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七、书面表达。
假设你是阳光中学的李明，你的美国朋友 David 即将来你的学校。请你写一封邮件欢迎他来到南通，并向他介绍你的学校生活和你加入的 DIY 俱乐部。你计划和你的好朋友一起带他参观南通。你的邮件必须包含以下内容：
1. What's your school life like?
2. What do you do in the DIY Club?
3. What's your best friend like?
4. Where will you take David in Nantong with your best friend? What will you do there?
要求：
1. 词数 90 左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
Dear David，
I'm very glad to hear that you will visit my school.
I study at Sunshine Middle School.
I'm looking forward to seeing you.
Best wishes，
Li Ming
假设你是阳光中学的李明，你的美国朋友 David 即将来你的学校。请你写一封邮件欢迎他来到南通，并向他介绍你的学校生活和你加入的 DIY 俱乐部。你计划和你的好朋友一起带他参观南通。你的邮件必须包含以下内容：
1. What's your school life like?
2. What do you do in the DIY Club?
3. What's your best friend like?
4. Where will you take David in Nantong with your best friend? What will you do there?
要求：
1. 词数 90 左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
Dear David，
I'm very glad to hear that you will visit my school.
I study at Sunshine Middle School.
My school life is interesting and colourful here. I am crazy about DIY too. I often use fruit in season to make fruit salad. I think it is fun.
Max is my best friend. He is the tallest boy in my class and wears small round glasses. He has a good sense of humour. He tells funny jokes and always makes me laugh.
Max and I will show you around our museum and our snack street. You will learn a lot about Chinese culture and taste our local food.
Max is my best friend. He is the tallest boy in my class and wears small round glasses. He has a good sense of humour. He tells funny jokes and always makes me laugh.
Max and I will show you around our museum and our snack street. You will learn a lot about Chinese culture and taste our local food.
I'm looking forward to seeing you.
Best wishes，
Li Ming
答案
One possible version:
Dear David,
I'm very glad to hear that you will visit my school.
I study at Sunshine Middle School. My school life is interesting and colourful here. I am crazy about DIY too. I often use fruit in season to make fruit salad. I think it is fun.
Max is my best friend. He is the tallest boy in my class and wears small round glasses. He has a good sense of humour. He tells funny jokes and always makes me laugh.
Max and I will show you around our museum and our snack street. You will learn a lot about Chinese culture and taste our local food.
I'm looking forward to seeing you.
Best wishes,
Li Ming
Dear David,
I'm very glad to hear that you will visit my school.
I study at Sunshine Middle School. My school life is interesting and colourful here. I am crazy about DIY too. I often use fruit in season to make fruit salad. I think it is fun.
Max is my best friend. He is the tallest boy in my class and wears small round glasses. He has a good sense of humour. He tells funny jokes and always makes me laugh.
Max and I will show you around our museum and our snack street. You will learn a lot about Chinese culture and taste our local food.
I'm looking forward to seeing you.
Best wishes,
Li Ming
解析
【分析】
本题为英语应用文写作题，要求以李明的身份给美国朋友David写一封欢迎邮件，需覆盖四个指定要点：介绍学校生活、DIY俱乐部活动、好友特点、带David在南通的行程。解题思路：先承接给定开头，依次对应四个要点展开内容，控制词数在90左右，语言符合初中英语水平，避免真实信息，确保邮件格式规范。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 承接开头介绍学校生活：说明学校生活有趣多彩；2. 介绍DIY俱乐部活动：提及自己喜欢DIY，常用应季水果制作水果沙拉；3. 介绍好友特点：说明好友Max的外貌（班级最高、戴小圆眼镜）与性格（幽默，常讲笑话逗人）；4. 说明带David的行程：带他参观博物馆了解中国文化，去小吃街品尝当地美食。全程注意语言自然流畅，符合邮件语境，满足词数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear David,
I'm very glad to hear that you will visit my school.
I study at Sunshine Middle School. My school life is interesting and colourful here. I am crazy about DIY too. I often use fruit in season to make fruit salad. I think it is fun.
Max is my best friend. He is the tallest boy in my class and wears small round glasses. He has a good sense of humour. He tells funny jokes and always makes me laugh.
Max and I will show you around our museum and our snack street. You will learn a lot about Chinese culture and taste our local food.
I'm looking forward to seeing you.
Best wishes,
Li Ming
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、初中英语书面表达、要点式写作
【点评】
本题考查初中学生的英语应用文写作能力，要求覆盖指定写作要点，语言通顺，符合邮件格式，难度适中，能有效考察学生的综合语言运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语应用文写作题，要求以李明的身份给美国朋友David写一封欢迎邮件，需覆盖四个指定要点：介绍学校生活、DIY俱乐部活动、好友特点、带David在南通的行程。解题思路：先承接给定开头，依次对应四个要点展开内容，控制词数在90左右，语言符合初中英语水平，避免真实信息，确保邮件格式规范。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 承接开头介绍学校生活：说明学校生活有趣多彩；2. 介绍DIY俱乐部活动：提及自己喜欢DIY，常用应季水果制作水果沙拉；3. 介绍好友特点：说明好友Max的外貌（班级最高、戴小圆眼镜）与性格（幽默，常讲笑话逗人）；4. 说明带David的行程：带他参观博物馆了解中国文化，去小吃街品尝当地美食。全程注意语言自然流畅，符合邮件语境，满足词数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear David,
I'm very glad to hear that you will visit my school.
I study at Sunshine Middle School. My school life is interesting and colourful here. I am crazy about DIY too. I often use fruit in season to make fruit salad. I think it is fun.
Max is my best friend. He is the tallest boy in my class and wears small round glasses. He has a good sense of humour. He tells funny jokes and always makes me laugh.
Max and I will show you around our museum and our snack street. You will learn a lot about Chinese culture and taste our local food.
I'm looking forward to seeing you.
Best wishes,
Li Ming
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、初中英语书面表达、要点式写作
【点评】
本题考查初中学生的英语应用文写作能力，要求覆盖指定写作要点，语言通顺，符合邮件格式，难度适中，能有效考察学生的综合语言运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
