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研学是一种很好的学习方式,它增加了学习的实践性和趣味性。假如你是李华,你参加了上周五的研学之旅,请根据下面内容提示,用英语写一篇短文,向大家介绍你的研学情况和你的研学感受。词数80-100。
▶▶审题指导
1. 文体:
2. 人称:
3. 时态:
4. 写作要点:①;②;③
▶▶思路点拨
(温馨提示:请先完成下面的写作提纲)
▶▶小试身手
My Study Trip
▶▶审题指导
1. 文体:
2. 人称:
3. 时态:
4. 写作要点:①;②;③
▶▶思路点拨
(温馨提示:请先完成下面的写作提纲)
▶▶小试身手
My Study Trip
答案
▶▶审题指导
1. 记叙文 2.第一人称 3.一般过去时 4.①研学目的地、交通方式及人物 ②研学活动 ③我的感受
▶▶思路点拨
Beginning: Where we went; How we went there
Body: What we did in the countryside
Ending: What I think of the trip and what I learnt from it
▶▶小试身手
One possible version:
【基础版】
My Study Trip
Last Friday, I took a bus to the countryside with my classmates for a study trip.
The weather was sunny, perfect for our trip. We were all excited to visit the countryside. When we got there, I saw lots of colourful flowers in the fields. They were very beautiful, so we took many photos. In the morning, we walked around the farm and helped farmers pick fruit. It was really fun to pick fruit. In the afternoon, we learnt to grow and water plants. The farmers were nice, and the countryside made me think of the old-time happy life.
When it was time to leave, I was a bit sad to say goodbye. What a wonderful experience I had! It was educational and relaxing.
【提升版】
My Study Trip
As the saying goes, "It's better to travel ten thousand miles than to read ten thousand books." Last Friday, I went on a study trip to the countryside with my classmates by bus.
The weather was sunny and warm. Everyone was excited to visit the countryside. When we arrived, I was surprised to see thousands of colourful flowers in the fields. They were so beautiful that we took many photos. In the morning, we explored the farm and helped the farmers pick fruit. I could do nothing but focus on the work, which was really fun. In the afternoon, we learnt how to grow and water the plants. The friendly farmers and the peaceful countryside reminded me of the simple and happy life in the past.
When it was time to leave, I was a bit sad to say goodbye. The trip not only brought me pleasure but also left me many beautiful memories. How I wish to go there again!
1. 记叙文 2.第一人称 3.一般过去时 4.①研学目的地、交通方式及人物 ②研学活动 ③我的感受
▶▶思路点拨
Beginning: Where we went; How we went there
Body: What we did in the countryside
Ending: What I think of the trip and what I learnt from it
▶▶小试身手
One possible version:
【基础版】
My Study Trip
Last Friday, I took a bus to the countryside with my classmates for a study trip.
The weather was sunny, perfect for our trip. We were all excited to visit the countryside. When we got there, I saw lots of colourful flowers in the fields. They were very beautiful, so we took many photos. In the morning, we walked around the farm and helped farmers pick fruit. It was really fun to pick fruit. In the afternoon, we learnt to grow and water plants. The farmers were nice, and the countryside made me think of the old-time happy life.
When it was time to leave, I was a bit sad to say goodbye. What a wonderful experience I had! It was educational and relaxing.
【提升版】
My Study Trip
As the saying goes, "It's better to travel ten thousand miles than to read ten thousand books." Last Friday, I went on a study trip to the countryside with my classmates by bus.
The weather was sunny and warm. Everyone was excited to visit the countryside. When we arrived, I was surprised to see thousands of colourful flowers in the fields. They were so beautiful that we took many photos. In the morning, we explored the farm and helped the farmers pick fruit. I could do nothing but focus on the work, which was really fun. In the afternoon, we learnt how to grow and water the plants. The friendly farmers and the peaceful countryside reminded me of the simple and happy life in the past.
When it was time to leave, I was a bit sad to say goodbye. The trip not only brought me pleasure but also left me many beautiful memories. How I wish to go there again!
