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第四节 书面表达。
每年的8月8日是“全民健身日”，为了让这项活动更加深入人心，学校校报正在以“Let’s Do Exercise Together”为主题举办征文活动。请根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文并投稿。
| The importance of exercise | When and how to exercise |
| --- | --- |
| • keep fit
• help ... live a colorful life
• ... | • go to school on foot or by bike
• do all kinds of exercise in PE class, such as running and
playing basketball
• climb mountains or go swimming on weekends
• ... |
要求：
1. 根据所给提示，写一篇短文，词数不少于80（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；
3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名。
Let’s Do Exercise Together
August 8th is National Fitness Day in China.
每年的8月8日是“全民健身日”，为了让这项活动更加深入人心，学校校报正在以“Let’s Do Exercise Together”为主题举办征文活动。请根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文并投稿。
| The importance of exercise | When and how to exercise |
| --- | --- |
| • keep fit
• help ... live a colorful life
• ... | • go to school on foot or by bike
• do all kinds of exercise in PE class, such as running and
playing basketball• climb mountains or go swimming on weekends
• ... |
要求：
1. 根据所给提示，写一篇短文，词数不少于80（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；
3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名。
Let’s Do Exercise Together
August 8th is National Fitness Day in China.
答案
Let’s Do Exercise Together
August 8th is National Fitness Day in China. It’s very important for us to do exercise. Doing exercise can not only help us keep fit, but also help us live a colorful life. What’s more, doing exercise helps us to study better.
We can do exercise at any time and in many ways. On weekdays, it is good for us to go to school on foot or by bike. In PE class, we can do all kinds of exercises, such as running, jumping and playing basketball. On weekends, we can climb mountains or go swimming with our friends or family members. Also, we can go hiking during the vacations.
Let’s do exercise and have a healthy lifestyle together!
August 8th is National Fitness Day in China. It’s very important for us to do exercise. Doing exercise can not only help us keep fit, but also help us live a colorful life. What’s more, doing exercise helps us to study better.
We can do exercise at any time and in many ways. On weekdays, it is good for us to go to school on foot or by bike. In PE class, we can do all kinds of exercises, such as running, jumping and playing basketball. On weekends, we can climb mountains or go swimming with our friends or family members. Also, we can go hiking during the vacations.
Let’s do exercise and have a healthy lifestyle together!
解析
【分析】
本题是英语话题书面表达题，主题为“Let’s Do Exercise Together”。解题思路如下：首先明确文章结构，分为三部分：开头承接给定句子引出锻炼的重要性；中间分两部分，先阐述锻炼的重要性（结合提示内容，可补充合理拓展），再说明锻炼的时间与方式（结合提示拓展）；结尾发出呼吁。写作时需紧扣提示要点，保证语言流畅、词数达标，不使用真实信息。
【解析】
1. 结构搭建：开头已给出，先写锻炼的重要性：用“not only...but also...”连接提示的“keep fit”“live a colorful life”，再补充“helps us study better”使内容更丰富；接着写锻炼的时间与方式：分工作日（上学步行或骑车）、体育课（跑步、跳跃、篮球等）、周末（爬山、游泳）、假期（徒步）；最后结尾呼吁大家锻炼，养成健康生活方式。
2. 内容填充：严格围绕提示要点，补充合理内容，确保词数不少于80；
3. 语言规范：使用正确的英语句式，避免语法错误，不出现真实姓名、校名。
【答案】
Let’s Do Exercise Together
August 8th is National Fitness Day in China. It’s very important for us to do exercise. Doing exercise can not only help us keep fit, but also help us live a colorful life. What’s more, doing exercise helps us to study better.
We can do exercise at any time and in many ways. On weekdays, it is good for us to go to school on foot or by bike. In PE class, we can do all kinds of exercises, such as running, jumping and playing basketball. On weekends, we can climb mountains or go swimming with our friends or family members. Also, we can go hiking during the vacations.
Let’s do exercise and have a healthy lifestyle together!
【知识点】
英语书面表达，话题作文，锻炼相关
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，结构清晰，分为重要性、锻炼方式、呼吁三部分，内容完整，结合提示拓展合理，语言流畅，符合书面表达的要求，能有效传达“一起锻炼”的主题。
【难度系数】
0.3
本题是英语话题书面表达题，主题为“Let’s Do Exercise Together”。解题思路如下：首先明确文章结构，分为三部分：开头承接给定句子引出锻炼的重要性；中间分两部分，先阐述锻炼的重要性（结合提示内容，可补充合理拓展），再说明锻炼的时间与方式（结合提示拓展）；结尾发出呼吁。写作时需紧扣提示要点，保证语言流畅、词数达标，不使用真实信息。
【解析】
1. 结构搭建：开头已给出，先写锻炼的重要性：用“not only...but also...”连接提示的“keep fit”“live a colorful life”，再补充“helps us study better”使内容更丰富；接着写锻炼的时间与方式：分工作日（上学步行或骑车）、体育课（跑步、跳跃、篮球等）、周末（爬山、游泳）、假期（徒步）；最后结尾呼吁大家锻炼，养成健康生活方式。
2. 内容填充：严格围绕提示要点，补充合理内容，确保词数不少于80；
3. 语言规范：使用正确的英语句式，避免语法错误，不出现真实姓名、校名。
【答案】
Let’s Do Exercise Together
August 8th is National Fitness Day in China. It’s very important for us to do exercise. Doing exercise can not only help us keep fit, but also help us live a colorful life. What’s more, doing exercise helps us to study better.
We can do exercise at any time and in many ways. On weekdays, it is good for us to go to school on foot or by bike. In PE class, we can do all kinds of exercises, such as running, jumping and playing basketball. On weekends, we can climb mountains or go swimming with our friends or family members. Also, we can go hiking during the vacations.
Let’s do exercise and have a healthy lifestyle together!
【知识点】
英语书面表达，话题作文，锻炼相关
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，结构清晰，分为重要性、锻炼方式、呼吁三部分，内容完整，结合提示拓展合理，语言流畅，符合书面表达的要求，能有效传达“一起锻炼”的主题。
【难度系数】
0.3
