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七、书面表达(共1大题,满分20分)
假如你是李华,你所在的学校正在开展"争做阳光好少年"的英语主题演讲活动。请你根据以下
1. Do you like reading?
2. What's your favourite sport?
3. What do you usually eat every day?
4. Something more about it.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数80左右;开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone!
My name is Li Hua. Today I'm happy to share my ideas about how to be a sunny student.
That's all. Thanks for your listening!
假如你是李华,你所在的学校正在开展"争做阳光好少年"的英语主题演讲活动。请你根据以下
内
容
提
示
,围绕自己的生活,用英语写一篇演讲稿。内
容
提
示
:1. Do you like reading?
2. What's your favourite sport?
3. What do you usually eat every day?
4. Something more about it.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数80左右;开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone!
My name is Li Hua. Today I'm happy to share my ideas about how to be a sunny student.
That's all. Thanks for your listening!
答案
[参考范文]
Hello, everyone!
My name is Li Hua. Today I'm happy to share my ideas about how to be a sunny student.
First of all, we should read many good books. Books can open our mind and make us think. They not only give us knowledge but also teach us how to be a better person. Secondly, exercising is a good way to build up our body. It's important for us to do sport regularly. I play basketball in PE class and on the weekends. It's my favourite sport. Besides, we'd better eat healthy food. I usually eat rice, vegetables, and fruit every day. I also drink milk. They are good for my body.
All in all, we should be good students who are hard-working and healthy. Let's take action now.
That's all. Thanks for your listening!
Hello, everyone!
My name is Li Hua. Today I'm happy to share my ideas about how to be a sunny student.
First of all, we should read many good books. Books can open our mind and make us think. They not only give us knowledge but also teach us how to be a better person. Secondly, exercising is a good way to build up our body. It's important for us to do sport regularly. I play basketball in PE class and on the weekends. It's my favourite sport. Besides, we'd better eat healthy food. I usually eat rice, vegetables, and fruit every day. I also drink milk. They are good for my body.
All in all, we should be good students who are hard-working and healthy. Let's take action now.
That's all. Thanks for your listening!
解析
【分析】
首先，我们要明确这是一篇“争做阳光好少年”主题的英语演讲稿，需紧扣题目给出的4个提示点展开写作。第一步，先回应“是否喜欢阅读”，要说明阅读的益处，比如开阔思维、增长知识；第二步，介绍自己最爱的运动，同时说明运动的频率和对身体的好处；第三步，描述日常的健康饮食，列举具体食物；第四步，补充相关内容，比如总结如何成为阳光少年并发出呼吁。写作时要注意用First of all, Secondly, Besides这类衔接词让逻辑更清晰，语言要符合演讲稿正式且亲切的语气，控制词数在要求范围内。
【解析】
1. 开篇承接给定开头，点明演讲主题后，首先围绕“阅读”展开：用“First of all, we should read many good books.”引出，接着说明阅读的作用“Books can open our mind and make us think. They not only give us knowledge but also teach us how to be a better person.”，回应第一个提示点。
2. 接着讲运动：用“Secondly”衔接，点明运动对身体的好处“It's important for us to do sport regularly.”，然后介绍自己最爱的篮球及运动时间“I play basketball in PE class and on the weekends. It's my favourite sport.”，回应第二个提示点。
3. 然后描述日常饮食：用“Besides”过渡，说明健康饮食的重要性，列举自己常吃的健康食物“I usually eat rice, vegetables, and fruit every day. I also drink milk. They are good for my body.”，回应第三个提示点。
4. 最后补充总结：用“All in all”总结如何成为阳光少年，并发出呼吁“Let's take action now.”，回应第四个提示点，最后衔接给定结尾。
【答案】
Hello, everyone!
My name is Li Hua. Today I'm happy to share my ideas about how to be a sunny student.
First of all, we should read many good books. Books can open our mind and make us think. They not only give us knowledge but also teach us how to be a better person. Secondly, exercising is a good way to build up our body. It's important for us to do sport regularly. I play basketball in PE class and on the weekends. It's my favourite sport. Besides, we'd better eat healthy food. I usually eat rice, vegetables, and fruit every day. I also drink milk. They are good for my body.
All in all, we should be good students who are hard-working and healthy. Let's take action now.
That's all. Thanks for your listening!
【知识点】
1. 英语演讲稿写作
2. 健康生活话题表达
3. 衔接词的运用
【点评】
本文紧扣“争做阳光好少年”的主题，内容全面覆盖题目所有提示点，结构清晰，使用First of all, Secondly, Besides等衔接词使段落逻辑连贯，语言简洁准确，符合演讲稿的语境与要求，是一篇规范易模仿的范文。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先，我们要明确这是一篇“争做阳光好少年”主题的英语演讲稿，需紧扣题目给出的4个提示点展开写作。第一步，先回应“是否喜欢阅读”，要说明阅读的益处，比如开阔思维、增长知识；第二步，介绍自己最爱的运动，同时说明运动的频率和对身体的好处；第三步，描述日常的健康饮食，列举具体食物；第四步，补充相关内容，比如总结如何成为阳光少年并发出呼吁。写作时要注意用First of all, Secondly, Besides这类衔接词让逻辑更清晰，语言要符合演讲稿正式且亲切的语气，控制词数在要求范围内。
【解析】
1. 开篇承接给定开头，点明演讲主题后，首先围绕“阅读”展开：用“First of all, we should read many good books.”引出，接着说明阅读的作用“Books can open our mind and make us think. They not only give us knowledge but also teach us how to be a better person.”，回应第一个提示点。
2. 接着讲运动：用“Secondly”衔接，点明运动对身体的好处“It's important for us to do sport regularly.”，然后介绍自己最爱的篮球及运动时间“I play basketball in PE class and on the weekends. It's my favourite sport.”，回应第二个提示点。
3. 然后描述日常饮食：用“Besides”过渡，说明健康饮食的重要性，列举自己常吃的健康食物“I usually eat rice, vegetables, and fruit every day. I also drink milk. They are good for my body.”，回应第三个提示点。
4. 最后补充总结：用“All in all”总结如何成为阳光少年，并发出呼吁“Let's take action now.”，回应第四个提示点，最后衔接给定结尾。
【答案】
Hello, everyone!
My name is Li Hua. Today I'm happy to share my ideas about how to be a sunny student.
First of all, we should read many good books. Books can open our mind and make us think. They not only give us knowledge but also teach us how to be a better person. Secondly, exercising is a good way to build up our body. It's important for us to do sport regularly. I play basketball in PE class and on the weekends. It's my favourite sport. Besides, we'd better eat healthy food. I usually eat rice, vegetables, and fruit every day. I also drink milk. They are good for my body.
All in all, we should be good students who are hard-working and healthy. Let's take action now.
That's all. Thanks for your listening!
【知识点】
1. 英语演讲稿写作
2. 健康生活话题表达
3. 衔接词的运用
【点评】
本文紧扣“争做阳光好少年”的主题，内容全面覆盖题目所有提示点，结构清晰，使用First of all, Secondly, Besides等衔接词使段落逻辑连贯，语言简洁准确，符合演讲稿的语境与要求，是一篇规范易模仿的范文。
【难度系数】
0.7
