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[2025 南通]假如你是李华，你将参加学校英语俱乐部举办的“实践·成长”主题演讲比赛。现请你就自己的一次经历完成一篇演讲稿，内容包括：1. 亲身经历；2. 实践感受；3. 成长愿景。
注意：词数90左右，开头已给出(画直线部分)，不计入总词数。
[高分范文]
Dear all, It's my great honor to share my special experience here.
Last term, I joined an English corner at school, but I was too nervous to speak a word① in front of others. I even wanted to give it up at first. Then I realized I had problems with my oral English and decided to change. I made a small plan: every night, I spent as much time as possible reading② useful sentences rather than② single words aloud and recording myself, and I also asked my foreign teacher for help with my pronunciation.
[名师点评]
整篇文章结构完整，紧扣主题。语言地道，重点句型及短语使用准确。
① 用“too ... to ...”精准体现紧张状态，为下文转折做铺垫。
② 连用“spend ... doing”“as ... as possible”、rather
注意：词数90左右，开头已给出(画直线部分)，不计入总词数。
[高分范文]
Dear all, It's my great honor to share my special experience here.
Last term, I joined an English corner at school, but I was too nervous to speak a word① in front of others. I even wanted to give it up at first. Then I realized I had problems with my oral English and decided to change. I made a small plan: every night, I spent as much time as possible reading② useful sentences rather than② single words aloud and recording myself, and I also asked my foreign teacher for help with my pronunciation.
[名师点评]
整篇文章结构完整，紧扣主题。语言地道，重点句型及短语使用准确。
① 用“too ... to ...”精准体现紧张状态，为下文转折做铺垫。
② 连用“spend ... doing”“as ... as possible”、rather
答案
Dear all,
It's my great honor to share my special experience here.
Last term, I joined an English corner at school, but I was too nervous to speak a word in front of others. I even wanted to give it up at first. Then I realized I had problems with my oral English and decided to change. I made a small plan: every night, I spent as much time as possible reading useful sentences rather than single words aloud and recording myself, and I also asked my foreign teacher for help with my pronunciation.
After two weeks of practice, I could talk with other members in English confidently. I learned that practice makes perfect. In the future, I will keep stepping out of my comfort zone to try more new things and make greater progress.
That's all. Thank you!
It's my great honor to share my special experience here.
Last term, I joined an English corner at school, but I was too nervous to speak a word in front of others. I even wanted to give it up at first. Then I realized I had problems with my oral English and decided to change. I made a small plan: every night, I spent as much time as possible reading useful sentences rather than single words aloud and recording myself, and I also asked my foreign teacher for help with my pronunciation.
After two weeks of practice, I could talk with other members in English confidently. I learned that practice makes perfect. In the future, I will keep stepping out of my comfort zone to try more new things and make greater progress.
That's all. Thank you!
解析
【分析】本次写作任务是完成“实践·成长”主题的英语演讲稿，需包含亲身经历、实践感受、成长愿景三部分，开头已给出。解题思路：1. 承接开头，叙述亲身经历：加入英语角初期因紧张不敢开口，曾想放弃，随后制定练习计划提升口语；2. 补充实践后的变化与感受：通过练习后能自信交流，感悟“熟能生巧”；3. 表达成长愿景：未来会走出舒适区尝试新事物，不断进步，最后礼貌收尾，符合演讲稿的格式要求。
【解析】根据写作要求，围绕“实践·成长”主题，按“亲身经历→实践感受→成长愿景”的逻辑展开：1. 亲身经历部分：运用“too...to...”句型描述初期紧张状态，用“spend...doing...”等句型说明练习计划，丰富表达；2. 实践感受部分：补充练习后的成果及感悟，紧扣“实践”的意义；3. 成长愿景部分：明确未来成长方向，呼应主题，最后礼貌致谢，满足词数要求。
【答案】Dear all,
It's my great honor to share my special experience here.
Last term, I joined an English corner at school, but I was too nervous to speak a word in front of others. I even wanted to give it up at first. Then I realized I had problems with my oral English and decided to change. I made a small plan: every night, I spent as much time as possible reading useful sentences rather than single words aloud and recording myself, and I also asked my foreign teacher for help with my pronunciation.
After two weeks of practice, I could talk with other members in English confidently. I learned that practice makes perfect. In the future, I will keep stepping out of my comfort zone to try more new things and make greater progress.
That's all. Thank you!
【知识点】英语应用文写作、英语常用句型运用
【点评】范文紧扣“实践·成长”主题，结构完整清晰，涵盖所有要求要点；语言地道准确，运用了“too...to...”“spend...doing...”等重点句型，符合演讲稿的格式，是一篇优秀的习作。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】根据写作要求，围绕“实践·成长”主题，按“亲身经历→实践感受→成长愿景”的逻辑展开：1. 亲身经历部分：运用“too...to...”句型描述初期紧张状态，用“spend...doing...”等句型说明练习计划，丰富表达；2. 实践感受部分：补充练习后的成果及感悟，紧扣“实践”的意义；3. 成长愿景部分：明确未来成长方向，呼应主题，最后礼貌致谢，满足词数要求。
【答案】Dear all,
It's my great honor to share my special experience here.
Last term, I joined an English corner at school, but I was too nervous to speak a word in front of others. I even wanted to give it up at first. Then I realized I had problems with my oral English and decided to change. I made a small plan: every night, I spent as much time as possible reading useful sentences rather than single words aloud and recording myself, and I also asked my foreign teacher for help with my pronunciation.
After two weeks of practice, I could talk with other members in English confidently. I learned that practice makes perfect. In the future, I will keep stepping out of my comfort zone to try more new things and make greater progress.
That's all. Thank you!
【知识点】英语应用文写作、英语常用句型运用
【点评】范文紧扣“实践·成长”主题，结构完整清晰，涵盖所有要求要点；语言地道准确，运用了“too...to...”“spend...doing...”等重点句型，符合演讲稿的格式，是一篇优秀的习作。
【难度系数】0.6
