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每个人心中都有一个英雄。他/她可能是著名的科学家、勇敢的航天员，也可能是你身边平凡的亲人、老师或朋友。他/她的品质、行为或成就深深影响着你，成为你学习的榜样。请你根据以下提示，以“My hero”为题，写一篇英语短文，向大家介绍你的英雄。
提示:(1) Who is your hero?
(2) What's his/her story?
(3) Why is he/she your hero?
(4) How does his/her story influence you?
要求:(1) 短文必须包含所给要点,可适当发挥;
(2) 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
(3) 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
(4) 不少于80词(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
My hero
Everyone has his or her hero.
提示:(1) Who is your hero?
(2) What's his/her story?
(3) Why is he/she your hero?
(4) How does his/her story influence you?
要求:(1) 短文必须包含所给要点,可适当发挥;
(2) 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
(3) 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
(4) 不少于80词(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
My hero
Everyone has his or her hero.
My hero is my father, who is not a famous scientist or an astronaut, but an ordinary worker with a warm and strong heart.
My father is a man of great diligence and kindness. He always gets up early and comes home late, even though his work is physically tiring, he never complains about the hardship.
What's more, he is always ready to lend a helping hand to those in need.
Once, after a long day's tiring work, he still helped an elderly neighbour carry heavy furniture upstairs without hesitation.
It is his selflessness and sense of responsibility that make me admire him deeply.
He sets a perfect example for me to be a responsible and caring person.
His story has a profound influence on my life.
Inspired by his hard work, I always push myself to study hard and never give up easily.
I also follow his example to help my classmates and friends whenever they are in trouble, and I truly find happiness in giving a hand to others.
答案
Period 8 Assessment & Further study(单元主题写作)
One possible version:
My hero
Everyone has his or her hero. My hero is my father, who is not a famous scientist or an astronaut, but an ordinary worker with a warm and strong heart.
My father is a man of great diligence and kindness. He always gets up early and comes home late, even though his work is physically tiring, he never complains about the hardship. What's more, he is always ready to lend a helping hand to those in need. Once, after a long day's tiring work, he still helped an elderly neighbour carry heavy furniture upstairs without hesitation. It is his selflessness and sense of responsibility that make me admire him deeply. He sets a perfect example for me to be a responsible and caring person.
His story has a profound influence on my life. Inspired by his hard work, I always push myself to study hard and never give up easily. I also follow his example to help my classmates and friends whenever they are in trouble, and I truly find happiness in giving a hand to others.
One possible version:
My hero
Everyone has his or her hero. My hero is my father, who is not a famous scientist or an astronaut, but an ordinary worker with a warm and strong heart.
My father is a man of great diligence and kindness. He always gets up early and comes home late, even though his work is physically tiring, he never complains about the hardship. What's more, he is always ready to lend a helping hand to those in need. Once, after a long day's tiring work, he still helped an elderly neighbour carry heavy furniture upstairs without hesitation. It is his selflessness and sense of responsibility that make me admire him deeply. He sets a perfect example for me to be a responsible and caring person.
His story has a profound influence on my life. Inspired by his hard work, I always push myself to study hard and never give up easily. I also follow his example to help my classmates and friends whenever they are in trouble, and I truly find happiness in giving a hand to others.
解析
【分析】本题为英语话题写作题，要求以“My hero”为题，围绕四个提示要点完成短文。解题思路：首先确定写作对象（如身边平凡的亲人，易结合事例）；其次紧扣提示要点构思内容：①点明英雄身份；②讲述相关事迹；③说明崇拜原因；④阐述对自己的影响；最后检查是否符合字数、无真实信息、语句通顺等要求。
【解析】1. 确定写作对象：选择父亲作为英雄，贴近生活易选材；2. 紧扣要点组织内容：①开篇点明英雄是平凡的父亲；②讲述父亲勤奋工作、帮邻居搬家具的事例；③说明崇拜父亲的原因（无私、有责任感）；④阐述父亲对自己的影响（努力学习、乐于助人）；3. 检查写作要求：确保无真实信息、语句连贯、字数达标。
【答案】My hero
Everyone has his or her hero. My hero is my father, who is not a famous scientist or an astronaut, but an ordinary worker with a warm and strong heart.
My father is a man of great diligence and kindness. He always gets up early and comes home late, even though his work is physically tiring, he never complains about the hardship. What's more, he is always ready to lend a helping hand to those in need. Once, after a long day's tiring work, he still helped an elderly neighbour carry heavy furniture upstairs without hesitation. It is his selflessness and sense of responsibility that make me admire him deeply. He sets a perfect example for me to be a responsible and caring person.
His story has a profound influence on my life. Inspired by his hard work, I always push myself to study hard and never give up easily. I also follow his example to help my classmates and friends whenever they are in trouble, and I truly find happiness in giving a hand to others.
【知识点】英语话题写作、要点式写作、记叙文写作
【点评】本题考查学生围绕指定话题和要点进行书面表达的能力，要求学生结合生活事例清晰表达人物特质及影响，注重语言连贯性与情感真实性，符合初中英语写作的考查方向。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】1. 确定写作对象：选择父亲作为英雄，贴近生活易选材；2. 紧扣要点组织内容：①开篇点明英雄是平凡的父亲；②讲述父亲勤奋工作、帮邻居搬家具的事例；③说明崇拜父亲的原因（无私、有责任感）；④阐述父亲对自己的影响（努力学习、乐于助人）；3. 检查写作要求：确保无真实信息、语句连贯、字数达标。
【答案】My hero
Everyone has his or her hero. My hero is my father, who is not a famous scientist or an astronaut, but an ordinary worker with a warm and strong heart.
My father is a man of great diligence and kindness. He always gets up early and comes home late, even though his work is physically tiring, he never complains about the hardship. What's more, he is always ready to lend a helping hand to those in need. Once, after a long day's tiring work, he still helped an elderly neighbour carry heavy furniture upstairs without hesitation. It is his selflessness and sense of responsibility that make me admire him deeply. He sets a perfect example for me to be a responsible and caring person.
His story has a profound influence on my life. Inspired by his hard work, I always push myself to study hard and never give up easily. I also follow his example to help my classmates and friends whenever they are in trouble, and I truly find happiness in giving a hand to others.
【知识点】英语话题写作、要点式写作、记叙文写作
【点评】本题考查学生围绕指定话题和要点进行书面表达的能力，要求学生结合生活事例清晰表达人物特质及影响，注重语言连贯性与情感真实性，符合初中英语写作的考查方向。
【难度系数】0.5
