我们的家乡在过去几十年里发生了巨大的变化,这些变化让我们的生活变得更美好。
请以“Great Changes in My Hometown”为题,写一篇100词左右的英语短文,介绍家乡的变化,表达对家乡的热爱。
写作要点:
1. What was your hometown like in the past?
2. What great changes have taken place in your hometown?
3. How do you feel about these changes?
写作要求:
1. 语句通顺,行文连贯,逻辑清晰;
2. 短文必须包含所给写作要点,可适当发挥;
3. 短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
写作佳句
1. 在过去的几十年里,我的家乡发生了很大的变化。
Great changes
2. 狭窄的小路已经变成了宽阔、平坦的道路。
The narrow paths have
3. 人们不再住在旧的房子里,而是搬进了整洁、明亮的新公寓。
People
4. 更令我欣喜的是,环境变得越来越优美,清澈的河流与绿色公园随处可见。
5. 我为家乡的巨变感到无比自豪,也期待它更光明的未来。
I am so
思路导引
1. 人称:第
2. 时态:
3. 体裁:
4. 列提纲

写作范例
Great Changes in My Hometown
Great changes have taken place in my hometown over the past few decades. I'm glad to share some of them with you.
In the past, there were only narrow and muddy paths. And most people lived in old houses. Transport was slow—we mainly walked or rode bikes. The environment was not good with litter everywhere.
But now, everything is different. The narrow paths have turned into wide and flat roads. People no longer live in old houses but have moved into clean and bright new flats. We can ride shared bikes, take new energy buses or even take high-speed trains to travel around. What makes me more delighted is that the environment is becoming more and more beautiful, with clear rivers and green parks everywhere.
I am so proud of the great changes in my hometown and look forward to its brighter future. I believe my hometown will become a better place to live in.
请以“Great Changes in My Hometown”为题,写一篇100词左右的英语短文,介绍家乡的变化,表达对家乡的热爱。
写作要点:
1. What was your hometown like in the past?
2. What great changes have taken place in your hometown?
3. How do you feel about these changes?
写作要求:
1. 语句通顺,行文连贯,逻辑清晰;
2. 短文必须包含所给写作要点,可适当发挥;
3. 短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
写作佳句
1. 在过去的几十年里,我的家乡发生了很大的变化。
Great changes
have
taken
place
in my hometown over the past few decades.2. 狭窄的小路已经变成了宽阔、平坦的道路。
The narrow paths have
turned
into
wide and flat roads.3. 人们不再住在旧的房子里,而是搬进了整洁、明亮的新公寓。
People
no
longer
live in old houses but
have moved into clean and bright new flats.4. 更令我欣喜的是,环境变得越来越优美,清澈的河流与绿色公园随处可见。
What
makes
me
more
delighted
is
that the environment is becoming more and more beautiful, with clear rivers and green parks everywhere.5. 我为家乡的巨变感到无比自豪,也期待它更光明的未来。
I am so
proud
of
the great changes in my hometown and look
forward
its brighter future.思路导引
1. 人称:第
一、三
人称2. 时态:
现在完成时、一般现在时和一般过去时
3. 体裁:
记叙
文4. 列提纲
写作范例
Great Changes in My Hometown
Great changes have taken place in my hometown over the past few decades. I'm glad to share some of them with you.
In the past, there were only narrow and muddy paths. And most people lived in old houses. Transport was slow—we mainly walked or rode bikes. The environment was not good with litter everywhere.
But now, everything is different. The narrow paths have turned into wide and flat roads. People no longer live in old houses but have moved into clean and bright new flats. We can ride shared bikes, take new energy buses or even take high-speed trains to travel around. What makes me more delighted is that the environment is becoming more and more beautiful, with clear rivers and green parks everywhere.
I am so proud of the great changes in my hometown and look forward to its brighter future. I believe my hometown will become a better place to live in.
答案
1. have taken place
2. turned into
3. no longer; but
4. What makes me more delighted is
5. proud of; look forward to
1. 一、三 2. 现在完成时、一般现在时和一般过去时 3. 记叙
2. turned into
3. no longer; but
4. What makes me more delighted is
5. proud of; look forward to
1. 一、三 2. 现在完成时、一般现在时和一般过去时 3. 记叙
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