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成长就像一次长途旅行。成长过程中有收获,有困惑,你在每次历练中成长。恰逢学校举办题为“Growing up”的英文演讲比赛。请你以此为题,谈谈你的成长过程。内容如下:
注意:
1. 必须包括表中所有提示内容,并适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 表达清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范;
4. 不少于 100 词(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Growing up
Growing up is like a journey. I've learned a lot on the way.
成长就像一次长途旅行。成长过程中有收获,有困惑,你在每次历练中成长。恰逢学校举办题为“Growing up”的英文演讲比赛。请你以此为题,谈谈你的成长过程。内容如下:
注意:
1. 必须包括表中所有提示内容,并适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 表达清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范;
4. 不少于 100 词(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Growing up
Growing up is like a journey. I've learned a lot on the way.
答案
Growing up
Growing up is like a journey. I've learned a lot on the way.
We can learn about the world in many different ways. Books and the internet bring us all kinds of rich knowledge, letting us learn about events that happened thousands of years ago, and see amazing places across the world that we have never been to. Besides, our parents teach us how to be a warm and honest person, our friends show us the importance of sharing, and our teachers help us master different useful learning and life skills.
I also met plenty of trouble during my growth. Once I fell behind in my physics study and had few friends around me, I felt very upset. I didn't escape from these problems. I made a careful study plan, and also talked about my feelings with my teachers and classmates. Little by little, I caught up with my physics lessons and got closer to my classmates.
From these experiences, I realize that we should never give up in the face of difficulties. The process of growing up is far more important than just getting a "success" result. And I also learn to be thankful to all the people who give me a hand in my life. That is the most precious gift the journey of growth brings to me.
Growing up is like a journey. I've learned a lot on the way.
We can learn about the world in many different ways. Books and the internet bring us all kinds of rich knowledge, letting us learn about events that happened thousands of years ago, and see amazing places across the world that we have never been to. Besides, our parents teach us how to be a warm and honest person, our friends show us the importance of sharing, and our teachers help us master different useful learning and life skills.
I also met plenty of trouble during my growth. Once I fell behind in my physics study and had few friends around me, I felt very upset. I didn't escape from these problems. I made a careful study plan, and also talked about my feelings with my teachers and classmates. Little by little, I caught up with my physics lessons and got closer to my classmates.
From these experiences, I realize that we should never give up in the face of difficulties. The process of growing up is far more important than just getting a "success" result. And I also learn to be thankful to all the people who give me a hand in my life. That is the most precious gift the journey of growth brings to me.
解析
【分析】
首先明确题目要求：以“Growing up”为题写英文演讲，需包含表格所有提示内容，开头已给出，不得出现真实信息，字数不少于100词。写作思路分三步：1. 承接开头，围绕“如何了解世界”展开，说明书籍、互联网及父母、朋友、老师在认识世界中的作用；2. 围绕“如何解决成长中的麻烦”，结合自身经历举例，说明面对问题的正确做法；3. 围绕“成长感悟”，强调不放弃、成长比成功重要，再补充感恩他人的感悟，确保覆盖所有提示，语句连贯。
【解析】
根据上述思路，写作时先承接开头，说明了解世界的多种方式：书籍和互联网能带来丰富知识，父母教我们做人，朋友让我们懂得分享，老师教我们技能；接着举例成长中的麻烦，比如物理学习落后、交友不顺，通过制定计划、求助他人解决；最后总结感悟：不放弃困难，成长过程比成功重要，还要感恩帮助自己的人，确保内容符合要求，逻辑连贯，字数达标。
【答案】
Growing up
Growing up is like a journey. I've learned a lot on the way.
We can learn about the world in many different ways. Books and the internet bring us all kinds of rich knowledge, letting us learn about events that happened thousands of years ago, and see amazing places across the world that we have never been to. Besides, our parents teach us how to be a warm and honest person, our friends show us the importance of sharing, and our teachers help us master different useful learning and life skills.
I also met plenty of trouble during my growth. Once I fell behind in my physics study and had few friends around me, I felt very upset. I didn't escape from these problems. I made a careful study plan, and also talked about my feelings with my teachers and classmates. Little by little, I caught up with my physics lessons and got closer to my classmates.
From these experiences, I realize that we should never give up in the face of difficulties. The process of growing up is far more important than just getting a "success" result. And I also learn to be thankful to all the people who give me a hand in my life. That is the most precious gift the journey of growth brings to me.
【知识点】
英语主题写作、语句连贯、要点整合
【点评】
本题为初中英语主题写作题，要求结合给定表格提示完成成长话题的演讲，既考查学生对成长话题的理解，又考查英语综合运用能力，需合理整合要点、适当发挥，符合写作规范。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先明确题目要求：以“Growing up”为题写英文演讲，需包含表格所有提示内容，开头已给出，不得出现真实信息，字数不少于100词。写作思路分三步：1. 承接开头，围绕“如何了解世界”展开，说明书籍、互联网及父母、朋友、老师在认识世界中的作用；2. 围绕“如何解决成长中的麻烦”，结合自身经历举例，说明面对问题的正确做法；3. 围绕“成长感悟”，强调不放弃、成长比成功重要，再补充感恩他人的感悟，确保覆盖所有提示，语句连贯。
【解析】
根据上述思路，写作时先承接开头，说明了解世界的多种方式：书籍和互联网能带来丰富知识，父母教我们做人，朋友让我们懂得分享，老师教我们技能；接着举例成长中的麻烦，比如物理学习落后、交友不顺，通过制定计划、求助他人解决；最后总结感悟：不放弃困难，成长过程比成功重要，还要感恩帮助自己的人，确保内容符合要求，逻辑连贯，字数达标。
【答案】
Growing up
Growing up is like a journey. I've learned a lot on the way.
We can learn about the world in many different ways. Books and the internet bring us all kinds of rich knowledge, letting us learn about events that happened thousands of years ago, and see amazing places across the world that we have never been to. Besides, our parents teach us how to be a warm and honest person, our friends show us the importance of sharing, and our teachers help us master different useful learning and life skills.
I also met plenty of trouble during my growth. Once I fell behind in my physics study and had few friends around me, I felt very upset. I didn't escape from these problems. I made a careful study plan, and also talked about my feelings with my teachers and classmates. Little by little, I caught up with my physics lessons and got closer to my classmates.
From these experiences, I realize that we should never give up in the face of difficulties. The process of growing up is far more important than just getting a "success" result. And I also learn to be thankful to all the people who give me a hand in my life. That is the most precious gift the journey of growth brings to me.
【知识点】
英语主题写作、语句连贯、要点整合
【点评】
本题为初中英语主题写作题，要求结合给定表格提示完成成长话题的演讲，既考查学生对成长话题的理解，又考查英语综合运用能力，需合理整合要点、适当发挥，符合写作规范。
【难度系数】
0.6
