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写作提优专题
话题分析
本单元的核心写作话题是分享艺术相关的体验与见解，包含两类高频写作方向：一是介绍一件喜爱的艺术作品/一位艺术家，二是分享一次艺术体验（如参观画展、学习书法/绘画）。要求学生围绕主题，从作品/艺术家的特点、背后的故事、个人感受与影响，或体验的过程、收获与感悟等方面展开写作，引导学生表达对艺术的理解，锻炼描述与书面表达能力。
写作积累
[高分词汇]
1.
2.
3.
4.
5.
6.
7.
8.
[高分句式]
1. 我过去对艺术没什么感觉，但一次画展的参观彻底改变了我的看法。
2. 每个人都有自己钟爱的艺术形式，我最欣赏的是中国水墨画。
3. 这些艺术作品不仅让我感受到美，也让我学会了用不同的视角看世界。
4. 这段与艺术相关的体验会永远留在我心中，它总能给我带来灵感和力量。
典例讲解
假定你是李华，英语课堂上将开展艺术主题分享活动。请你作三分钟演讲，向同学们推荐你最喜欢的一幅名画。内容包括：
1. 描述画作；2.介绍作者；3.推荐原因。
注意:1. 词数 100 左右，开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 短文须包含提示要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；
3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；公众人物姓名和作品名称可出现。
Dear classmates,
I'm Li Hua. Today, I'm glad to
That's all. Thank you!
[审题思路]
▶审体裁:本篇为课堂演讲稿,需用清晰的逻辑介绍画作、作者及推荐理由,语言要有亲和力。
▶审人称:以第一人称(I)为主,结合第三人称介绍画作与作者,增强分享的真实感。
▶审时态:用一般现在时描述画作特点、作者风格;用一般过去时补充作者生平背景;用一般现在时/将来时表达推荐理由与个人感悟。
写作提优专题
[写作提纲]
[优秀范文]
Dear classmates,
I'm Li Hua. Today, I'm glad to share my favourite famous painting with you.
The painting I'd like to introduce is Galloping Horses by Xu Beihong. It shows several strong horses running freely, with lively brushstrokes that make them look full of energy. Xu Beihong was one of the greatest Chinese painters in the 20th century. He was good at combining traditional Chinese ink art with Western painting skills, and his works are loved by people all over the world.
I love this painting because it not only shows the beauty of Chinese art, but also encourages me to keep moving forward bravely, just like the horses in the painting. It makes me feel powerful even when I face difficulties. I hope you will take time to enjoy this wonderful work.
That's all. Thank you!
实战演练
假定你是李华，校英语专栏正在征集以“An Unforgettable Art Experience”为题的稿件。请你根据下面的内容提示写一篇英语短文，分享你的经历。内容包括：
1. 何时何地有了这次艺术体验（学画画/练书法/参观画展）；2. 体验过程和你的所见所感；3. 这次经历带给你的收获与改变。
注意:1. 词数 100 左右，标题部分已给出，不计入总词数；2.短文须包含提示要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；公众人物姓名和作品名称可出现。
An Unforgettable Art Experience
话题分析
本单元的核心写作话题是分享艺术相关的体验与见解，包含两类高频写作方向：一是介绍一件喜爱的艺术作品/一位艺术家，二是分享一次艺术体验（如参观画展、学习书法/绘画）。要求学生围绕主题，从作品/艺术家的特点、背后的故事、个人感受与影响，或体验的过程、收获与感悟等方面展开写作，引导学生表达对艺术的理解，锻炼描述与书面表达能力。
写作积累
[高分词汇]
1.
improve one's taste in art
提升艺术品味2.
have a good/poor eye for art
有/缺乏艺术鉴赏力3.
focus on the details of the work
关注作品的细节4.
combine traditional styles with modern techniques
结合传统风格与现代技法5.
appreciate a work of art
欣赏一件艺术作品6.
have a unique style
有独特的风格7.
be deeply moved by the painting
被这幅画深深打动8.
use bright/dark colours
使用明亮/暗沉的色彩[高分句式]
1. 我过去对艺术没什么感觉，但一次画展的参观彻底改变了我的看法。
I used to have no interest in art, but a visit to an art exhibition completely changed my mind.
2. 每个人都有自己钟爱的艺术形式，我最欣赏的是中国水墨画。
Everyone has their favourite form of art, and what I admire most is Chinese ink painting.
3. 这些艺术作品不仅让我感受到美，也让我学会了用不同的视角看世界。
These works of art not only let me feel the beauty, but also teach me to see the world from different perspectives.
4. 这段与艺术相关的体验会永远留在我心中，它总能给我带来灵感和力量。
This art-related experience will stay in my heart forever, and it always brings me inspiration and strength.
典例讲解
假定你是李华，英语课堂上将开展艺术主题分享活动。请你作三分钟演讲，向同学们推荐你最喜欢的一幅名画。内容包括：
1. 描述画作；2.介绍作者；3.推荐原因。
注意:1. 词数 100 左右，开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 短文须包含提示要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；
3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；公众人物姓名和作品名称可出现。
Dear classmates,
I'm Li Hua. Today, I'm glad to
share my favourite famous painting with you.
That's all. Thank you!
[审题思路]
▶审体裁:本篇为课堂演讲稿,需用清晰的逻辑介绍画作、作者及推荐理由,语言要有亲和力。
▶审人称:以第一人称(I)为主,结合第三人称介绍画作与作者,增强分享的真实感。
▶审时态:用一般现在时描述画作特点、作者风格;用一般过去时补充作者生平背景;用一般现在时/将来时表达推荐理由与个人感悟。
写作提优专题
[写作提纲]
[优秀范文]
Dear classmates,
I'm Li Hua. Today, I'm glad to share my favourite famous painting with you.
The painting I'd like to introduce is Galloping Horses by Xu Beihong. It shows several strong horses running freely, with lively brushstrokes that make them look full of energy. Xu Beihong was one of the greatest Chinese painters in the 20th century. He was good at combining traditional Chinese ink art with Western painting skills, and his works are loved by people all over the world.
I love this painting because it not only shows the beauty of Chinese art, but also encourages me to keep moving forward bravely, just like the horses in the painting. It makes me feel powerful even when I face difficulties. I hope you will take time to enjoy this wonderful work.
That's all. Thank you!
实战演练
假定你是李华，校英语专栏正在征集以“An Unforgettable Art Experience”为题的稿件。请你根据下面的内容提示写一篇英语短文，分享你的经历。内容包括：
1. 何时何地有了这次艺术体验（学画画/练书法/参观画展）；2. 体验过程和你的所见所感；3. 这次经历带给你的收获与改变。
注意:1. 词数 100 左右，标题部分已给出，不计入总词数；2.短文须包含提示要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；公众人物姓名和作品名称可出现。
An Unforgettable Art Experience
Last Sunday, I visited a painting exhibition with my classmates, and it turned out to be an unforgettable art experience.
When we walked into the hall, we were attracted by countless beautiful paintings at once. Some showed amazing natural scenery, while others recorded warm daily moments. We listened to the guide's introduction quietly and learnt many interesting stories behind the works. Those lively paintings left a deep impression on me. This meaningful trip broadened my horizons greatly.
It helps me discover the beauty around us and improves my taste in art. I truly realize that art is an important part of our life.
答案
[高分词汇]
1. improve one's taste in art
2. have a good/poor eye for art
3. focus on the details of the work
4. combine traditional styles with modern techniques
5. appreciate a work of art
6. have a unique style
7. be deeply moved by the painting
8. use bright/dark colours
[高分句式]
1. I used to have no interest in art, but a visit to an art exhibition completely changed my mind.
2. Everyone has their favourite form of art, and what I admire most is Chinese ink painting.
3. These works of art not only let me feel the beauty, but also teach me to see the world from different perspectives.
4. This art-related experience will stay in my heart forever, and it always brings me inspiration and strength.
【实战演练】
One possible version:
An Unforgettable Art Experience
Last Sunday, I visited a painting exhibition with my classmates, and it turned out to be an unforgettable art experience.
When we walked into the hall, we were attracted by countless beautiful paintings at once. Some showed amazing natural scenery, while others recorded warm daily moments. We listened to the guide's introduction quietly and learnt many interesting stories behind the works. Those lively paintings left a deep impression on me. This meaningful trip broadened my horizons greatly.
It helps me discover the beauty around us and improves my taste in art. I truly realize that art is an important part of our life.
1. improve one's taste in art
2. have a good/poor eye for art
3. focus on the details of the work
4. combine traditional styles with modern techniques
5. appreciate a work of art
6. have a unique style
7. be deeply moved by the painting
8. use bright/dark colours
[高分句式]
1. I used to have no interest in art, but a visit to an art exhibition completely changed my mind.
2. Everyone has their favourite form of art, and what I admire most is Chinese ink painting.
3. These works of art not only let me feel the beauty, but also teach me to see the world from different perspectives.
4. This art-related experience will stay in my heart forever, and it always brings me inspiration and strength.
【实战演练】
One possible version:
An Unforgettable Art Experience
Last Sunday, I visited a painting exhibition with my classmates, and it turned out to be an unforgettable art experience.
When we walked into the hall, we were attracted by countless beautiful paintings at once. Some showed amazing natural scenery, while others recorded warm daily moments. We listened to the guide's introduction quietly and learnt many interesting stories behind the works. Those lively paintings left a deep impression on me. This meaningful trip broadened my horizons greatly.
It helps me discover the beauty around us and improves my taste in art. I truly realize that art is an important part of our life.
解析
【分析】
首先审题，明确本次写作任务是围绕“An Unforgettable Art Experience”创作英语短文，需涵盖三个核心要点：艺术体验的时间、地点及具体事件，体验过程中的所见、所闻与个人感受，该经历带来的收获与改变。接着构思“总-分-总”的篇章结构：开头直接点明时间、地点和事件，引出“难忘的艺术体验”；中间详细描述体验过程，包括画作类型、听讲解的情况及当时的感受；结尾阐述此次经历的收获与对艺术的新认识。最后运用积累的高分词汇和句式，确保语言准确连贯，符合词数要求。
【解析】
第一步，审题定要求：体裁为英语记叙文，主题是“难忘的艺术体验”，人称以第一人称为主，时态以一般过去时描述体验过程、一般现在时表达收获感悟，词数约100词，不得出现真实个人信息。第二步，搭建内容框架：①开头：点明时间（Last Sunday）、地点（painting exhibition）、事件（和同学参观画展）；②中间：描述体验过程（看到的画作类型、听导游讲解、留下深刻印象）；③结尾：写收获（发现身边的美、提升艺术品味、认识艺术的重要性）。第三步，运用积累的高分词汇和句式，确保内容连贯，符合要求。
【答案】
[高分词汇]
1. improve one's taste in art
2. have a good/poor eye for art
3. focus on the details of the work
4. combine traditional styles with modern techniques
5. appreciate a work of art
6. have a unique style
7. be deeply moved by the painting
8. use bright/dark colours
[高分句式]
1. I used to have no interest in art, but a visit to an art exhibition completely changed my mind.
2. Everyone has their favourite form of art, and what I admire most is Chinese ink painting.
3. These works of art not only let me feel the beauty, but also teach me to see the world from different perspectives.
4. This art-related experience will stay in my heart forever, and it always brings me inspiration and strength.
An Unforgettable Art Experience
Last Sunday, I visited a painting exhibition with my classmates, and it turned out to be an unforgettable art experience.
When we walked into the hall, we were attracted by countless beautiful paintings at once. Some showed amazing natural scenery, while others recorded warm daily moments. We listened to the guide's introduction quietly and learnt many interesting stories behind the works. Those lively paintings left a deep impression on me. This meaningful trip broadened my horizons greatly.
It helps me discover the beauty around us and improves my taste in art. I truly realize that art is an important part of our life.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、艺术主题表达、高分词汇运用
【点评】
本题为英语写作提优题，围绕艺术体验主题，考查学生的审题、篇章构建及语言运用能力，要求结合要点运用积累的词汇句式，写出连贯短文，有助于提升学生书面表达水平与对艺术主题的理解。
【难度系数】
0.5
首先审题，明确本次写作任务是围绕“An Unforgettable Art Experience”创作英语短文，需涵盖三个核心要点：艺术体验的时间、地点及具体事件，体验过程中的所见、所闻与个人感受，该经历带来的收获与改变。接着构思“总-分-总”的篇章结构：开头直接点明时间、地点和事件，引出“难忘的艺术体验”；中间详细描述体验过程，包括画作类型、听讲解的情况及当时的感受；结尾阐述此次经历的收获与对艺术的新认识。最后运用积累的高分词汇和句式，确保语言准确连贯，符合词数要求。
【解析】
第一步，审题定要求：体裁为英语记叙文，主题是“难忘的艺术体验”，人称以第一人称为主，时态以一般过去时描述体验过程、一般现在时表达收获感悟，词数约100词，不得出现真实个人信息。第二步，搭建内容框架：①开头：点明时间（Last Sunday）、地点（painting exhibition）、事件（和同学参观画展）；②中间：描述体验过程（看到的画作类型、听导游讲解、留下深刻印象）；③结尾：写收获（发现身边的美、提升艺术品味、认识艺术的重要性）。第三步，运用积累的高分词汇和句式，确保内容连贯，符合要求。
【答案】
[高分词汇]
1. improve one's taste in art
2. have a good/poor eye for art
3. focus on the details of the work
4. combine traditional styles with modern techniques
5. appreciate a work of art
6. have a unique style
7. be deeply moved by the painting
8. use bright/dark colours
[高分句式]
1. I used to have no interest in art, but a visit to an art exhibition completely changed my mind.
2. Everyone has their favourite form of art, and what I admire most is Chinese ink painting.
3. These works of art not only let me feel the beauty, but also teach me to see the world from different perspectives.
4. This art-related experience will stay in my heart forever, and it always brings me inspiration and strength.
An Unforgettable Art Experience
Last Sunday, I visited a painting exhibition with my classmates, and it turned out to be an unforgettable art experience.
When we walked into the hall, we were attracted by countless beautiful paintings at once. Some showed amazing natural scenery, while others recorded warm daily moments. We listened to the guide's introduction quietly and learnt many interesting stories behind the works. Those lively paintings left a deep impression on me. This meaningful trip broadened my horizons greatly.
It helps me discover the beauty around us and improves my taste in art. I truly realize that art is an important part of our life.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、艺术主题表达、高分词汇运用
【点评】
本题为英语写作提优题，围绕艺术体验主题，考查学生的审题、篇章构建及语言运用能力，要求结合要点运用积累的词汇句式，写出连贯短文，有助于提升学生书面表达水平与对艺术主题的理解。
【难度系数】
0.5
