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假如你是Lucy,一名八年级的学生。上星期五你和同学们去DIY中心玩。请根据下面提示,以“My School Trip to the DIY Centre”为题用英语写一篇短文。
题目:My School Trip to the DIY Centre
时间:上午8点在校门口集中乘车;下午4点返校。
DIY活动:
上午:做水果沙拉和三明治。
下午:为中心做海报(poster)。
选择以上DIY活动中的其中一个,并简单描述其活动过程,不少于3句话。
感想:1—2点。
要求:
1. 短文应包括所给的内容要点,可适当发挥,以使行文连贯。
2. 词数90左右。开头已经写好,不计入总词数。
3. 文中不得提及你所在的学校及自己的姓名。
My School Trip to the DIY Centre
Hi, my name is Lucy. I'm a student of Grade 8. Last Friday, my classmates and I went on a school trip to the DIY Centre.
题目:My School Trip to the DIY Centre
时间:上午8点在校门口集中乘车;下午4点返校。
DIY活动:
上午:做水果沙拉和三明治。
下午:为中心做海报(poster)。
选择以上DIY活动中的其中一个,并简单描述其活动过程,不少于3句话。
感想:1—2点。
要求:
1. 短文应包括所给的内容要点,可适当发挥,以使行文连贯。
2. 词数90左右。开头已经写好,不计入总词数。
3. 文中不得提及你所在的学校及自己的姓名。
My School Trip to the DIY Centre
Hi, my name is Lucy. I'm a student of Grade 8. Last Friday, my classmates and I went on a school trip to the DIY Centre.
We met at the school gate and got on the bus at 8 a. m. And we came back to school at 4 p. m. When we got there, all of us couldn't wait to get off the bus.
In the morning, we made fresh fruit salad and sandwiches. At first, we chose fresh fruit we like.
Then we cut the fruit into small pieces. Finally, we mixed the fruit together and added some salad cream to the fruit.
In the afternoon, we made posters for the centre.
The trip was very interesting.
I want to go there again.
答案
My School Trip to the DIY Centre
Hi, my name is Lucy. I'm a student of Grade 8. Last Friday, my classmates and I went on a school trip to the DIY Centre.
We met at the school gate and got on the bus at 8 a. m. And we came back to school at 4 p. m. When we got there, all of us couldn't wait to get off the bus. In the morning, we made fresh fruit salad and sandwiches. At first, we chose fresh fruit we like. Then we cut the fruit into small pieces. Finally, we mixed the fruit together and added some salad cream to the fruit. In the afternoon, we made posters for the centre.
The trip was very interesting. I want to go there again.
Hi, my name is Lucy. I'm a student of Grade 8. Last Friday, my classmates and I went on a school trip to the DIY Centre.
We met at the school gate and got on the bus at 8 a. m. And we came back to school at 4 p. m. When we got there, all of us couldn't wait to get off the bus. In the morning, we made fresh fruit salad and sandwiches. At first, we chose fresh fruit we like. Then we cut the fruit into small pieces. Finally, we mixed the fruit together and added some salad cream to the fruit. In the afternoon, we made posters for the centre.
The trip was very interesting. I want to go there again.
解析
【分析】本题是八年级英语话题写作题，要求以Lucy的身份完成关于学校DIY中心旅行的短文。解题思路：1. 承接给定开头，补充时间要点（上午8点校门口集合乘车、下午4点返校）；2. 选择一个DIY活动（如做水果沙拉），按步骤描述过程；3. 补充下午的DIY活动（做海报）；4. 加入1-2点感想；5. 注意不提及学校和姓名，语言连贯，符合词数要求。
【解析】写作步骤：① 补充时间内容：We met at the school gate and got on the bus at 8 a.m. And we came back to school at 4 p.m.；② 描述上午DIY活动（水果沙拉）：When we got there, all of us couldn't wait to get off the bus. In the morning, we made fresh fruit salad and sandwiches. At first, we chose fresh fruit we like. Then we cut the fruit into small pieces. Finally, we mixed the fruit together and added some salad cream to the fruit；③ 补充下午活动：In the afternoon, we made posters for the centre；④ 加入感想：The trip was very interesting. I want to go there again。
【答案】My School Trip to the DIY Centre
Hi, my name is Lucy. I'm a student of Grade 8. Last Friday, my classmates and I went on a school trip to the DIY Centre.
We met at the school gate and got on the bus at 8 a. m. And we came back to school at 4 p. m. When we got there, all of us couldn't wait to get off the bus. In the morning, we made fresh fruit salad and sandwiches. At first, we chose fresh fruit we like. Then we cut the fruit into small pieces. Finally, we mixed the fruit together and added some salad cream to the fruit. In the afternoon, we made posters for the centre.
The trip was very interesting. I want to go there again.
【知识点】英语话题作文，英语写作表达
【点评】该作文完整覆盖题目所有要求要点，活动过程描述清晰，感想真实自然，语言符合八年级学生水平，衔接流畅，满足词数要求。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】写作步骤：① 补充时间内容：We met at the school gate and got on the bus at 8 a.m. And we came back to school at 4 p.m.；② 描述上午DIY活动（水果沙拉）：When we got there, all of us couldn't wait to get off the bus. In the morning, we made fresh fruit salad and sandwiches. At first, we chose fresh fruit we like. Then we cut the fruit into small pieces. Finally, we mixed the fruit together and added some salad cream to the fruit；③ 补充下午活动：In the afternoon, we made posters for the centre；④ 加入感想：The trip was very interesting. I want to go there again。
【答案】My School Trip to the DIY Centre
Hi, my name is Lucy. I'm a student of Grade 8. Last Friday, my classmates and I went on a school trip to the DIY Centre.
We met at the school gate and got on the bus at 8 a. m. And we came back to school at 4 p. m. When we got there, all of us couldn't wait to get off the bus. In the morning, we made fresh fruit salad and sandwiches. At first, we chose fresh fruit we like. Then we cut the fruit into small pieces. Finally, we mixed the fruit together and added some salad cream to the fruit. In the afternoon, we made posters for the centre.
The trip was very interesting. I want to go there again.
【知识点】英语话题作文，英语写作表达
【点评】该作文完整覆盖题目所有要求要点，活动过程描述清晰，感想真实自然，语言符合八年级学生水平，衔接流畅，满足词数要求。
【难度系数】0.6
