1 经典案例
(四川遂宁期末)假如你叫李华,就读于Sunshine国际学校。学校正在筹备社团活动,你也想加入其中的某一社团,请用英语给负责人王老师写一封申请信,表达你想加入社团的意愿。
要点:1. 介绍个人基本信息(年龄、班级、国籍等);
2. 个人爱好(学科、食物、运动等);
3. 想加入的社团及理由(擅长的方面、学习新技能、交友等)。
Dear Mr Wang,


Sincerely,
Li Hua
2 审题指导
审主题:申请加入社团
审文体:应用文
审人称:第一人称
审时态:一般现在时
审要点:①介绍年龄、班级、国籍等基本信息;②说明个人爱好;③明确想加入的社团,并阐述理由
3 满分范文
开头:邮件开头,介绍个人基本信息
正文:从个人爱好、申请社团及理由等方面,说明加入意愿
结尾:表达期待回复与祝福
Dear Mr Wang,
My name is Li Hua, a 14-year-old student from Class 3, Grade 8 at Sunshine International School¹, and I am from China.
I love English and music, and I often play basketball with my friends after class. My favourite food is fruit because it is healthy.
I would like to join the English club. First², I am good at speaking English and want to improve it further. Second², I hope to make more friends and practise English together.
I am looking forward to your reply.³
Sincerely,
Li Hua
①用同位语简洁介绍年龄与身份,表达地道;
②分点阐述申请理由,逻辑清晰,层次分明;
③申请信标准结尾句式,礼貌得体。

Dear Mr Wang,
My name is Li Hua, a 14-year-old student from Class 3, Grade 8 at Sunshine International School, and I am from China.
I love English and music, and I often play basketball with my friends after class. My favourite food is fruit because it is healthy.
I would like to join the English club. First, I am good at speaking English and want to improve it further. Second, I hope to make more friends and practise English together.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Sincerely,
Li Hua

本题要求写一封加入社团的英文申请信，属于应用文写作，需使用第一人称、一般现在时完成内容：首先开篇清晰介绍自己的年龄、班级、国籍等基本身份信息；其次说明自己在学科、食物、运动方面的个人爱好；最后明确想要加入的社团，从自身优势、提升技能、结交朋友等角度分点阐述申请理由，写作时要注意书信格式规范，语句通顺，表达礼貌得体。