XⅢ. Writing. 大家围坐在一起描述各自的梦想世界。请根据下列提示，以“Children’s dreams”为题，写一篇短文介绍一下大家的梦想世界。(10分)
要求:1. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范,适当发挥想象;
2. 60词左右(含所给单词)。

Children’s dreams
Jack , Mary and Tom have got different dreams.

【参考范文】 Children’s dreams
Jack, Mary and Tom have got different dreams. In Jack’s dream, there are glass houses. They are beautiful. And students have got better schools. They can watch interesting TV programmes at weekends. Mary dreams there are no wars. People are all kind. There are no bad people. She also dreams there are fewer cars. What about Tom? In his dream, there are many computers and robots. They can help people a lot. People have got more money and time to do things they like.

【分析】
本题为英语话题写作题，主题是“Children’s dreams”。解题思路：先承接给定开头，总述三人梦想不同；再分别介绍Jack、Mary、Tom的梦想，需覆盖图中所有提示内容；最后用简单连接词让语句通顺，控制在60词左右，符合书写规范。
【解析】
1. 承接开头后，先写Jack的梦想：In Jack’s dream, there are beautiful glass houses, better schools and interesting TV programmes.
2. 接着写Mary的梦想：Mary dreams there are no wars, kind people and fewer cars.
3. 最后写Tom的梦想：Tom hopes there are many computers and robots, more money and time to do what they like.
调整语句使连贯，形成完整短文。
【答案】
Children’s dreams
Jack, Mary and Tom have got different dreams. In Jack’s dream, there are glass houses. They are beautiful. And students have got better schools. They can watch interesting TV programmes at weekends. Mary dreams there are no wars. People are all kind. There are no bad people. She also dreams there are fewer cars. What about Tom? In his dream, there are many computers and robots. They can help people a lot. People have got more money and time to do things they like.
【知识点】
英语话题写作、词汇运用、语句连贯
【点评】
范文紧扣主题，完整覆盖所有提示信息，语句通顺连贯，符合字数要求，是一篇符合题目要求的优秀短文。
【难度系数】
0.6