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你校将以“绿色生活，从我做起”为主题，组织英语征文比赛。请你以“Going Green Starts with Small Things”为题，根据表格内容写一篇文章参赛。词数100左右。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
Going Green Starts with Small Things
Everyone can make small changes in lifestyle and make a difference in reducing pollution and waste.
Going Green Starts with Small Things
Everyone can make small changes in lifestyle and make a difference in reducing pollution and waste.
First, we'd better ride a bike or walk to school, because it's a green way which doesn't pollute the air. Second, saving electricity, water and food is necessary. We should turn off the lights when going out. Turning off the tap when we brush our teeth can save a lot of water. What's more, don't use plastic bags when we go shopping. Plastic is harmful to the environment. Last but not least, we need to plant more trees and flowers to make the environment more beautiful.
It's important for us to protect the environment.
If we keep doing this, I believe the environment will be better and better.
Let's do it together from now on.
答案
One possible version:
Going Green Starts with Small Things
Everyone can make small changes in lifestyle and make a difference in reducing pollution and waste.
First, we'd better ride a bike or walk to school, because it's a green way which doesn't pollute the air. Second, saving electricity, water and food is necessary. We should turn off the lights when going out. Turning off the tap when we brush our teeth can save a lot of water. What's more, don't use plastic bags when we go shopping. Plastic is harmful to the environment. Last but not least, we need to plant more trees and flowers to make the environment more beautiful.
It's important for us to protect the environment. If we keep doing this, I believe the environment will be better and better. Let's do it together from now on.
思路梳理 【总体分析】
①体裁:说明文;②时态:一般现在时;③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】
第一步,开篇点题;第二步,介绍具体做法和原因;第三步,提出倡议。
Going Green Starts with Small Things
Everyone can make small changes in lifestyle and make a difference in reducing pollution and waste.
First, we'd better ride a bike or walk to school, because it's a green way which doesn't pollute the air. Second, saving electricity, water and food is necessary. We should turn off the lights when going out. Turning off the tap when we brush our teeth can save a lot of water. What's more, don't use plastic bags when we go shopping. Plastic is harmful to the environment. Last but not least, we need to plant more trees and flowers to make the environment more beautiful.
It's important for us to protect the environment. If we keep doing this, I believe the environment will be better and better. Let's do it together from now on.
思路梳理 【总体分析】
①体裁:说明文;②时态:一般现在时;③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】
第一步,开篇点题;第二步,介绍具体做法和原因;第三步,提出倡议。
解析
【分析】
本题为英语征文写作题，主题为“绿色生活，从我做起”，要求根据给定表格要点完成短文。需明确体裁为说明文，时态以一般现在时为主；要覆盖表格中“绿色出行、厉行节约、其他方式、提出倡议”四个核心要点，每个要点对应具体做法及理由，衔接开头，控制词数在100左右，语言简洁通顺，符合征文要求。
【解析】
1. 衔接开头：承接已给开头，引出具体环保做法；
2. 绿色出行：说明步行或骑车上学的做法，理由是不污染空气；
3. 厉行节约：列举节约用电、水、食物的具体做法，如出门关灯、刷牙关水龙头，理由是节约资源；
4. 其他方式：补充不用塑料袋、种树等做法，理由是减少污染、美化环境；
5. 提出倡议：总结环保的重要性，呼吁大家从小事做起，共同保护环境。
【答案】
One possible version:
Going Green Starts with Small Things
Everyone can make small changes in lifestyle and make a difference in reducing pollution and waste.
First, we'd better ride a bike or walk to school, because it's a green way which doesn't pollute the air. Second, saving electricity, water and food is necessary. We should turn off the lights when going out. Turning off the tap when we brush our teeth can save a lot of water. What's more, don't use plastic bags when we go shopping. Plastic is harmful to the environment. Last but not least, we need to plant more trees and flowers to make the environment more beautiful.
It's important for us to protect the environment. If we keep doing this, I believe the environment will be better and better. Let's do it together from now on.
【知识点】
英语写作、说明文写作、环保主题表达
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，覆盖所有写作要点，结构清晰、逻辑连贯，语言简洁规范，理由充分，符合征文要求，是一篇优秀的参赛范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语征文写作题，主题为“绿色生活，从我做起”，要求根据给定表格要点完成短文。需明确体裁为说明文，时态以一般现在时为主；要覆盖表格中“绿色出行、厉行节约、其他方式、提出倡议”四个核心要点，每个要点对应具体做法及理由，衔接开头，控制词数在100左右，语言简洁通顺，符合征文要求。
【解析】
1. 衔接开头：承接已给开头，引出具体环保做法；
2. 绿色出行：说明步行或骑车上学的做法，理由是不污染空气；
3. 厉行节约：列举节约用电、水、食物的具体做法，如出门关灯、刷牙关水龙头，理由是节约资源；
4. 其他方式：补充不用塑料袋、种树等做法，理由是减少污染、美化环境；
5. 提出倡议：总结环保的重要性，呼吁大家从小事做起，共同保护环境。
【答案】
One possible version:
Going Green Starts with Small Things
Everyone can make small changes in lifestyle and make a difference in reducing pollution and waste.
First, we'd better ride a bike or walk to school, because it's a green way which doesn't pollute the air. Second, saving electricity, water and food is necessary. We should turn off the lights when going out. Turning off the tap when we brush our teeth can save a lot of water. What's more, don't use plastic bags when we go shopping. Plastic is harmful to the environment. Last but not least, we need to plant more trees and flowers to make the environment more beautiful.
It's important for us to protect the environment. If we keep doing this, I believe the environment will be better and better. Let's do it together from now on.
【知识点】
英语写作、说明文写作、环保主题表达
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，覆盖所有写作要点，结构清晰、逻辑连贯，语言简洁规范，理由充分，符合征文要求，是一篇优秀的参赛范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
