Ⅵ. Writing(作文)(本大题共1题,共20分)
Write at least 60 words according to the given situation(根据以下情境写一篇不少于60词的短文,标点符号不占格)
你的学校正在举办“旅行故事分享会”活动,请你用英文投稿,讲述一次令你印象深刻的旅行经历。
(1)旅行的地点、时间及主要经过;
(2)这次旅行带给你的收获或感受。







(60)

One possible version:
Last summer,I visited a small coastal village with my family. Before the trip,I had no idea what to expect or how to communicate with the locals,but that uncertainty turned out to be the best part.
An elderly fisherman showed us where to find the freshest seafood and how to watch the sunset from the cliffs. By the end of the trip,I had learnt that travel is not just about seeing new places—it is about understanding people whose lives are very different from your own. That lesson has stayed with me ever since.

【分析】
首先明确题目要求：需写一篇不少于60词的英文短文，主题为印象深刻的旅行经历，要包含旅行的地点、时间、主要经过，以及旅行的收获或感受。写作时先确定具体的旅行场景（如海边小渔村），再按“时间地点→具体经历→感悟收获”的结构组织内容，确保细节真实、逻辑清晰，符合英文表达习惯。
【解析】
1. 开头交代旅行的时间、地点和同行人：Last summer, I visited a small coastal village with my family.
2. 中间描述旅行中的具体经历：遇到当地渔民，获得指引，丰富旅行体验。
3. 结尾点明旅行的收获：旅行不仅是看风景，更是理解不同生活的人，升华主题。
【答案】
One possible version:
Last summer,I visited a small coastal village with my family. Before the trip,I had no idea what to expect or how to communicate with the locals,but that uncertainty turned out to be the best part.
An elderly fisherman showed us where to find the freshest seafood and how to watch the sunset from the cliffs. By the end of the trip,I had learnt that travel is not just about seeing new places—it is about understanding people whose lives are very different from your own. That lesson has stayed with me ever since.
【知识点】
英语写作、记叙文写作、旅行主题表达
【点评】
该作文紧扣题目要求，结构清晰，有具体事例支撑，感悟真实深刻，符合旅行故事分享会的主题，语言流畅自然，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.5