主题分析
本单元的主题是“家庭与家庭生活”。相关写作可围绕分担家务、构建和谐家庭等话题展开,旨在引导同学们思考“家”的内涵,抒发对“家”的热爱。
写作素材
【词汇】
bathroom,sort,invite,treasure,community,rubbish,familiar,describe,wherever,decorate,pack up,clean up,share sth with sb
【句型】
◆开头句
1. Helping my parents do chores is one of the best ways to care about them.
2. As a member of my family, I have the duty to make everything here in order.
◆中间句
1. I can help with many chores,like sweeping the floor and cleaning the bathroom.
2. I can also give my parents a hand through sorting the rubbish and taking it away.
◆结尾句
1. Doing chores is not difficult, but it means a lot.
2. It makes me feel great to be a good helper at home.
【名言积累】
East or west, home is best.
金窝银窝,不如自己的草窝。
写作典范
做家务是学生应尽的义务。假设你是李明,是文华中学一名八年级学生,请你围绕下图所示的三个问题,以“My Share of Doing
Housework”为题写一篇英语短文,分享你平时做的家务及其感受。

注意:1. 根据上图所给提示,适当发挥;
2. 词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My Share of Doing Housework
My name is Li Ming. I'm a student of Grade Eight in Wenhua Middle School. I'd like to share my experiences of doing housework at home.
【审题立意】
1. 审主题:分享自己做家务的情况及感受
2. 审体裁:记叙文
3. 审人称:以第一人称为主
4. 审时态:一般现在时
【思路点拨】

【佳作欣赏】
My Share of Doing Housework
My name is Li Ming. I'm a student of
Grade Eight in Wenhua Middle School. I'd like to share my experiences of doing housework at home.
On Saturdays, my parents are usually busy with work, not at home. So it is the best time for me to help with the housework, such as sweeping the floor, cleaning the bathroom and packing up things. Sometimes, I even succeed in preparing some simple dishes for them. I believe it is my duty to make our home in order and full of love by doing something, like the housework. That can really give my parents a helpful hand.
Now, I'm used to doing housework every Saturday. It makes me feel good to study and live in a clean and comfortable home. Doing chores is not difficult, but it means a lot.
本单元的主题是“家庭与家庭生活”。相关写作可围绕分担家务、构建和谐家庭等话题展开,旨在引导同学们思考“家”的内涵,抒发对“家”的热爱。
写作素材
【词汇】
bathroom,sort,invite,treasure,community,rubbish,familiar,describe,wherever,decorate,pack up,clean up,share sth with sb
【句型】
◆开头句
1. Helping my parents do chores is one of the best ways to care about them.
2. As a member of my family, I have the duty to make everything here in order.
◆中间句
1. I can help with many chores,like sweeping the floor and cleaning the bathroom.
2. I can also give my parents a hand through sorting the rubbish and taking it away.
◆结尾句
1. Doing chores is not difficult, but it means a lot.
2. It makes me feel great to be a good helper at home.
【名言积累】
East or west, home is best.
金窝银窝,不如自己的草窝。
写作典范
做家务是学生应尽的义务。假设你是李明,是文华中学一名八年级学生,请你围绕下图所示的三个问题,以“My Share of Doing
Housework”为题写一篇英语短文,分享你平时做的家务及其感受。
注意:1. 根据上图所给提示,适当发挥;
2. 词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My Share of Doing Housework
My name is Li Ming. I'm a student of Grade Eight in Wenhua Middle School. I'd like to share my experiences of doing housework at home.
【审题立意】
1. 审主题:分享自己做家务的情况及感受
2. 审体裁:记叙文
3. 审人称:以第一人称为主
4. 审时态:一般现在时
【思路点拨】
【佳作欣赏】
My Share of Doing Housework
My name is Li Ming. I'm a student of
Grade Eight in Wenhua Middle School. I'd like to share my experiences of doing housework at home.
On Saturdays, my parents are usually busy with work, not at home. So it is the best time for me to help with the housework, such as sweeping the floor, cleaning the bathroom and packing up things. Sometimes, I even succeed in preparing some simple dishes for them. I believe it is my duty to make our home in order and full of love by doing something, like the housework. That can really give my parents a helpful hand.
Now, I'm used to doing housework every Saturday. It makes me feel good to study and live in a clean and comfortable home. Doing chores is not difficult, but it means a lot.
答案
On Saturdays, my parents are usually busy with work, not at home. So it is the best time for me to help with the housework, such as sweeping the floor, cleaning the bathroom and packing up things. Sometimes, I even make simple dishes for them. I believe it is my duty to make our home in order and full of love, and doing housework can give my parents a helpful hand.
Now, I'm used to doing housework every week. It makes me feel good to live in a clean and comfortable home. Doing chores is not difficult, but it means a lot.
Now, I'm used to doing housework every week. It makes me feel good to live in a clean and comfortable home. Doing chores is not difficult, but it means a lot.
解析
【分析】本题要求以文华中学八年级学生李明的身份,围绕“做家务的经历与感受”写一篇英语短文。解题思路:1. 承接已给开头,明确写作核心为“具体家务内容+个人感悟”;2. 结合给定词汇(如bathroom、pack up等)和句型,围绕“周六父母忙时做家务”展开,列举扫地、打扫浴室、整理物品等具体家务,补充简单做饭的细节;3. 遵循第一人称、一般现在时的要求,最后点题做家务的意义,控制词数在80左右,符合主题要求。
【解析】1. 承接开头,点明做家务的时间(周六父母忙于工作不在家),引出具体家务:sweeping the floor、cleaning the bathroom、packing up things,补充“有时做简单饭菜”的细节;2. 表达个人观点:认为做家务是让家整洁充满爱的责任,能帮到父母;3. 最后点题:习惯每周做家务,家的舒适让自己开心,做家务不难但意义重大,符合写作要求。
【答案】On Saturdays, my parents are usually busy with work, not at home. So it is the best time for me to help with the housework, such as sweeping the floor, cleaning the bathroom and packing up things. Sometimes, I even make simple dishes for them. I believe it is my duty to make our home in order and full of love, and doing housework can give my parents a helpful hand. Now, I'm used to doing housework every week. It makes me feel good to live in a clean and comfortable home. Doing chores is not difficult, but it means a lot.
【知识点】英语记叙文写作、家庭话题词汇运用、一般现在时
【点评】作文紧扣“分担家务、构建和谐家庭”的主题,内容具体,运用了给定的词汇和句型,语言通顺,符合八年级学生的写作水平,准确表达了对家庭的责任感与对家的热爱。
【难度系数】0.4
【解析】1. 承接开头,点明做家务的时间(周六父母忙于工作不在家),引出具体家务:sweeping the floor、cleaning the bathroom、packing up things,补充“有时做简单饭菜”的细节;2. 表达个人观点:认为做家务是让家整洁充满爱的责任,能帮到父母;3. 最后点题:习惯每周做家务,家的舒适让自己开心,做家务不难但意义重大,符合写作要求。
【答案】On Saturdays, my parents are usually busy with work, not at home. So it is the best time for me to help with the housework, such as sweeping the floor, cleaning the bathroom and packing up things. Sometimes, I even make simple dishes for them. I believe it is my duty to make our home in order and full of love, and doing housework can give my parents a helpful hand. Now, I'm used to doing housework every week. It makes me feel good to live in a clean and comfortable home. Doing chores is not difficult, but it means a lot.
【知识点】英语记叙文写作、家庭话题词汇运用、一般现在时
【点评】作文紧扣“分担家务、构建和谐家庭”的主题,内容具体,运用了给定的词汇和句型,语言通顺,符合八年级学生的写作水平,准确表达了对家庭的责任感与对家的热爱。
【难度系数】0.4
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