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答案（含基础版范文和进阶版范文）D17
假如你们学校开展科技节活动,你发明了送餐机器人,请根据以下提示介绍你的发明,以“My invention”为题,写一篇80词以上的短文,可以适当发挥。
要点:1.有一个圆圆的身体,和儿童一样高,依靠轮子移动;
2.会唱歌、跳舞,甚至还会查询信息;
3.可用声音控制它,它可以根据指令四处走动;
4.两个优势——①比人更适合做送餐工作,因为它任何时候都能送(deliver)餐;
②……(请自己补充)
5.我的发明在学校很受欢迎。我喜欢这个发明的原因有……(请自己补充)。
My invention
Today, I want to introduce my delivery robot to you.
答案（含基础版范文和进阶版范文）D17
假如你们学校开展科技节活动,你发明了送餐机器人,请根据以下提示介绍你的发明,以“My invention”为题,写一篇80词以上的短文,可以适当发挥。
要点:1.有一个圆圆的身体,和儿童一样高,依靠轮子移动;
2.会唱歌、跳舞,甚至还会查询信息;
3.可用声音控制它,它可以根据指令四处走动;
4.两个优势——①比人更适合做送餐工作,因为它任何时候都能送(deliver)餐;
②……(请自己补充)
5.我的发明在学校很受欢迎。我喜欢这个发明的原因有……(请自己补充)。
My invention
Today, I want to introduce my delivery robot to you.
It has a round body. It is as tall as a child. It can move with its wheels. It can do many things such as singing, dancing, and searching for information. I can use my voice to control it and it can move around according to my orders.
It has two advantages. The first one is that it can do better in delivering food than humans because it can deliver food at any time. The second is its function. It can keep the food warm.
My invention is very popular in my school. I also like it very much because it can be a good helper in my life.
It has two advantages. The first one is that it can do better in delivering food than humans because it can deliver food at any time. The second is its function. It can keep the food warm.
My invention is very popular in my school. I also like it very much because it can be a good helper in my life.
答案
主题写作专项
基础版范文
My invention
Today, I want to introduce my delivery robot to you.
It has a round body. It is as tall as a child. It can move with its wheels. It can do many things such as singing, dancing, and searching for information. I can use my voice to control it and it can move around according to my orders.
It has two advantages. The first one is that it can do better in delivering food than humans because it can deliver food at any time. The second is its function. It can keep the food warm.
My invention is very popular in my school. I also like it very much because it can be a good helper in my life.
进阶版范文
My invention
Today, I want to introduce my delivery robot to you.
It is a creative robot with a round body. It is as tall as a child. It can move around freely with the help of its wheels. It can sing and dance. It can also search for information on its own. I can control it by using my voice. For example, when I speak to it and give it some orders, it can follow my orders and then do them correctly.
There are two advantages. The first one is that it can deliver food better than humans because it can do it anytime and never gets tired. The second one is that it has a special heating system that can keep food warm.
My invention is very popular in my school. I'm also fond of it because it can make food-delivering more convenient.
基础版范文
My invention
Today, I want to introduce my delivery robot to you.
It has a round body. It is as tall as a child. It can move with its wheels. It can do many things such as singing, dancing, and searching for information. I can use my voice to control it and it can move around according to my orders.
It has two advantages. The first one is that it can do better in delivering food than humans because it can deliver food at any time. The second is its function. It can keep the food warm.
My invention is very popular in my school. I also like it very much because it can be a good helper in my life.
进阶版范文
My invention
Today, I want to introduce my delivery robot to you.
It is a creative robot with a round body. It is as tall as a child. It can move around freely with the help of its wheels. It can sing and dance. It can also search for information on its own. I can control it by using my voice. For example, when I speak to it and give it some orders, it can follow my orders and then do them correctly.
There are two advantages. The first one is that it can deliver food better than humans because it can do it anytime and never gets tired. The second one is that it has a special heating system that can keep food warm.
My invention is very popular in my school. I'm also fond of it because it can make food-delivering more convenient.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语话题写作题，要求以“My invention”为题介绍送餐机器人，解题思路为：1. 梳理题目给出的所有要点（外形、功能、控制方式、两个优势、受欢迎程度及喜欢的原因），确保不遗漏；2. 确定文章结构：开头引出发明，中间分点介绍核心内容，结尾表达个人感受；3. 适当发挥补充第二个优势和喜欢的原因，使文章内容充实，符合英语表达习惯，达到80词以上的要求。
【解析】
写作时需遵循以下步骤：① 开头：直接点明要介绍的发明是送餐机器人，引出下文；② 主体部分：依次介绍机器人的外形（圆身体、与儿童同高、靠轮子移动）、功能（唱歌、跳舞、查询信息）、控制方式（声音控制，按指令行动）；接着说明两个优势，第一个是任何时候都能送餐，第二个可补充为能保温食物；③ 结尾：说明发明在学校受欢迎，再补充喜欢它的原因（如生活好帮手），确保语句通顺，要点齐全，符合英语写作规范。
【答案】
My invention
Today, I want to introduce my delivery robot to you.
It has a round body. It is as tall as a child. It can move with its wheels. It can do many things such as singing, dancing, and searching for information. I can use my voice to control it and it can move around according to my orders.
It has two advantages. The first one is that it can do better in delivering food than humans because it can deliver food at any time. The second is its function. It can keep the food warm.
My invention is very popular in my school. I also like it very much because it can be a good helper in my life.
【知识点】
英语话题写作、要点式写作、说明文写作
【点评】
本题考查学生的英语书面表达能力，要求紧扣给定要点完成短文，既需要准确运用相关词汇和句型，又要具备适当发挥的能力，是初中英语常见的写作题型，注重考查学生的综合语言运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语话题写作题，要求以“My invention”为题介绍送餐机器人，解题思路为：1. 梳理题目给出的所有要点（外形、功能、控制方式、两个优势、受欢迎程度及喜欢的原因），确保不遗漏；2. 确定文章结构：开头引出发明，中间分点介绍核心内容，结尾表达个人感受；3. 适当发挥补充第二个优势和喜欢的原因，使文章内容充实，符合英语表达习惯，达到80词以上的要求。
【解析】
写作时需遵循以下步骤：① 开头：直接点明要介绍的发明是送餐机器人，引出下文；② 主体部分：依次介绍机器人的外形（圆身体、与儿童同高、靠轮子移动）、功能（唱歌、跳舞、查询信息）、控制方式（声音控制，按指令行动）；接着说明两个优势，第一个是任何时候都能送餐，第二个可补充为能保温食物；③ 结尾：说明发明在学校受欢迎，再补充喜欢它的原因（如生活好帮手），确保语句通顺，要点齐全，符合英语写作规范。
【答案】
My invention
Today, I want to introduce my delivery robot to you.
It has a round body. It is as tall as a child. It can move with its wheels. It can do many things such as singing, dancing, and searching for information. I can use my voice to control it and it can move around according to my orders.
It has two advantages. The first one is that it can do better in delivering food than humans because it can deliver food at any time. The second is its function. It can keep the food warm.
My invention is very popular in my school. I also like it very much because it can be a good helper in my life.
【知识点】
英语话题写作、要点式写作、说明文写作
【点评】
本题考查学生的英语书面表达能力，要求紧扣给定要点完成短文，既需要准确运用相关词汇和句型，又要具备适当发挥的能力，是初中英语常见的写作题型，注重考查学生的综合语言运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.5
