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写作题目:
作为初中生的我们平时与父母交流很少,有时对一件事会有很大的分歧,有时还会争吵。与父母交流是重要的,请你根据自己的情况介绍一下与父母交流的方法。词数80左右。
Step 1. 辨模式(Patterns)——辨识特征 列纲建模
1. 辨人称: 第一人称
2. 辨时态: 一般现在时
3. 辨核心:与父母交流的方法
Step 2. 明实例(Examples)——润色成篇 典例示范
续表
范文点评:
本文要点全面,叙事条理,具体优点有:
①开篇点题,点明与父母交流的重要性。
②运用 First, Second, Third,Fourth 使文章条理性很强,阐述了与父母交流的方法。
③举例说明与父母交流的方法,并点题交流的重要性。
Step 3. 会实践(Practice)——迁移创新 实战演练
亲爱的同学,你在生活中有烦恼吗?你在学习中有压力吗?我们应该如何正确面对烦恼,有效缓解心理压力呢?请以“How to Deal with Our Stress”为题写一篇短文。
要求:
1. 必须包含所给要点,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,书写规范;
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名或地名;
4. 词数不少于 80。
写作题目:
作为初中生的我们平时与父母交流很少,有时对一件事会有很大的分歧,有时还会争吵。与父母交流是重要的,请你根据自己的情况介绍一下与父母交流的方法。词数80左右。
Step 1. 辨模式(Patterns)——辨识特征 列纲建模
1. 辨人称: 第一人称
2. 辨时态: 一般现在时
3. 辨核心:与父母交流的方法
Step 2. 明实例(Examples)——润色成篇 典例示范
续表
范文点评:
本文要点全面,叙事条理,具体优点有:
①开篇点题,点明与父母交流的重要性。
②运用 First, Second, Third,Fourth 使文章条理性很强,阐述了与父母交流的方法。
③举例说明与父母交流的方法,并点题交流的重要性。
Step 3. 会实践(Practice)——迁移创新 实战演练
亲爱的同学,你在生活中有烦恼吗?你在学习中有压力吗?我们应该如何正确面对烦恼,有效缓解心理压力呢?请以“How to Deal with Our Stress”为题写一篇短文。
要求:
1. 必须包含所给要点,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,书写规范;
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名或地名;
4. 词数不少于 80。
How to Deal with Our Stress
We all have some problems and stress in our lives. How should we deal with them?
Firstly, we should take more exercise. Sports can help us to have a healthy body and study well. Secondly, we need to talk with our teachers,parents and friends and try to tell them about our trouble. They may give us some useful advice. Thirdly, we can also listen to music and read books. They are good ways to relax ourselves. Fourthly, we should try our best to study hard and learn to face our grades bravely. Finally, if we often have too much stress, we'd better see a doctor.
If you do as I tell you, you'll solve your problems easily.
答案
How to Deal with Our Stress
We all have some problems and stress in our lives. How should we deal with them?
Firstly, we should take more exercise. Sports can help us to have a healthy body and study well. Secondly, we need to talk with our teachers,parents and friends and try to tell them about our trouble. They may give us some useful advice. Thirdly, we can also listen to music and read books. They are good ways to relax ourselves. Fourthly, we should try our best to study hard and learn to face our grades bravely. Finally, if we often have too much stress, we'd better see a doctor.
If you do as I tell you, you'll solve your problems easily.
We all have some problems and stress in our lives. How should we deal with them?
Firstly, we should take more exercise. Sports can help us to have a healthy body and study well. Secondly, we need to talk with our teachers,parents and friends and try to tell them about our trouble. They may give us some useful advice. Thirdly, we can also listen to music and read books. They are good ways to relax ourselves. Fourthly, we should try our best to study hard and learn to face our grades bravely. Finally, if we often have too much stress, we'd better see a doctor.
If you do as I tell you, you'll solve your problems easily.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语应用文写作题，要求以“How to Deal with Our Stress”为题写短文。解题思路：首先确定写作的人称（第一人称）和时态（一般现在时）；接着开篇点明压力的普遍性，引出应对压力的话题；然后用First、Second等连接词分点阐述应对压力的具体方法，保证条理清晰；最后总结呼应主题，满足词数要求。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：1. 开篇：点明每个人在生活中都有问题和压力，引出如何应对压力的话题；2. 分点阐述方法：①多锻炼，帮助保持健康身体，利于学习；②向老师、父母、朋友倾诉烦恼，获取有用建议；③听音乐、读书放松自己；④努力学习，勇敢面对成绩；⑤压力过大时最好看医生；3. 结尾：总结按上述方法做能轻松解决问题，使文章完整。
【答案】
How to Deal with Our Stress
We all have some problems and stress in our lives. How should we deal with them?
Firstly, we should take more exercise. Sports can help us to have a healthy body and study well. Secondly, we need to talk with our teachers,parents and friends and try to tell them about our trouble. They may give us some useful advice. Thirdly, we can also listen to music and read books. They are good ways to relax ourselves. Fourthly, we should try our best to study hard and learn to face our grades bravely. Finally, if we often have too much stress, we'd better see a doctor.
If you do as I tell you, you'll solve your problems easily.
【知识点】
英语短文写作、一般现在时、连接词运用
【点评】
范文要点全面，结构清晰，使用First等连接词增强文章条理性，涵盖多种应对压力的有效方法，语言通顺，符合题目各项要求。
【难度系数】
0.3
本题为英语应用文写作题，要求以“How to Deal with Our Stress”为题写短文。解题思路：首先确定写作的人称（第一人称）和时态（一般现在时）；接着开篇点明压力的普遍性，引出应对压力的话题；然后用First、Second等连接词分点阐述应对压力的具体方法，保证条理清晰；最后总结呼应主题，满足词数要求。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：1. 开篇：点明每个人在生活中都有问题和压力，引出如何应对压力的话题；2. 分点阐述方法：①多锻炼，帮助保持健康身体，利于学习；②向老师、父母、朋友倾诉烦恼，获取有用建议；③听音乐、读书放松自己；④努力学习，勇敢面对成绩；⑤压力过大时最好看医生；3. 结尾：总结按上述方法做能轻松解决问题，使文章完整。
【答案】
How to Deal with Our Stress
We all have some problems and stress in our lives. How should we deal with them?
Firstly, we should take more exercise. Sports can help us to have a healthy body and study well. Secondly, we need to talk with our teachers,parents and friends and try to tell them about our trouble. They may give us some useful advice. Thirdly, we can also listen to music and read books. They are good ways to relax ourselves. Fourthly, we should try our best to study hard and learn to face our grades bravely. Finally, if we often have too much stress, we'd better see a doctor.
If you do as I tell you, you'll solve your problems easily.
【知识点】
英语短文写作、一般现在时、连接词运用
【点评】
范文要点全面，结构清晰，使用First等连接词增强文章条理性，涵盖多种应对压力的有效方法，语言通顺，符合题目各项要求。
【难度系数】
0.3
