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写作创新·根据图表写作 为倡导理性消费，增强学生的理财意识，学校开展“零用钱管理能手”评选活动。请结合以下图表，写一篇英语短文参与评选，谈谈你每月零用钱的使用情况及理由。
注意：（1）可在图表提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
（2）不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名和学生的真实姓名。
（3）语句连贯，词数80左右。
【巧列提纲】（以下 Tips 部分仅供参考，希望同学们可以多开动脑筋、发散思维）
【实战演练】
【写作评价】（评分原则与方法可参考本书最后一页）
注意：（1）可在图表提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
（2）不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名和学生的真实姓名。
（3）语句连贯，词数80左右。
【巧列提纲】（以下 Tips 部分仅供参考，希望同学们可以多开动脑筋、发散思维）
【实战演练】
【写作评价】（评分原则与方法可参考本书最后一页）
答案
One possible version:
I'd like to share how I manage my pocket money every month. I usually make a budget for my pocket money at the beginning of every month.
I spend 50% of the money on books, pens and other daily things. They are necessary for my study and hobbies. Besides,
I plan to travel to Xi'an this summer holiday, so I save about 30% every month for future use. Finally, I spend about 20% helping children in need. I believe every little bit of love counts.
Managing money is important to me. It's not just about spending or saving. It's about how I can use money to create a better life for myself and others.
I'd like to share how I manage my pocket money every month. I usually make a budget for my pocket money at the beginning of every month.
I spend 50% of the money on books, pens and other daily things. They are necessary for my study and hobbies. Besides,
I plan to travel to Xi'an this summer holiday, so I save about 30% every month for future use. Finally, I spend about 20% helping children in need. I believe every little bit of love counts.
Managing money is important to me. It's not just about spending or saving. It's about how I can use money to create a better life for myself and others.
解析
【分析】
首先审题明确写作任务：需写英语短文参与“零用钱管理能手”评选，介绍每月零用钱使用情况及理由，要求结合图表信息、适当拓展，词数80左右，无真实信息。解题思路：1. 开篇点明主题，引出零用钱管理话题；2. 分述零用钱的使用比例及对应理由（结合图表比例：50%用于学习相关、30%储蓄、20%帮助他人）；3. 结尾升华理财意义，传递积极理念，确保语句连贯、符合要求。
【解析】
1. 开篇：直接点明要分享每月零用钱的管理方式，总起全文；
2. 主体：分三部分说明使用情况及理由：①50%用于书籍、文具等，理由是服务学习和爱好；②30%储蓄，理由是为暑期旅行做准备；③20%用于帮助有需要的孩子，理由是传递爱心；
3. 结尾：总结理财的意义，升华主题，呼应评选的理性消费、理财意识要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
I'd like to share how I manage my pocket money every month. I usually make a budget for my pocket money at the beginning of every month.
I spend 50% of the money on books, pens and other daily things. They are necessary for my study and hobbies. Besides, I plan to travel to Xi'an this summer holiday, so I save about 30% every month for future use. Finally, I spend about 20% helping children in need. I believe every little bit of love counts.
Managing money is important to me. It's not just about spending or saving. It's about how I can use money to create a better life for myself and others.
【知识点】
英语短文写作、图表信息运用、语句连贯
【点评】
本文紧扣“零用钱管理”主题，结合图表信息合理拓展，结构清晰层次分明，理由充分贴合主题，语言流畅自然，符合评选活动要求，传递了理性消费与关爱他人的积极理念，词数符合要求。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先审题明确写作任务：需写英语短文参与“零用钱管理能手”评选，介绍每月零用钱使用情况及理由，要求结合图表信息、适当拓展，词数80左右，无真实信息。解题思路：1. 开篇点明主题，引出零用钱管理话题；2. 分述零用钱的使用比例及对应理由（结合图表比例：50%用于学习相关、30%储蓄、20%帮助他人）；3. 结尾升华理财意义，传递积极理念，确保语句连贯、符合要求。
【解析】
1. 开篇：直接点明要分享每月零用钱的管理方式，总起全文；
2. 主体：分三部分说明使用情况及理由：①50%用于书籍、文具等，理由是服务学习和爱好；②30%储蓄，理由是为暑期旅行做准备；③20%用于帮助有需要的孩子，理由是传递爱心；
3. 结尾：总结理财的意义，升华主题，呼应评选的理性消费、理财意识要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
I'd like to share how I manage my pocket money every month. I usually make a budget for my pocket money at the beginning of every month.
I spend 50% of the money on books, pens and other daily things. They are necessary for my study and hobbies. Besides, I plan to travel to Xi'an this summer holiday, so I save about 30% every month for future use. Finally, I spend about 20% helping children in need. I believe every little bit of love counts.
Managing money is important to me. It's not just about spending or saving. It's about how I can use money to create a better life for myself and others.
【知识点】
英语短文写作、图表信息运用、语句连贯
【点评】
本文紧扣“零用钱管理”主题，结合图表信息合理拓展，结构清晰层次分明，理由充分贴合主题，语言流畅自然，符合评选活动要求，传递了理性消费与关爱他人的积极理念，词数符合要求。
【难度系数】
0.7
