中国航天事业的发展离不开航天员的付出。假设你心目中的英雄是航天员邓清明,请根据以下提示内容写一篇文章介绍邓清明的情况和经历以及他对你的影响。
提示内容:1.1966年出生于江西,虽家境贫困,但学习刻苦。
2. 1998年,成为我国14名首批航天员之一。
3.尽管一直是备份航天员(backup astronaut),但认真对待每个训练项目(training session)。
4.经过24年10个月,终于实现了他的太空梦。
写作要求:1.包含所有提示内容,可适当发挥;
2.100词左右。
写作支架
开头 开篇点题 Of many space heroes in our country’s history, Deng Qingming .
中间 详细介绍邓清明的情况和经历 Deng Qingming was born . He grew up in a poor family, but he .
In 1998, Deng became one of .
Although he served as , he and kept practicing hard all the time.（高分句式1）
After 24 years and 10 months of persistent efforts, he finally .
结尾 描述他对自己的影响 I’m inspired by Deng Qingming’s story. His experiences teach me that .（高分句式2） I will learn from him, study hard every day, and keep chasing my own dreams bravely.
优秀范文
Of many space heroes in our country’s history, Deng Qingming leaves a deep impression on me.①
Deng Qingming was born in Jiangxi in 1966. He grew up in a poor family, but he studied very hard at school. In 1998, Deng became one of China’s first 14 astronauts. Although he served as a backup astronaut for many years, he took every training session seriously and kept practicing hard all the time.② After 24 years and 10 months of persistent efforts, he finally made his space dream come true and went into space successfully.
I’m inspired by Deng Qingming’s story. His experiences teach me that nothing is impossible if we stick to our dreams and work hard.③ I will learn from him, study hard every day, and keep chasing my own dreams bravely.
亮点评析
①摒弃简单的“My hero is Deng Qingming”,用Of many...结构开篇,突出了人物的特殊性。
②使用含although引导的让步状语从句的主从复合句,突出人物的品质,使得文章内容更连贯。
③该句中含that引导的宾语从句和if引导的条件状语从句,既完成了主题升华,又体现了句式运用能力。

写作支架填空答案
1. leaves a deep impression on me
2. in Jiangxi in 1966
3. studied very hard at school
4. China's first 14 astronauts
5. a backup astronaut for many years; took every training session seriously
6. made his space dream come true and went into space successfully
7. nothing is impossible if we stick to our dreams and work hard
完整参考范文
Of many space heroes in our country's history, Deng Qingming leaves a deep impression on me.
Deng Qingming was born in Jiangxi in 1966. He grew up in a poor family, but he studied very hard at school. In 1998, Deng became one of China's first 14 astronauts. Although he served as a backup astronaut for many years, he took every training session seriously and kept practicing hard all the time. After 24 years and 10 months of persistent efforts, he finally made his space dream come true and went into space successfully.
I'm inspired by Deng Qingming's story. His experiences teach me that nothing is impossible if we stick to our dreams and work hard. I will learn from him, study hard every day, and keep chasing my own dreams bravely.

本题是九年级英语人物主题写作题，要求介绍航天英雄邓清明的生平经历以及他对自己的影响，可按以下步骤完成写作：1. 审题：明确需覆盖全部4个提示要点，叙事以第三人称为主，时态以一般过去时为主，词数控制在100词左右；2. 谋篇：采用“开篇点题-中间按时间线详述人物经历-结尾抒发自身感悟”的三段式结构，借助给出的写作支架填充内容，合理使用although引导的让步状语从句、包含宾语从句+条件状语从句的高分句式，提升文章连贯性和表达质量；3. 核验：确认所有提示要点无遗漏，词汇、语法使用准确，符合词数要求。