2026年亮点给力大试卷五年级英语上册译林版第54页答案
七 书面表达。(6分)
合理的课间休息,让我们的校园学习张弛有度。延长课间休息时间到15分钟,让孩子们有更多的时间走出教室,放松身心,快乐、安全地成长。假如你是亮亮,请以“My safe and colourful breaks”为题,写一篇英语短文。短文必须包括图示中所有要点,可以适当发挥,不少于6句话,已给出部分不计入总句数。

My safe and colourful breaks
Hello, I’m Liangliang. I want to tell you about my safe and colourful breaks.
First, we should follow the safety tips. We shouldn't push classmates or fight with them, and we should stay away from dangerous games. Also, we shouldn't run in the hallways. It's not safe.

Second, for colourful moments, I often do easy sport, such as skipping and playing basketball, with my friends. Sometimes I read short stories or talk with my classmates. I also have healthy food like fresh fruit and milk. These breaks help me relax and get ready for the next class. I love my breaks!

答案

示例:
My safe and colourful breaks
Hello, I'm Liangliang. I want to tell you about my safe and colourful breaks. First, we should follow the safety tips. We shouldn't push classmates or fight with them, and we should stay away from dangerous games. Also, we shouldn't run in the hallways. It's not safe. Second, for colourful moments, I often do easy sport, such as skipping and playing basketball, with my friends. Sometimes I read short stories or talk with my classmates. I also have healthy food like fresh fruit and milk. These breaks help me relax and get ready for the next class. I love my breaks!

解析

【分析】本题是英语书面表达题,要求以亮亮的身份围绕“My safe and colourful breaks”主题写作,需涵盖思维导图中的所有要点,分为安全提示和多彩时刻两部分,还要适当发挥,不少于6句话。解题时,先明确文章结构:开头已给出,接着先写安全相关内容,把“不推搡同学、不打架、远离危险游戏”等要点用正确英语表达,可补充合理安全建议;再写多彩时刻,包含“做简单运动、吃健康食物”,适当举例;最后总结感受,呼应主题,保证语句通顺、符合英语表达习惯。
【解析】首先承接开头,先阐述安全提示:用英语写出“我们不应推搡或与同学打架,要远离危险游戏,还可补充不在走廊奔跑等安全建议”;然后写多彩时刻:说明自己常做简单运动(如跳绳)、吃健康食物(如新鲜水果),还可适当添加和同学交流等内容;最后总结这些课间休息帮助自己放松,为下节课做好准备,完成短文。
【答案】My safe and colourful breaks
Hello, I'm Liangliang. I want to tell you about my safe and colourful breaks. First, we should follow the safety tips. We shouldn't push classmates or fight with them, and we should stay away from dangerous games. Also, we shouldn't run in the hallways. It's not safe. Second, for colourful moments, I often do easy sport, such as skipping and playing basketball, with my friends. Sometimes I read short stories or talk with my classmates. I also have healthy food like fresh fruit and milk. These breaks help me relax and get ready for the next class. I love my breaks!
【知识点】英语书面表达,要点整合,英语句式运用
【点评】本题结合贴近学生生活的主题和思维导图,考查学生的英语写作能力,要求涵盖指定要点并适当发挥,既考查基础英语表达,又锻炼逻辑组织能力,难度适中。
【难度系数】0.3