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不知不觉中你的初中生活已经开始一段时间了，你一定认识了一些新朋友。请你以“My best friend”为题，写一篇90词左右的英语短文，介绍你最好的一位朋友。
素材积累
储备金句，提升语言质感
[开头句]
1. My name is Daniel.
2. I come from Nanjing.
3. I'm 12 years old.
4. I live with my family in Beijing.
[中间句]
1. My hair is very short, and I wear glasses.
2. I like all the lessons at school.
3. I'm interested in music.
4. He often plays football after school.
[结尾句]
1. They are all very nice/kind to me.
2. Do you want to be my friend?
3. I want to be a good singer in the future.
[名言警句]
1. We have friends all over the world.
我们的朋友遍天下。
2. To know oneself is true progress.
人贵有自知之明。
3. Different strokes for different folks.
萝卜白菜，各有所爱。
品读范文，拆解核心技巧
不知不觉中你的初中生活已经开始一段时间了，你一定认识了一些新朋友。请你以“My best friend”为题，写一篇90词左右的英语短文，介绍你最好的一位朋友。
素材积累
储备金句，提升语言质感
[开头句]
1. My name is Daniel.
2. I come from Nanjing.
3. I'm 12 years old.
4. I live with my family in Beijing.
[中间句]
1. My hair is very short, and I wear glasses.
2. I like all the lessons at school.
3. I'm interested in music.
4. He often plays football after school.
[结尾句]
1. They are all very nice/kind to me.
2. Do you want to be my friend?
3. I want to be a good singer in the future.
[名言警句]
1. We have friends all over the world.
我们的朋友遍天下。
2. To know oneself is true progress.
人贵有自知之明。
3. Different strokes for different folks.
萝卜白菜，各有所爱。
答案
My best friend
I have many new friends in my new middle school, and Li Ming is my best friend. He is 12 years old, and we are both in Class 3, Grade 7. He is tall and strong, and he has a pair of big bright eyes.
His favourite subject is Maths, and he is good at it. He likes playing basketball very much, because it makes him strong and happy. He often plays it with me after school.
Li Ming is very kind. He always helps me with my Maths problems, and I learn a lot from him. We are great friends.
I have many new friends in my new middle school, and Li Ming is my best friend. He is 12 years old, and we are both in Class 3, Grade 7. He is tall and strong, and he has a pair of big bright eyes.
His favourite subject is Maths, and he is good at it. He likes playing basketball very much, because it makes him strong and happy. He often plays it with me after school.
Li Ming is very kind. He always helps me with my Maths problems, and I learn a lot from him. We are great friends.
解析
【分析】
本题要求以“My best friend”为题写一篇90词左右的英语短文，介绍初中阶段认识的最好的朋友。解题思路：1. 开篇点题，明确好友的姓名、年龄、班级等基本信息；2. 描写好友的外貌特征，用合适的形容词勾勒形象；3. 介绍兴趣爱好，运用不同句式表达喜好，搭配原因状语从句说明理由，避免句式重复；4. 通过具体事例刻画性格优点，收尾点明友谊，使文章结构完整。
【解析】
按照以下步骤写作：1. 开篇：用“I have many new friends in my new middle school, and... is my best friend.”点题，补充年龄、班级等基本信息；2. 外貌描写：用“tall and strong”“big bright eyes”等形容词勾勒形象；3. 兴趣爱好：用“His favourite subject is... ”“He likes... very much, because... ”的不同句式，说明喜好及原因，加入具体活动；4. 性格刻画：用具体事例（帮助解决数学问题）体现性格，收尾点明友谊，控制词数在90左右。
【答案】
My best friend
I have many new friends in my new middle school, and Li Ming is my best friend. He is 12 years old, and we are both in Class 3, Grade 7. He is tall and strong, and he has a pair of big bright eyes.
His favourite subject is Maths, and he is good at it. He likes playing basketball very much, because it makes him strong and happy. He often plays it with me after school.
Li Ming is very kind. He always helps me with my Maths problems, and I learn a lot from him. We are great friends.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、人物描写、句式运用
【点评】
这篇作文符合题目要求，结构清晰，层层递进，从基本信息到外貌、爱好、性格展开，句式丰富多样，用原因状语从句解释喜好理由，具体事例体现性格，语言流畅自然，是一篇优秀的初中英语写作文。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求以“My best friend”为题写一篇90词左右的英语短文，介绍初中阶段认识的最好的朋友。解题思路：1. 开篇点题，明确好友的姓名、年龄、班级等基本信息；2. 描写好友的外貌特征，用合适的形容词勾勒形象；3. 介绍兴趣爱好，运用不同句式表达喜好，搭配原因状语从句说明理由，避免句式重复；4. 通过具体事例刻画性格优点，收尾点明友谊，使文章结构完整。
【解析】
按照以下步骤写作：1. 开篇：用“I have many new friends in my new middle school, and... is my best friend.”点题，补充年龄、班级等基本信息；2. 外貌描写：用“tall and strong”“big bright eyes”等形容词勾勒形象；3. 兴趣爱好：用“His favourite subject is... ”“He likes... very much, because... ”的不同句式，说明喜好及原因，加入具体活动；4. 性格刻画：用具体事例（帮助解决数学问题）体现性格，收尾点明友谊，控制词数在90左右。
【答案】
My best friend
I have many new friends in my new middle school, and Li Ming is my best friend. He is 12 years old, and we are both in Class 3, Grade 7. He is tall and strong, and he has a pair of big bright eyes.
His favourite subject is Maths, and he is good at it. He likes playing basketball very much, because it makes him strong and happy. He often plays it with me after school.
Li Ming is very kind. He always helps me with my Maths problems, and I learn a lot from him. We are great friends.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、人物描写、句式运用
【点评】
这篇作文符合题目要求，结构清晰，层层递进，从基本信息到外貌、爱好、性格展开，句式丰富多样，用原因状语从句解释喜好理由，具体事例体现性格，语言流畅自然，是一篇优秀的初中英语写作文。
【难度系数】
0.6
