主体按时间顺序展开：先介绍节日前几天的活动——人们制作兔子灯或者各式花灯，再描述节日当天的习俗：全家团聚吃汤圆，晚饭后一同出门赏月、赏灯、猜灯谜，可适当补充猜对灯谜可获得小奖品这类符合生活实际的细节；
③ 结尾补充节日意义：说明这个节日承载着人们对美好生活的期盼，大家都能在节日里收获快乐。
3. 注意事项：正确使用给出的提示词tangyuan和lantern riddles，选用七年级已学的基础词汇和句式，保证时态统一为一般现在时，避免语法错误。
2. 行文思路：
① 开篇点题：先说明元宵节是中国的重要传统节日，点明它通常在每年二月或者三月到来；
② 主体按时间顺序展开：先介绍节日前几天的活动——人们制作兔子灯或者各式花灯，再描述节日当天的习俗：全家团聚吃汤圆，晚饭后一同出门赏月、赏灯、猜灯谜，可适当补充猜对灯谜可获得小奖品这类符合生活实际的细节；
③ 结尾补充节日意义：说明这个节日承载着人们对美好生活的期盼，大家都能在节日里收获快乐。
3. 注意事项：正确使用给出的提示词tangyuan和lantern riddles，选用七年级已学的基础词汇和句式，保证时态统一为一般现在时，避免语法错误。
Step 1 谋篇布局指导
第一段:点明主题,谈论元宵节
I'd like to tell you something about...
第二段:庆祝节日的主要活动
①There are quite a lot of traditions for this day.
②On this festival, we Chinese often...
③It is happy for us to get together with our family.
第三段:介绍元宵节的意义
①As a traditional festival, it has a special meaning in China.
②It is the first day when the moon is full in the Chinese lunar calendar.
Step 2 高阶表达应用
We get together with our family and we're happy.
(用it作形式主语的结构升格)
Step 3 佳作展示评析
The Lantern Festival
I'd like to tell you something about the Lantern Festival. The Lantern Festival is one of the most important festivals① in China. It is usually in February or March.
There are quite a lot of traditions for this day. On this festival, we Chinese often make rabbit or flower lanterns and eat tangyuan. After dinner, we go out to guess riddles, and enjoy the moon and lanterns. It is happy for us to get together with our family.②
The Lantern Festival has a special meaning in China. It is the first day when the moon is full in the Chinese lunar calendar.
①“one of the + 形容词的最高级 + 名词复数”,是初中阶段经常使用的短语。
②“It is + adj. + for sb. to do sth.”为高级句型,提升了文章的写作档次。应注意其与“It is + adj. + of sb. to do sth.”的区别。
本篇范文条理清晰、层次分明,开篇点明了介绍的对象——元宵节,接着重点介绍了元宵节的活动,最后说明了元宵节的意义,升华了文章的主旨。
第一段:点明主题,谈论元宵节
I'd like to tell you something about...
第二段:庆祝节日的主要活动
①There are quite a lot of traditions for this day.
②On this festival, we Chinese often...
③It is happy for us to get together with our family.
第三段:介绍元宵节的意义
①As a traditional festival, it has a special meaning in China.
②It is the first day when the moon is full in the Chinese lunar calendar.
Step 2 高阶表达应用
We get together with our family and we're happy.
(用it作形式主语的结构升格)
Step 3 佳作展示评析
The Lantern Festival
I'd like to tell you something about the Lantern Festival. The Lantern Festival is one of the most important festivals① in China. It is usually in February or March.
There are quite a lot of traditions for this day. On this festival, we Chinese often make rabbit or flower lanterns and eat tangyuan. After dinner, we go out to guess riddles, and enjoy the moon and lanterns. It is happy for us to get together with our family.②
The Lantern Festival has a special meaning in China. It is the first day when the moon is full in the Chinese lunar calendar.
①“one of the + 形容词的最高级 + 名词复数”,是初中阶段经常使用的短语。
②“It is + adj. + for sb. to do sth.”为高级句型,提升了文章的写作档次。应注意其与“It is + adj. + of sb. to do sth.”的区别。
本篇范文条理清晰、层次分明,开篇点明了介绍的对象——元宵节,接着重点介绍了元宵节的活动,最后说明了元宵节的意义,升华了文章的主旨。
答案
It is happy for us to get together with our family.
