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【实战演练】
假设你是李华,你校英文报正在开展“Best Moments(精彩瞬间)”摄影照片征集活动,你想将自己与家人在海山公园游玩的照片投稿。请根据以下问题提示,写一篇有关投稿照片的英文解说文案。
• How was the weather?
• How did you get to the park?
• How long did it take you to get there?
• What were your family doing?
• What do you think of the trip?
要求:(1)文中不得出现真实的人名与校名;(2)要点齐全,可适当发挥;(3)60—80词。
假设你是李华,你校英文报正在开展“Best Moments(精彩瞬间)”摄影照片征集活动,你想将自己与家人在海山公园游玩的照片投稿。请根据以下问题提示,写一篇有关投稿照片的英文解说文案。
• How was the weather?
• How did you get to the park?
• How long did it take you to get there?
• What were your family doing?
• What do you think of the trip?
要求:(1)文中不得出现真实的人名与校名;(2)要点齐全,可适当发挥;(3)60—80词。
答案
One possible version:
It was Sunday yesterday. The weather was very hot and sunny. My family went to the park. It took us half an hour to get there by car. Look at my family. We were wearing cool clothes. Everyone was having a good time. My sister and I were playing games together. Where were my parents? My parents were under the tree. My father was playing the guitar. He is good at playing the musical instrument. And my mother was listening carefully beside him. This is such a wonderful trip that I will never forget.
(94 words)
It was Sunday yesterday. The weather was very hot and sunny. My family went to the park. It took us half an hour to get there by car. Look at my family. We were wearing cool clothes. Everyone was having a good time. My sister and I were playing games together. Where were my parents? My parents were under the tree. My father was playing the guitar. He is good at playing the musical instrument. And my mother was listening carefully beside him. This is such a wonderful trip that I will never forget.
(94 words)
解析
【分析】
审题明确：本题要求为“Best Moments”摄影投稿写英文解说文案，需覆盖天气、出行方式、耗时、家人活动、旅行感受5个要点，时态以过去时为主（描述家人当时的动作用过去进行时），禁止出现真实人名校名，字数控制在60-80词。
解题思路：1. 开篇点明时间与天气（结合图片太阳元素，确定天气晴朗）；2. 说明去公园的交通方式和耗时；3. 用过去进行时描述家人的活动（对应图片中李华与妹妹玩耍、爸爸弹吉他、妈妈倾听的场景）；4. 表达对旅行的正面感受。
注意事项：准确运用过去进行时（was/were + doing）描述过去正在进行的动作，确保所有要点齐全，语言通顺自然。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 开篇交代时间与天气：It was Sunday yesterday. The weather was hot and sunny.
2. 说明出行情况：My family went to the park by car, and it took us half an hour to arrive there.
3. 描述家人活动（用过去进行时）：My sister and I were playing games happily. My father was playing the guitar, and my mother was listening carefully beside him.
4. 表达感受：This trip was wonderful and unforgettable.
将以上内容整合，调整语句连贯，形成符合要求的文案，确保要点齐全、时态正确、字数达标。
【答案】
One possible version:
It was Sunday yesterday. The weather was very hot and sunny. My family went to the park. It took us half an hour to get there by car. Look at my family. We were wearing cool clothes. Everyone was having a good time. My sister and I were playing games together. Where were my parents? My parents were under the tree. My father was playing the guitar. He is good at playing the musical instrument. And my mother was listening carefully beside him. This is such a wonderful trip that I will never forget.
【知识点】
一般过去时、过去进行时、英文应用文写作
【点评】
本题为英语基础写作题，结合图片与提示要点考查学生的语言运用能力，要求学生准确运用时态描述过去场景，整合信息完成投稿文案，贴近学生生活实际，难度适中，能有效检验学生的英语写作基础。
【难度系数】
0.6
审题明确：本题要求为“Best Moments”摄影投稿写英文解说文案，需覆盖天气、出行方式、耗时、家人活动、旅行感受5个要点，时态以过去时为主（描述家人当时的动作用过去进行时），禁止出现真实人名校名，字数控制在60-80词。
解题思路：1. 开篇点明时间与天气（结合图片太阳元素，确定天气晴朗）；2. 说明去公园的交通方式和耗时；3. 用过去进行时描述家人的活动（对应图片中李华与妹妹玩耍、爸爸弹吉他、妈妈倾听的场景）；4. 表达对旅行的正面感受。
注意事项：准确运用过去进行时（was/were + doing）描述过去正在进行的动作，确保所有要点齐全，语言通顺自然。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 开篇交代时间与天气：It was Sunday yesterday. The weather was hot and sunny.
2. 说明出行情况：My family went to the park by car, and it took us half an hour to arrive there.
3. 描述家人活动（用过去进行时）：My sister and I were playing games happily. My father was playing the guitar, and my mother was listening carefully beside him.
4. 表达感受：This trip was wonderful and unforgettable.
将以上内容整合，调整语句连贯，形成符合要求的文案，确保要点齐全、时态正确、字数达标。
【答案】
One possible version:
It was Sunday yesterday. The weather was very hot and sunny. My family went to the park. It took us half an hour to get there by car. Look at my family. We were wearing cool clothes. Everyone was having a good time. My sister and I were playing games together. Where were my parents? My parents were under the tree. My father was playing the guitar. He is good at playing the musical instrument. And my mother was listening carefully beside him. This is such a wonderful trip that I will never forget.
【知识点】
一般过去时、过去进行时、英文应用文写作
【点评】
本题为英语基础写作题，结合图片与提示要点考查学生的语言运用能力，要求学生准确运用时态描述过去场景，整合信息完成投稿文案，贴近学生生活实际，难度适中，能有效检验学生的英语写作基础。
【难度系数】
0.6
【写作任务】
假设你是Lisa，你校英语俱乐部近期开展了以“My Favourite Animal”为题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文，向大家介绍你最喜欢的动物。
要求:(1)要点齐全,可适当发挥;(2)70词左右。
My Favourite Animal
【思路点拨】
第一步:定基调
1.主题:最喜欢的动物
2.人称:第三人称
3.时态:一般现在时为主
第二步:列提纲
| 引出话题 | Let me tell you something about them. |
| 具体展开 | huge, thick grey skin, big ears and a long trunk
feed on plants
friendly and smart
care about each other and live in groups
in great danger |
| 总结点题 | take action to protect them |
【范文展示】
My Favourite Animal
I'm Lisa. My favourite animal is the elephant. Let me tell you something about them.
Elephants are huge. They have thick grey skin, big ears and a long trunk. The trunk is so useful that it can help them drink water and even greet each other. They feed on plants. If they can't find enough food in one place, they will move to another place. They spend most of their time eating and drinking because they need a lot of food and water every day. Elephants are not only friendly but also smart. They can remember places with food and water. They care about each other and live in groups. But now elephants are in great danger. They don't have enough places to live in because people cut down trees. It's time for us to take action to protect them and let them live in the way they like.
(149 words)
【话题好句】
假设你是Lisa，你校英语俱乐部近期开展了以“My Favourite Animal”为题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文，向大家介绍你最喜欢的动物。
要求:(1)要点齐全,可适当发挥;(2)70词左右。
My Favourite Animal
【思路点拨】
第一步:定基调
1.主题:最喜欢的动物
2.人称:第三人称
3.时态:一般现在时为主
第二步:列提纲
| 引出话题 | Let me tell you something about them. |
| 具体展开 | huge, thick grey skin, big ears and a long trunk
feed on plants
friendly and smart
care about each other and live in groups
in great danger |
| 总结点题 | take action to protect them |
【范文展示】
My Favourite Animal
I'm Lisa. My favourite animal is the elephant. Let me tell you something about them.
Elephants are huge. They have thick grey skin, big ears and a long trunk. The trunk is so useful that it can help them drink water and even greet each other. They feed on plants. If they can't find enough food in one place, they will move to another place. They spend most of their time eating and drinking because they need a lot of food and water every day. Elephants are not only friendly but also smart. They can remember places with food and water. They care about each other and live in groups. But now elephants are in great danger. They don't have enough places to live in because people cut down trees. It's time for us to take action to protect them and let them live in the way they like.
(149 words)
【话题好句】
答案
My Favourite Animal
I'm Lisa. My favourite animal is the elephant. Let me tell you something about them.
They are very huge, with thick grey skin, big ears and a long trunk. They feed on plants, and they are friendly and smart. They live in groups and care for each other. Now they are in great danger, so we should take action to protect them.
I'm Lisa. My favourite animal is the elephant. Let me tell you something about them.
They are very huge, with thick grey skin, big ears and a long trunk. They feed on plants, and they are friendly and smart. They live in groups and care for each other. Now they are in great danger, so we should take action to protect them.
解析
【分析】本题要求以Lisa的身份完成“My Favourite Animal”主题的英语短文写作，需70词左右且要点齐全。解题思路：1. 审题确定：主题为最喜欢的动物（大象），人称用第三人称，时态以一般现在时为主；2. 紧扣提纲要点：先引出话题，再描述大象的外形、食性、性格、群居特点，接着说明其濒危现状，最后发出保护呼吁；3. 组织简洁语言，控制字数，覆盖所有要求要点。
【解析】根据写作要求，首先点明身份（Lisa）及最喜欢的动物是大象，引出话题；接着依次介绍大象的外形特征（厚灰皮肤、大耳朵、长鼻子）、食性（以植物为食）、性格（友好聪明）、生活习性（群居互助）；然后说明大象处于濒危状态，最后发出保护呼吁，确保要点齐全，语言简洁，符合字数要求。
【答案】My Favourite Animal
I'm Lisa. My favourite animal is the elephant. Let me tell you something about them.
They are very huge, with thick grey skin, big ears and a long trunk. They feed on plants, and they are friendly and smart. They live in groups and care for each other. Now they are in great danger, so we should take action to protect them.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、要点式短文写作
【点评】该范文简洁明了，完全覆盖题目要求的所有要点，语言符合初中英语写作难度，字数控制得当，是符合要求的优秀范文，适合学生学习参考。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】根据写作要求，首先点明身份（Lisa）及最喜欢的动物是大象，引出话题；接着依次介绍大象的外形特征（厚灰皮肤、大耳朵、长鼻子）、食性（以植物为食）、性格（友好聪明）、生活习性（群居互助）；然后说明大象处于濒危状态，最后发出保护呼吁，确保要点齐全，语言简洁，符合字数要求。
【答案】My Favourite Animal
I'm Lisa. My favourite animal is the elephant. Let me tell you something about them.
They are very huge, with thick grey skin, big ears and a long trunk. They feed on plants, and they are friendly and smart. They live in groups and care for each other. Now they are in great danger, so we should take action to protect them.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、要点式短文写作
【点评】该范文简洁明了，完全覆盖题目要求的所有要点，语言符合初中英语写作难度，字数控制得当，是符合要求的优秀范文，适合学生学习参考。
【难度系数】0.5
