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初阶作文
Dear Mark,
I'm glad to hear from you. The Spring Festival is a new start for us Chinese. For the coming year, I've made a few resolutions.
First, I want to improve my study habits about English. ① I plan to read more books and watch English movies to increase my vocabulary. To keep this resolution ②, I will spend at least half an hour each day on reading and listening practice. Second, I hope to be healthier this year. I will start exercising regularly and eat more fruits and vegetables. These resolutions are about my self-improvement and health. ③ Making small changes gradually will help me keep these resolutions. ④
Thank you for asking, and I want to hear about your plans as well ⑤!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
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高阶作文
Dear Mark,
I'm glad to hear from you. The Spring Festival is a new start for us Chinese. For the coming year, I've made a few resolutions.
First, I want to improve my study habits, especially in learning English. ① I plan to read more books and watch English movies to increase my vocabulary. In order to keep this resolution ②, I will spend at least half an hour each day on reading and listening practice. Second, I hope to be healthier this year. I will start exercising regularly and eat more fruits and vegetables. These resolutions have to do with my self-improvement and health. ③ I believe making small changes gradually will help me keep these resolutions. ④
Thank you for asking, and I look forward to hearing about your plans as well ⑤!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
（高阶作文批注：
用especially in learning English替换about English，升级表达
用In order to替换To，升级词汇
用have to do with替换are about，升级短语
添加I believe，变成含有宾语从句的复合句，升级句子
用look forward to替换want to，升级短语）
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第三阶 实战强化训练
[2026福建龙岩期末]作为青少年，我们应该树立“强国有我”的远大志向，勇担民族复兴的时代大任。一份理想的职业正是践行这份担当的舞台。因此，你校英文报开展了题为“My Dream Job”的征文活动，鼓励同学们畅谈自己的理想职业。请你根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文，为此次活动投稿。
写作提示:(1) What's your dream job?
(2) Why is it your dream job?
(3) What are you going to do to get your dream job?
注意事项:(1)词数100左右,必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥;
(2)意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
(3)请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
My Dream Job
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Value statement: Dream big, plan well, work hard, smile often, and good things will happen.
Dear Mark,
I'm glad to hear from you. The Spring Festival is a new start for us Chinese. For the coming year, I've made a few resolutions.
First, I want to improve my study habits about English. ① I plan to read more books and watch English movies to increase my vocabulary. To keep this resolution ②, I will spend at least half an hour each day on reading and listening practice. Second, I hope to be healthier this year. I will start exercising regularly and eat more fruits and vegetables. These resolutions are about my self-improvement and health. ③ Making small changes gradually will help me keep these resolutions. ④
Thank you for asking, and I want to hear about your plans as well ⑤!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
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高阶作文
Dear Mark,
I'm glad to hear from you. The Spring Festival is a new start for us Chinese. For the coming year, I've made a few resolutions.
First, I want to improve my study habits, especially in learning English. ① I plan to read more books and watch English movies to increase my vocabulary. In order to keep this resolution ②, I will spend at least half an hour each day on reading and listening practice. Second, I hope to be healthier this year. I will start exercising regularly and eat more fruits and vegetables. These resolutions have to do with my self-improvement and health. ③ I believe making small changes gradually will help me keep these resolutions. ④
Thank you for asking, and I look forward to hearing about your plans as well ⑤!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
（高阶作文批注：
用especially in learning English替换about English，升级表达
用In order to替换To，升级词汇
用have to do with替换are about，升级短语
添加I believe，变成含有宾语从句的复合句，升级句子
用look forward to替换want to，升级短语）
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第三阶 实战强化训练
[2026福建龙岩期末]作为青少年，我们应该树立“强国有我”的远大志向，勇担民族复兴的时代大任。一份理想的职业正是践行这份担当的舞台。因此，你校英文报开展了题为“My Dream Job”的征文活动，鼓励同学们畅谈自己的理想职业。请你根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文，为此次活动投稿。
写作提示:(1) What's your dream job?
(2) Why is it your dream job?
(3) What are you going to do to get your dream job?
注意事项:(1)词数100左右,必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥;
(2)意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
(3)请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
My Dream Job
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Value statement: Dream big, plan well, work hard, smile often, and good things will happen.
答案
第三阶 实战强化训练
【参考范文】
My Dream Job
My dream job is to be a teacher. I have dreamt of becoming a teacher since my primary school days because my teachers were always kind and helpful. They made learning fun and inspired me a lot.
To achieve my dream, I will study hard at school now. I need to learn as much as possible. I will also practise speaking clearly and patiently, because it is important for a good teacher. I believe children are the future of our country. I want to help children learn and grow, so I can help to make our country stronger.
I truly hope my dream can come true in the future.
【参考范文】
My Dream Job
My dream job is to be a teacher. I have dreamt of becoming a teacher since my primary school days because my teachers were always kind and helpful. They made learning fun and inspired me a lot.
To achieve my dream, I will study hard at school now. I need to learn as much as possible. I will also practise speaking clearly and patiently, because it is important for a good teacher. I believe children are the future of our country. I want to help children learn and grow, so I can help to make our country stronger.
I truly hope my dream can come true in the future.
