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正确使用一般将来时,对某一事物展开合理的想象和预测。
写作素材
【词汇】
prediction, traffic, technology, efficient,
education, length, topic, partner, disaster,
emergency, disappear, challenging, impossible,
quality, develop, challenge, public,
medical, take over
【句型】
◆开头句
1. I’d like to talk about what the world in
the future will be like with you.
2. Life in the future will be different from
what it’s like today.
◆中间句
1. People will do less work in the future
because robots will do the dangerous and
hard work.
2. There will be fewer cars in the street and
less air pollution.
◆结尾句
1. Our life will be better and better.
2. Life in the future will be fantastic. How I
wish it would come soon!
写作素材
【词汇】
prediction, traffic, technology, efficient,
education, length, topic, partner, disaster,
emergency, disappear, challenging, impossible,
quality, develop, challenge, public,
medical, take over
【句型】
◆开头句
1. I’d like to talk about what the world in
the future will be like with you.
2. Life in the future will be different from
what it’s like today.
◆中间句
1. People will do less work in the future
because robots will do the dangerous and
hard work.
2. There will be fewer cars in the street and
less air pollution.
◆结尾句
1. Our life will be better and better.
2. Life in the future will be fantastic. How I
wish it would come soon!
答案
My Predictions for the Future
I'd like to talk about what the world in the future will be like with you.
With the fast development of technology, our life will be totally different from today's in 30 years. First, the traffic will be far more efficient. There will be no long-time traffic jams, and new kinds of green public transport will carry people to every place they want to go in a very short time. Second, smart robots will be our good partners. They will take over all the dangerous and heavy work, so people will have much more free time to enjoy their life. Third, the quality of education will improve a lot. We will not need to go to traditional schools every day, and we can take classes from top teachers at home online. Even the most challenging subject will not seem impossible for every student to learn well. What's more, the medical level will be much higher. Doctors will be able to deal with more sudden natural disasters and special emergencies easily, and many incurable diseases today will disappear completely.
Our life will be better and better. Life in the future will be fantastic. How I wish it would come soon!
I'd like to talk about what the world in the future will be like with you.
With the fast development of technology, our life will be totally different from today's in 30 years. First, the traffic will be far more efficient. There will be no long-time traffic jams, and new kinds of green public transport will carry people to every place they want to go in a very short time. Second, smart robots will be our good partners. They will take over all the dangerous and heavy work, so people will have much more free time to enjoy their life. Third, the quality of education will improve a lot. We will not need to go to traditional schools every day, and we can take classes from top teachers at home online. Even the most challenging subject will not seem impossible for every student to learn well. What's more, the medical level will be much higher. Doctors will be able to deal with more sudden natural disasters and special emergencies easily, and many incurable diseases today will disappear completely.
Our life will be better and better. Life in the future will be fantastic. How I wish it would come soon!
解析
【分析】
本题要求用一般将来时对未来事物展开合理想象和预测，需结合给定词汇、句型完成写作。解题思路：1. 选用给定开头句引出未来世界话题；2. 围绕科技发展，从交通、机器人、教育、医疗等角度展开，融入给定词汇，全程使用一般将来时；3. 用给定结尾句收束全文，保证结构完整、内容合理。
【解析】
开头使用指定开头句引出未来世界话题；中间分四个方面展开：①结合technology说明traffic会更efficient，无拥堵，绿色公共交通覆盖所有地点；②提到smart robots作为partner，take over危险繁重工作，人们有更多空闲时间；③说明education的quality提升，在线学习让challenging科目不再impossible；④指出medical level提高，能应对disaster和emergency，疾病会disappear；最后用指定结尾句总结，符合一般将来时要求，融入所有核心词汇。
【答案】
My Predictions for the Future
I'd like to talk about what the world in the future will be like with you.
With the fast development of technology, our life will be totally different from today's in 30 years. First, the traffic will be far more efficient. There will be no long-time traffic jams, and new kinds of green public transport will carry people to every place they want to go in a very short time. Second, smart robots will be our good partners. They will take over all the dangerous and heavy work, so people will have much more free time to enjoy their life. Third, the quality of education will improve a lot. We will not need to go to traditional schools every day, and we can take classes from top teachers at home online. Even the most challenging subject will not seem impossible for every student to learn well. What's more, the medical level will be much higher. Doctors will be able to deal with more sudden natural disasters and special emergencies easily, and many incurable diseases today will disappear completely.
Our life will be better and better. Life in the future will be fantastic. How I wish it would come soon!
【知识点】
一般将来时、英语话题写作、词汇运用
【点评】
本题围绕未来预测主题，提供了充足的词汇和句型素材，降低了写作难度，重点考查学生对一般将来时的运用能力及语言组织能力，要求内容合理、结构清晰。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题要求用一般将来时对未来事物展开合理想象和预测，需结合给定词汇、句型完成写作。解题思路：1. 选用给定开头句引出未来世界话题；2. 围绕科技发展，从交通、机器人、教育、医疗等角度展开，融入给定词汇，全程使用一般将来时；3. 用给定结尾句收束全文，保证结构完整、内容合理。
【解析】
开头使用指定开头句引出未来世界话题；中间分四个方面展开：①结合technology说明traffic会更efficient，无拥堵，绿色公共交通覆盖所有地点；②提到smart robots作为partner，take over危险繁重工作，人们有更多空闲时间；③说明education的quality提升，在线学习让challenging科目不再impossible；④指出medical level提高，能应对disaster和emergency，疾病会disappear；最后用指定结尾句总结，符合一般将来时要求，融入所有核心词汇。
【答案】
My Predictions for the Future
I'd like to talk about what the world in the future will be like with you.
With the fast development of technology, our life will be totally different from today's in 30 years. First, the traffic will be far more efficient. There will be no long-time traffic jams, and new kinds of green public transport will carry people to every place they want to go in a very short time. Second, smart robots will be our good partners. They will take over all the dangerous and heavy work, so people will have much more free time to enjoy their life. Third, the quality of education will improve a lot. We will not need to go to traditional schools every day, and we can take classes from top teachers at home online. Even the most challenging subject will not seem impossible for every student to learn well. What's more, the medical level will be much higher. Doctors will be able to deal with more sudden natural disasters and special emergencies easily, and many incurable diseases today will disappear completely.
Our life will be better and better. Life in the future will be fantastic. How I wish it would come soon!
【知识点】
一般将来时、英语话题写作、词汇运用
【点评】
本题围绕未来预测主题，提供了充足的词汇和句型素材，降低了写作难度，重点考查学生对一般将来时的运用能力及语言组织能力，要求内容合理、结构清晰。
【难度系数】
0.5
the future. 真正的智慧不仅在于能明察眼前，而且还能预见未来。
写作典范
智慧科技赋能学习创新。随着科技的发展，人工智能(AI)将越来越多地被应用于课堂。请你围绕下面所示的三个问题，用英文写一篇短文。
• What will the future classroom be like?
• How will you learn with the help of AI?
• What can you get from the new ways of study?
注意:词数80左右。
【审题立意】
1. 审主题:介绍未来的课堂
2. 审体裁:说明文
3. 审人称:第一人称和第三人称
4. 审时态:一般将来时
【思路点拨】
【佳作欣赏】
写作典范
智慧科技赋能学习创新。随着科技的发展，人工智能(AI)将越来越多地被应用于课堂。请你围绕下面所示的三个问题，用英文写一篇短文。
• What will the future classroom be like?
• How will you learn with the help of AI?
• What can you get from the new ways of study?
注意:词数80左右。
【审题立意】
1. 审主题:介绍未来的课堂
2. 审体裁:说明文
3. 审人称:第一人称和第三人称
4. 审时态:一般将来时
【思路点拨】
【佳作欣赏】
答案
The AI in My Future Classroom
In the future, AI will certainly bring great changes to our classroom. Every teacher and student will have their own special AI robot.
Firstly, my AI robot will make proper learning plans for my schoolwork. Moreover, it can act as a foreign friend and practise English with me at any time and in any place.
Undoubtedly, these new learning ways will make my study easy and efficient. I'm expecting the future school life.
In the future, AI will certainly bring great changes to our classroom. Every teacher and student will have their own special AI robot.
Firstly, my AI robot will make proper learning plans for my schoolwork. Moreover, it can act as a foreign friend and practise English with me at any time and in any place.
Undoubtedly, these new learning ways will make my study easy and efficient. I'm expecting the future school life.
解析
【分析】本题是英语写作题，要求围绕未来课堂、AI辅助学习、新学习方式的收获三个要点写短文。解题思路为：首先明确文章结构，分为引出话题、具体说明、总结全文三部分；其次确定时态为一般将来时，人称结合第一、第三人称；最后紧扣要点，用简洁的语言组织内容，控制词数在80左右。
【解析】写作步骤如下：1. 开头（引出话题）：点明未来课堂因AI发生变化，师生将拥有各自的AI机器人；2. 中间（具体说明）：分两点写AI的作用，一是制定学习计划，二是随时陪练英语；3. 结尾（总结）：说明新学习方式的好处，表达对未来的期待。注意用词准确，时态正确，符合词数要求。
【答案】The AI in My Future Classroom
In the future, AI will certainly bring great changes to our classroom. Every teacher and student will have their own special AI robot.
Firstly, my AI robot will make proper learning plans for my schoolwork. Moreover, it can act as a foreign friend and practise English with me at any time and in any place.
Undoubtedly, these new learning ways will make my study easy and efficient. I'm expecting the future school life.
【知识点】英语写作、一般将来时、要点整合
【点评】范文紧扣题目要求，结构清晰，逻辑连贯，准确覆盖所有写作要点，时态运用正确，语言简洁流畅，符合词数要求，是一篇优秀的话题写作范例。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】写作步骤如下：1. 开头（引出话题）：点明未来课堂因AI发生变化，师生将拥有各自的AI机器人；2. 中间（具体说明）：分两点写AI的作用，一是制定学习计划，二是随时陪练英语；3. 结尾（总结）：说明新学习方式的好处，表达对未来的期待。注意用词准确，时态正确，符合词数要求。
【答案】The AI in My Future Classroom
In the future, AI will certainly bring great changes to our classroom. Every teacher and student will have their own special AI robot.
Firstly, my AI robot will make proper learning plans for my schoolwork. Moreover, it can act as a foreign friend and practise English with me at any time and in any place.
Undoubtedly, these new learning ways will make my study easy and efficient. I'm expecting the future school life.
【知识点】英语写作、一般将来时、要点整合
【点评】范文紧扣题目要求，结构清晰，逻辑连贯，准确覆盖所有写作要点，时态运用正确，语言简洁流畅，符合词数要求，是一篇优秀的话题写作范例。
【难度系数】0.5
