登录
话题概述
本单元的主题是“我的家乡”，要求学生能用所学的词汇和句型介绍自己的家乡。与此相关的写作维度有：①介绍家乡的自然环境；②介绍家乡的人文环境。
考查学生介绍家乡的文章的命题方式有多种，如：根据文字叙述、表格信息和思维导图等，写一篇说明文、回一封信、发一封电子邮件等。通常要介绍：具体位置、自然环境、著名的物产和景点、可做的事情、对家乡的评价和期待等内容。
写作实例
月是故乡明，无论在哪里，家乡永远是我们心中最美的地方。请以“My hometown”为题，用英文写一篇100词左右的短文介绍自己的家乡。要点如下：
1. 家乡的地理位置和历史；
2. 家乡著名的物产、景点以及可做的事情；
3. 对家乡的评价和期待。
My hometown
审题指导
1. 体裁：说明文 2. 时态：以一般现在时为主 3. 人称：以第二、三人称为主
4. 必备词汇：①in the south - east of位于……的东南部 ②a beautiful city一座美丽的城市 ③with a history of more than 2,500 years拥有2,500多年的历史 ④be famous for以……闻名 ⑤traditional Chinese garden中国传统园林 ⑥visit the gardens参观园林 ⑦have a chance to do sth.有机会做某事 ⑧better and better越来越好 ⑨in the future在未来
谋篇布局
佳作剖析
教材原文
P40 It takes about an hour by train to get to... from...
P31... with a history of more than... years
P33 Visit the garden and enjoy beautiful views
P31... attracts people from all over the world.
P32 Feeling hungry? Try some delicious... You'll love...
优秀范文
My hometown
Suzhou is my hometown. It's in the south - east of① Jiangsu Province. It takes about an hour by train to get to Shanghai from Suzhou.① It is a beautiful city with a history of① more than 2,500 years.
Suzhou is an important center for China's silk industry. It is famous for② its traditional Chinese gardens as well. You can visit the gardens and enjoy beautiful views. They attract people from all over the world②. You can also have a chance to② enjoy Kunqu Opera here. Feeling hungry? Try some delicious Suzhou - style noodles in one of the local restaurants. You will love them.
Suzhou is a wonderful place to live. I hope my hometown will be better and better③ in the future.
亮点评析
①该段使用固定短语in the south - east of、with a history of、固定句型It takes... to do sth.来介绍家乡的位置和历史。
②该段使用的固定搭配be famous for、all over the world和have a chance to do sth.提升了文章档次。
③使用高级词汇better and better表达对家乡的美好期待。
以读促写
以下内容摘自本单元所选题目
①enjoy the beautiful view欣赏美景 ②many interesting places许多有趣的地方 ③see the natural beauty领略自然风光 ④the best place to shop最佳购物场所 ⑤enjoy traditional Chinese food品尝传统中式美食 ⑥feel warm and comfortable感到温暖舒适 ⑦know each other相互了解 ⑧People now live a much better life than before.人们现在的生活比过去的好多了。
我的家乡
写作实战
答案（含基础版范文和进阶版范文）D15
假设你是Simon，芳菲四月，油菜花开，春天正是你家乡最美的季节，请你根据以下提示给你的朋友Tom写一封信，介绍你的家乡并邀请他来你的家乡游玩。要点提示：
1. What's your hometown like? 2. What's around your hometown?
3. What do the people often do in spring? 4. What do you think of the people in your hometown?
写作要求：1. 要点齐全，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；2. 词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
What beautiful weather! I would like to invite you to my hometown.
It is a good place to live. I hope you can come and visit my hometown soon.
Yours,
Simon
本单元的主题是“我的家乡”，要求学生能用所学的词汇和句型介绍自己的家乡。与此相关的写作维度有：①介绍家乡的自然环境；②介绍家乡的人文环境。
考查学生介绍家乡的文章的命题方式有多种，如：根据文字叙述、表格信息和思维导图等，写一篇说明文、回一封信、发一封电子邮件等。通常要介绍：具体位置、自然环境、著名的物产和景点、可做的事情、对家乡的评价和期待等内容。
写作实例
月是故乡明，无论在哪里，家乡永远是我们心中最美的地方。请以“My hometown”为题，用英文写一篇100词左右的短文介绍自己的家乡。要点如下：
1. 家乡的地理位置和历史；
2. 家乡著名的物产、景点以及可做的事情；
3. 对家乡的评价和期待。
My hometown
审题指导
1. 体裁：说明文 2. 时态：以一般现在时为主 3. 人称：以第二、三人称为主
4. 必备词汇：①in the south - east of位于……的东南部 ②a beautiful city一座美丽的城市 ③with a history of more than 2,500 years拥有2,500多年的历史 ④be famous for以……闻名 ⑤traditional Chinese garden中国传统园林 ⑥visit the gardens参观园林 ⑦have a chance to do sth.有机会做某事 ⑧better and better越来越好 ⑨in the future在未来
谋篇布局
佳作剖析
教材原文
P40 It takes about an hour by train to get to... from...
P31... with a history of more than... years
P33 Visit the garden and enjoy beautiful views
P31... attracts people from all over the world.
P32 Feeling hungry? Try some delicious... You'll love...
优秀范文
My hometown
Suzhou is my hometown. It's in the south - east of① Jiangsu Province. It takes about an hour by train to get to Shanghai from Suzhou.① It is a beautiful city with a history of① more than 2,500 years.
Suzhou is an important center for China's silk industry. It is famous for② its traditional Chinese gardens as well. You can visit the gardens and enjoy beautiful views. They attract people from all over the world②. You can also have a chance to② enjoy Kunqu Opera here. Feeling hungry? Try some delicious Suzhou - style noodles in one of the local restaurants. You will love them.
Suzhou is a wonderful place to live. I hope my hometown will be better and better③ in the future.
亮点评析
①该段使用固定短语in the south - east of、with a history of、固定句型It takes... to do sth.来介绍家乡的位置和历史。
②该段使用的固定搭配be famous for、all over the world和have a chance to do sth.提升了文章档次。
③使用高级词汇better and better表达对家乡的美好期待。
以读促写
以下内容摘自本单元所选题目
①enjoy the beautiful view欣赏美景 ②many interesting places许多有趣的地方 ③see the natural beauty领略自然风光 ④the best place to shop最佳购物场所 ⑤enjoy traditional Chinese food品尝传统中式美食 ⑥feel warm and comfortable感到温暖舒适 ⑦know each other相互了解 ⑧People now live a much better life than before.人们现在的生活比过去的好多了。
我的家乡
写作实战
答案（含基础版范文和进阶版范文）D15
假设你是Simon，芳菲四月，油菜花开，春天正是你家乡最美的季节，请你根据以下提示给你的朋友Tom写一封信，介绍你的家乡并邀请他来你的家乡游玩。要点提示：
1. What's your hometown like? 2. What's around your hometown?
3. What do the people often do in spring? 4. What do you think of the people in your hometown?
写作要求：1. 要点齐全，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；2. 词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
What beautiful weather! I would like to invite you to my hometown.
It is a good place to live. I hope you can come and visit my hometown soon.
Yours,
Simon
答案
My hometownSuzhou is an ancient city. It’s in the south-east of Jiangsu Province. It takes about one hour by high-speed rail to Shanghai from Suzhou. It is a beautiful city with a history of more than 2,500 years.Suzhou is an important center for traditional culture. It is famous for its classical gardens. You can visit well-known gardens like the Humble Administrator's Garden. They attract people from all over the world. You can also have a nice food experience. Try some local snacks such as osmanthus cakes.Suzhou is a fantastic place to live and visit. I hope my hometown will become more beautiful and popular in the future.
基础版范文Dear Tom,What beautiful weather! I would like to invite you to my hometown.My hometown is a beautiful town. There are trees and flowers everywhere. People can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing. There are also some big shopping malls and supermarkets. Most things are not expensive. You can go shopping and eat delicious food there.In spring, I often go to the park with my friends. We row a boat on the lake and enjoy beautiful flowers. Sometimes we go camping in the hills. People here are very friendly and helpful. If you have any problems, they are ready to help you.It is a good place to live. I hope you can come and visit my hometown soon.Yours,Simon
进阶版范文Dear Tom,What beautiful weather! I would like to invite you to my hometown.My hometown is a beautiful town with many lakes and parks. There are trees and flowers everywhere. People can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing. There are also some big shopping malls and supermarkets. You can buy all kinds of things you like and try traditional delicious food there.In spring, I as well as my friends often go rowing in the park or go camping in the hills. We always enjoy ourselves together. People here are very friendly. They greet each other with a smile on the way. They are also very helpful. If you have any problems, they are willing to help you any time.It is a good place to live. I hope you can come and visit my hometown soon.Yours,Simon
基础版范文Dear Tom,What beautiful weather! I would like to invite you to my hometown.My hometown is a beautiful town. There are trees and flowers everywhere. People can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing. There are also some big shopping malls and supermarkets. Most things are not expensive. You can go shopping and eat delicious food there.In spring, I often go to the park with my friends. We row a boat on the lake and enjoy beautiful flowers. Sometimes we go camping in the hills. People here are very friendly and helpful. If you have any problems, they are ready to help you.It is a good place to live. I hope you can come and visit my hometown soon.Yours,Simon
进阶版范文Dear Tom,What beautiful weather! I would like to invite you to my hometown.My hometown is a beautiful town with many lakes and parks. There are trees and flowers everywhere. People can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing. There are also some big shopping malls and supermarkets. You can buy all kinds of things you like and try traditional delicious food there.In spring, I as well as my friends often go rowing in the park or go camping in the hills. We always enjoy ourselves together. People here are very friendly. They greet each other with a smile on the way. They are also very helpful. If you have any problems, they are willing to help you any time.It is a good place to live. I hope you can come and visit my hometown soon.Yours,Simon
解析
【分析】
本题是英语邀请信写作题，需先明确审题要点：体裁为邀请信，时态以一般现在时为主，人称用第一、第三人称；写作需覆盖4个核心要点：家乡样貌、周边环境、春天活动、家乡人的特点，词数要求90左右，开头结尾已给出。解题思路：先承接开头介绍家乡整体情况，再写春天特色活动，接着描述家乡人的性格，最后自然衔接结尾，确保内容连贯、要点齐全，运用课标内的词汇和句型。
【解析】
1. 承接开头介绍家乡整体：用“There be”句型描述家乡的环境（树、花）和设施（商场、超市），体现宜居性；
2. 写春天活动：用“go rowing”“go camping”等动词短语，结合和朋友的活动，突出春天特色；
3. 介绍家乡人特点：用“friendly”“helpful”等形容词，结合“遇到问题会帮忙”的场景，展现家乡人的品质；
4. 衔接结尾：自然引出邀请，保证内容连贯，符合书信格式。
【答案】
Dear Tom,
What beautiful weather! I would like to invite you to my hometown.
My hometown is a beautiful town. There are trees and flowers everywhere. People can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing. There are also some big shopping malls and supermarkets. Most things are not expensive. You can go shopping and eat delicious food there.
In spring, I often go to the park with my friends. We row a boat on the lake and enjoy beautiful flowers. Sometimes we go camping in the hills. People here are very friendly and helpful. If you have any problems, they are ready to help you.
It is a good place to live. I hope you can come and visit my hometown soon.
Yours,
Simon
【知识点】
英语邀请信写作、一般现在时运用、常用动词短语
【点评】
本题以邀请信形式考查学生介绍家乡的英语写作能力，要求覆盖指定要点，内容连贯，贴近学生生活实际，符合初中英语写作的考查要求，能有效提升学生的语言组织与运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题是英语邀请信写作题，需先明确审题要点：体裁为邀请信，时态以一般现在时为主，人称用第一、第三人称；写作需覆盖4个核心要点：家乡样貌、周边环境、春天活动、家乡人的特点，词数要求90左右，开头结尾已给出。解题思路：先承接开头介绍家乡整体情况，再写春天特色活动，接着描述家乡人的性格，最后自然衔接结尾，确保内容连贯、要点齐全，运用课标内的词汇和句型。
【解析】
1. 承接开头介绍家乡整体：用“There be”句型描述家乡的环境（树、花）和设施（商场、超市），体现宜居性；
2. 写春天活动：用“go rowing”“go camping”等动词短语，结合和朋友的活动，突出春天特色；
3. 介绍家乡人特点：用“friendly”“helpful”等形容词，结合“遇到问题会帮忙”的场景，展现家乡人的品质；
4. 衔接结尾：自然引出邀请，保证内容连贯，符合书信格式。
【答案】
Dear Tom,
What beautiful weather! I would like to invite you to my hometown.
My hometown is a beautiful town. There are trees and flowers everywhere. People can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing. There are also some big shopping malls and supermarkets. Most things are not expensive. You can go shopping and eat delicious food there.
In spring, I often go to the park with my friends. We row a boat on the lake and enjoy beautiful flowers. Sometimes we go camping in the hills. People here are very friendly and helpful. If you have any problems, they are ready to help you.
It is a good place to live. I hope you can come and visit my hometown soon.
Yours,
Simon
【知识点】
英语邀请信写作、一般现在时运用、常用动词短语
【点评】
本题以邀请信形式考查学生介绍家乡的英语写作能力，要求覆盖指定要点，内容连贯，贴近学生生活实际，符合初中英语写作的考查要求，能有效提升学生的语言组织与运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.5
