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[2026广东广州期末]假如你是李华，你校英文校报向全校学生征集主题为“Do you collect anything?”的英语短文，请你根据下面的提示，写一篇短文投稿。
（1）词数不少于80(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)；
（2）要点齐全,可适当发挥；
（3）条理清楚,语句连贯,书写规范；
（4）文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
Do you collect anything? You may like collecting stamps, postcards or magazines. Well, I collect
This is my collection. What do you think of it?
（1）词数不少于80(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)；
（2）要点齐全,可适当发挥；
（3）条理清楚,语句连贯,书写规范；
（4）文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
Do you collect anything? You may like collecting stamps, postcards or magazines. Well, I collect
sounds of birds.
Two years ago, I took a trip to the forest with my school's Collection Club. When I went into the forest, all kinds of birds attracted me. It felt like I was in a dream world. All kinds of sounds of birds were like beautiful music. They made me lose myself in it. Since then, I have collected sounds of birds through the digital recording pen. Now I've collected a lot of sounds of birds. By listening to them, I feel the beauty of nature, which makes me very relaxed.
This is my collection. What do you think of it?
答案
【参考范文】
Do you collect anything? You may like collecting stamps, postcards or magazines. Well, I collect sounds of birds.
Two years ago, I took a trip to the forest with my school's Collection Club. When I went into the forest, all kinds of birds attracted me. It felt like I was in a dream world. All kinds of sounds of birds were like beautiful music. They made me lose myself in it. Since then, I have collected sounds of birds through the digital recording pen. Now I've collected a lot of sounds of birds. By listening to them, I feel the beauty of nature, which makes me very relaxed.
This is my collection. What do you think of it?
Do you collect anything? You may like collecting stamps, postcards or magazines. Well, I collect sounds of birds.
Two years ago, I took a trip to the forest with my school's Collection Club. When I went into the forest, all kinds of birds attracted me. It felt like I was in a dream world. All kinds of sounds of birds were like beautiful music. They made me lose myself in it. Since then, I have collected sounds of birds through the digital recording pen. Now I've collected a lot of sounds of birds. By listening to them, I feel the beauty of nature, which makes me very relaxed.
This is my collection. What do you think of it?
解析
【分析】
这是一篇英语话题应用文写作题，要求以李华的身份向英文校报投稿，主题为“Do you collect anything?”。解题思路：首先根据提示确定收藏项目为鸟叫声，补全开头空白；接着按照给定的“开始时间及原因”要点，叙述两年前参加学校收藏俱乐部的森林之行，被鸟叫声吸引的经历，补充当时的感受；最后围绕“收获与感想”，说明收集鸟叫声的方式及从中获得的感悟，确保要点齐全、语句连贯，符合词数要求。
【解析】
1. 补全开头空白：明确收藏项目为鸟叫声（sounds of birds）；
2. 写开始时间及原因：结合提示，描述两年前参加学校收藏俱乐部的森林之行，进入森林后被各种鸟叫声吸引，补充“像在梦境、像美妙音乐”等感受；
3. 写收获与感想：说明通过录音笔收集鸟叫声，现在的收藏情况，以及听鸟叫声能感受自然之美、放松心情的感悟，适当发挥充实内容；
4. 检查：确保词数不少于80，无真实姓名和校名，语句连贯，要点齐全。
【答案】
Do you collect anything? You may like collecting stamps, postcards or magazines. Well, I collect sounds of birds.
Two years ago, I took a trip to the forest with my school's Collection Club. When I went into the forest, all kinds of birds attracted me. It felt like I was in a dream world. All kinds of sounds of birds were like beautiful music. They made me lose myself in it. Since then, I have collected sounds of birds through the digital recording pen. Now I've collected a lot of sounds of birds. By listening to them, I feel the beauty of nature, which makes me very relaxed.
This is my collection. What do you think of it?
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、话题作文写作
【点评】
范文紧扣主题，涵盖所有要点，语言流畅自然，情感真挚，符合写作要求，是一篇优秀的投稿短文。
【难度系数】
0.5
这是一篇英语话题应用文写作题，要求以李华的身份向英文校报投稿，主题为“Do you collect anything?”。解题思路：首先根据提示确定收藏项目为鸟叫声，补全开头空白；接着按照给定的“开始时间及原因”要点，叙述两年前参加学校收藏俱乐部的森林之行，被鸟叫声吸引的经历，补充当时的感受；最后围绕“收获与感想”，说明收集鸟叫声的方式及从中获得的感悟，确保要点齐全、语句连贯，符合词数要求。
【解析】
1. 补全开头空白：明确收藏项目为鸟叫声（sounds of birds）；
2. 写开始时间及原因：结合提示，描述两年前参加学校收藏俱乐部的森林之行，进入森林后被各种鸟叫声吸引，补充“像在梦境、像美妙音乐”等感受；
3. 写收获与感想：说明通过录音笔收集鸟叫声，现在的收藏情况，以及听鸟叫声能感受自然之美、放松心情的感悟，适当发挥充实内容；
4. 检查：确保词数不少于80，无真实姓名和校名，语句连贯，要点齐全。
【答案】
Do you collect anything? You may like collecting stamps, postcards or magazines. Well, I collect sounds of birds.
Two years ago, I took a trip to the forest with my school's Collection Club. When I went into the forest, all kinds of birds attracted me. It felt like I was in a dream world. All kinds of sounds of birds were like beautiful music. They made me lose myself in it. Since then, I have collected sounds of birds through the digital recording pen. Now I've collected a lot of sounds of birds. By listening to them, I feel the beauty of nature, which makes me very relaxed.
This is my collection. What do you think of it?
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、话题作文写作
【点评】
范文紧扣主题，涵盖所有要点，语言流畅自然，情感真挚，符合写作要求，是一篇优秀的投稿短文。
【难度系数】
0.5
