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[经典例题]
冬天渐渐远去，生机盎然的春天在向我们走来。假设你是李梅，春天是你最喜爱的季节，你即将参加学校举行的以“My favourite season”为主题的英文演讲比赛，请根据以下内容提示，用英语写一篇演讲稿。
内容提示：
1. What is the weather like in spring?
2. What does your city/hometown look like in spring?
3. Why do you like spring?
4. What activities do people in your city/hometown enjoy doing in spring?
要求：
1. 短文必须包含所有的提示要点，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得提及真实人名和校名等信息；
3. 词数不少于90。
[高分范文]
Hello, everyone. ① Spring is my favourite season. It's usually warm and sunny. When spring comes, everything starts to grow. Trees turn green and many flowers come out. Bees and butterflies play among colourful flowers. Our city looks so lively and beautiful.
In spring, people like to do all kinds of outdoor activities. Children ② are busy playing games in the playground. The elderly like to go to the park for their morning exercises and evening dances. ③ I like hiking because I like to feel close to nature and enjoy the beautiful spring scenes. Sometimes I invite my friends to fly kites in the park when it is windy.
[经典例题]
冬天渐渐远去，生机盎然的春天在向我们走来。假设你是李梅，春天是你最喜爱的季节，你即将参加学校举行的以“My favourite season”为主题的英文演讲比赛，请根据以下内容提示，用英语写一篇演讲稿。
内容提示：
1. What is the weather like in spring?
2. What does your city/hometown look like in spring?
3. Why do you like spring?
4. What activities do people in your city/hometown enjoy doing in spring?
要求：
1. 短文必须包含所有的提示要点，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得提及真实人名和校名等信息；
3. 词数不少于90。
[高分范文]
Hello, everyone. ① Spring is my favourite season. It's usually warm and sunny. When spring comes, everything starts to grow. Trees turn green and many flowers come out. Bees and butterflies play among colourful flowers. Our city looks so lively and beautiful.
In spring, people like to do all kinds of outdoor activities. Children ② are busy playing games in the playground. The elderly like to go to the park for their morning exercises and evening dances. ③ I like hiking because I like to feel close to nature and enjoy the beautiful spring scenes. Sometimes I invite my friends to fly kites in the park when it is windy.
答案
Hello, everyone.
Spring is my favourite season. It's usually warm and sunny. The gentle wind blows softly, and we seldom feel cold or hot at this time of year. When spring comes, everything starts to grow. Trees turn green and many flowers come out. Bees and butterflies play among colourful flowers. Our city looks so lively and beautiful, as if it is waking up from a long cold sleep.
In spring, people like to do all kinds of outdoor activities. Children are busy playing games in the playground. The elderly like to go to the park for their morning exercises and evening dances. I like hiking because I like to feel close to nature and enjoy the beautiful spring scenes. Sometimes I invite my friends to fly kites in the park when it is windy.
Spring brings us not only comfortable weather, but also hope and happiness. I love spring best.
Thank you for your listening!
Spring is my favourite season. It's usually warm and sunny. The gentle wind blows softly, and we seldom feel cold or hot at this time of year. When spring comes, everything starts to grow. Trees turn green and many flowers come out. Bees and butterflies play among colourful flowers. Our city looks so lively and beautiful, as if it is waking up from a long cold sleep.
In spring, people like to do all kinds of outdoor activities. Children are busy playing games in the playground. The elderly like to go to the park for their morning exercises and evening dances. I like hiking because I like to feel close to nature and enjoy the beautiful spring scenes. Sometimes I invite my friends to fly kites in the park when it is windy.
Spring brings us not only comfortable weather, but also hope and happiness. I love spring best.
Thank you for your listening!
解析
这是一篇主题为“My favourite season”的英语演讲稿写作题，符合八年级季节相关话题的写作要求：1. 写作需全部覆盖4个提示要点：介绍春天的天气情况、描述家乡春日的样貌、说明自己喜爱春天的原因、列举家乡民众春日喜爱的活动；2. 行文以第一人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主，语言风格贴合演讲稿亲切自然的特点；3. 可适当补充细节让内容连贯，词数不少于90，不得出现真实人名、校名等隐私信息。参考范文用到了when引导的时间状语从句、be busy doing等八年级核心知识点，完整覆盖所有要求，表达流畅生动。
Moreover, we can go on a school trip to a hill on sunny days. That's the best part of spring.
④ So, spring is great!
That's all. Thanks for listening.
[名师点评]
短文是演讲稿，要求学生介绍自己最喜欢的季节——春天，通过描述春天的景色和活动来表达对春天的喜爱。
① 开篇表明观点，并描述了春天的气候，when引导的时间状语从句的使用体现了春天的生机勃勃；
② be busy doing sth.、like to do sth.短语的使用生动描述了人们在春天的活动；
③ because引导的原因状语从句的使用表明了作者喜欢远足的原因；
④ 宾语从句的使用表明了自己的观点，简洁明了，回归主题。
[素材积累]
[开头句]
1. Winter is my favourite season.
2. Of all the seasons, I like summer best.
3. My favourite season is autumn.
[中间句]
1. I like summer because I can go swimming with my friends.
2. A windy day is a perfect time to fly kites.
3. My friends and I love to have big snowball fights.
[结尾句]
1. It often rains in summer, but I still love summer.
2. Winter in Harbin is really great and I can have many fun activities. I love winter!
3. Spring not only lets us enjoy the beauty of nature, but also gives us lots of fun and hope.
[名言警句]
1. Make your whole year's plans in spring, and your day's plan early in the morning.
一年之计在于春，一日之计在于晨。
2. If winter comes, can spring be far behind?
如果冬天来了，春天还会远吗？
[写作演练]
[小试身手]
一年四季，景色不同，特点各异。在每个季节里，我们心中都有一份对自然的赞美与感悟。大自然如此美丽，哪一个抓住了你的心呢？请以“I love
提示:1. 你最喜欢哪个季节？
2. 这个季节的气候和环境有什么特点？
3. 你在这个季节会做些什么活动？
要求:1. 语言表达准确，短文通顺连贯，书写规范整洁；
2. 先补全标题，再根据要点适当发挥，不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 词数90左右。
[思路点拨]
① 人称:以第一人称为主;② 时态:一般现在时;③ 写作时要注意顺序,先点明你自己最喜欢的季节并描述这个季节的气候和环境特点,再介绍在这个季节你会做哪些活动,最后回归主题。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
I love
（更多精彩作文素材见“背记手册”）
④ So, spring is great!
That's all. Thanks for listening.
[名师点评]
短文是演讲稿，要求学生介绍自己最喜欢的季节——春天，通过描述春天的景色和活动来表达对春天的喜爱。
① 开篇表明观点，并描述了春天的气候，when引导的时间状语从句的使用体现了春天的生机勃勃；
② be busy doing sth.、like to do sth.短语的使用生动描述了人们在春天的活动；
③ because引导的原因状语从句的使用表明了作者喜欢远足的原因；
④ 宾语从句的使用表明了自己的观点，简洁明了，回归主题。
[素材积累]
[开头句]
1. Winter is my favourite season.
2. Of all the seasons, I like summer best.
3. My favourite season is autumn.
[中间句]
1. I like summer because I can go swimming with my friends.
2. A windy day is a perfect time to fly kites.
3. My friends and I love to have big snowball fights.
[结尾句]
1. It often rains in summer, but I still love summer.
2. Winter in Harbin is really great and I can have many fun activities. I love winter!
3. Spring not only lets us enjoy the beauty of nature, but also gives us lots of fun and hope.
[名言警句]
1. Make your whole year's plans in spring, and your day's plan early in the morning.
一年之计在于春，一日之计在于晨。
2. If winter comes, can spring be far behind?
如果冬天来了，春天还会远吗？
[写作演练]
[小试身手]
一年四季，景色不同，特点各异。在每个季节里，我们心中都有一份对自然的赞美与感悟。大自然如此美丽，哪一个抓住了你的心呢？请以“I love
autumn
best”为题，根据以下提示和要求，用英语写一篇短文，描述你最喜欢的季节。提示:1. 你最喜欢哪个季节？
2. 这个季节的气候和环境有什么特点？
3. 你在这个季节会做些什么活动？
要求:1. 语言表达准确，短文通顺连贯，书写规范整洁；
2. 先补全标题，再根据要点适当发挥，不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 词数90左右。
[思路点拨]
① 人称:以第一人称为主;② 时态:一般现在时;③ 写作时要注意顺序,先点明你自己最喜欢的季节并描述这个季节的气候和环境特点,再介绍在这个季节你会做哪些活动,最后回归主题。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
I love
autumn
best（更多精彩作文素材见“背记手册”）
答案
One possible version:
I love autumn best
My favourite season is autumn. The weather is cool and comfortable. The sky is blue and the clouds are white. The leaves on the trees turn into different colours like red, yellow and orange. It looks like a beautiful painting.
I like to go for a walk in the park in autumn. I can enjoy the fresh air and the beautiful scenery. I also like to pick up fallen leaves and make bookmarks with them. Sometimes I go hiking with my family and have a picnic in the mountains.
Autumn is really a wonderful season.
I love autumn best
My favourite season is autumn. The weather is cool and comfortable. The sky is blue and the clouds are white. The leaves on the trees turn into different colours like red, yellow and orange. It looks like a beautiful painting.
I like to go for a walk in the park in autumn. I can enjoy the fresh air and the beautiful scenery. I also like to pick up fallen leaves and make bookmarks with them. Sometimes I go hiking with my family and have a picnic in the mountains.
Autumn is really a wonderful season.
