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[2025 哈尔滨市第四十九中学校开学考试改编]随着全球互联互通,青少年之间的交流日益增加。一个主题为“Youth is a time for fighting”的国际青少年交流沙龙将要在线上进行,你作为中国青少年代表将进行发言。请用英语写一篇发言稿。内容包括:
• your idea about what young people should be like
• one of your stories about fighting
• the meaning of fighting
写作要求:
1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名;
2. 可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
3. 词数100左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone!
[2025 哈尔滨市第四十九中学校开学考试改编]随着全球互联互通,青少年之间的交流日益增加。一个主题为“Youth is a time for fighting”的国际青少年交流沙龙将要在线上进行,你作为中国青少年代表将进行发言。请用英语写一篇发言稿。内容包括:
• your idea about what young people should be like
• one of your stories about fighting
• the meaning of fighting
写作要求:
1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名;
2. 可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
3. 词数100左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone!
As a representative of China's youth, I believe youth is a time to explore something new with curiosity.
Last year, I tried skateboarding for the first time. At the beginning, I fell many times. However, I kept practicing and overcame the difficulties. Finally, I succeeded and fell in love with the sport. Skateboarding has taught me that even what seems impossible can be achieved through hard work and persistence.
In my view, fighting is about growing stronger through effort and never losing hope. Let's fight for our dreams and make our youth meaningful!
Last year, I tried skateboarding for the first time. At the beginning, I fell many times. However, I kept practicing and overcame the difficulties. Finally, I succeeded and fell in love with the sport. Skateboarding has taught me that even what seems impossible can be achieved through hard work and persistence.
In my view, fighting is about growing stronger through effort and never losing hope. Let's fight for our dreams and make our youth meaningful!
答案
Hello, everyone! As a representative of China's youth, I believe youth is a time to explore something new with curiosity.
Last year, I tried skateboarding for the first time. At the beginning, I fell many times. However, I kept practicing and overcame the difficulties. Finally, I succeeded and fell in love with the sport. Skateboarding has taught me that even what seems impossible can be achieved through hard work and persistence.
In my view, fighting is about growing stronger through effort and never losing hope. Let's fight for our dreams and make our youth meaningful!
解析
【分析】
本题为英语应用文写作题，主题为“Youth is a time for fighting”，要求写一篇国际青少年交流沙龙的发言稿。解题思路：1. 明确核心要求：需覆盖三个要点（年轻人应有的特质、自身奋斗故事、奋斗的意义），时态用一般现在时（阐述观点、意义）和一般过去时（叙述故事），人称用第一人称，词数约100词，开头已给出。2. 结构规划：开头承接给定语句，先点明对年轻人应有的样子的看法；接着用具体事例（如学滑板）叙述奋斗经历，体现坚持的过程；最后结合经历阐述奋斗的意义，升华主题，符合发言稿的正式且亲切的语气。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 开头：承接给定问候语，明确身份（中国青少年代表），用一般现在时表达对年轻人的看法（如带着好奇心探索新事物）。2. 主体：用一般过去时叙述奋斗故事（如学滑板时多次摔倒仍坚持练习，最终成功），体现奋斗的过程。3. 结尾：用一般现在时阐述奋斗的意义（通过努力成长、不放弃希望），发出呼吁，确保内容连贯，覆盖所有要点，符合发言稿要求。
【答案】
Hello, everyone! As a representative of China's youth, I believe youth is a time to explore something new with curiosity.
Last year, I tried skateboarding for the first time. At the beginning, I fell many times. However, I kept practicing and overcame the difficulties. Finally, I succeeded and fell in love with the sport. Skateboarding has taught me that even what seems impossible can be achieved through hard work and persistence.
In my view, fighting is about growing stronger through effort and never losing hope. Let's fight for our dreams and make our youth meaningful!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、时态运用、英语发言稿写作
【点评】
范文紧扣主题，完整覆盖题目要求的三个要点，时态运用准确（故事用一般过去时，观点和意义用一般现在时），内容充实连贯，符合发言稿的格式与语气要求，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语应用文写作题，主题为“Youth is a time for fighting”，要求写一篇国际青少年交流沙龙的发言稿。解题思路：1. 明确核心要求：需覆盖三个要点（年轻人应有的特质、自身奋斗故事、奋斗的意义），时态用一般现在时（阐述观点、意义）和一般过去时（叙述故事），人称用第一人称，词数约100词，开头已给出。2. 结构规划：开头承接给定语句，先点明对年轻人应有的样子的看法；接着用具体事例（如学滑板）叙述奋斗经历，体现坚持的过程；最后结合经历阐述奋斗的意义，升华主题，符合发言稿的正式且亲切的语气。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 开头：承接给定问候语，明确身份（中国青少年代表），用一般现在时表达对年轻人的看法（如带着好奇心探索新事物）。2. 主体：用一般过去时叙述奋斗故事（如学滑板时多次摔倒仍坚持练习，最终成功），体现奋斗的过程。3. 结尾：用一般现在时阐述奋斗的意义（通过努力成长、不放弃希望），发出呼吁，确保内容连贯，覆盖所有要点，符合发言稿要求。
【答案】
Hello, everyone! As a representative of China's youth, I believe youth is a time to explore something new with curiosity.
Last year, I tried skateboarding for the first time. At the beginning, I fell many times. However, I kept practicing and overcame the difficulties. Finally, I succeeded and fell in love with the sport. Skateboarding has taught me that even what seems impossible can be achieved through hard work and persistence.
In my view, fighting is about growing stronger through effort and never losing hope. Let's fight for our dreams and make our youth meaningful!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、时态运用、英语发言稿写作
【点评】
范文紧扣主题，完整覆盖题目要求的三个要点，时态运用准确（故事用一般过去时，观点和意义用一般现在时），内容充实连贯，符合发言稿的格式与语气要求，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
