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Ⅶ. 书面表达。(共1小题,计10分)
89. Life is full of wonderful moments that we will remember forever. Did you have an experience that you would never forget? Maybe it was a time when you had fun with your pet, had a wonderful outdoor trip or enjoyed a fantastic book. Share ONE story with us.
你的文章需包括以下要点：
注意:(1)语言通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;
(2)需包含以上要点并适当发挥;
(3)词数100左右;文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
89. Life is full of wonderful moments that we will remember forever. Did you have an experience that you would never forget? Maybe it was a time when you had fun with your pet, had a wonderful outdoor trip or enjoyed a fantastic book. Share ONE story with us.
你的文章需包括以下要点：
注意:(1)语言通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;
(2)需包含以上要点并适当发挥;
(3)词数100左右;文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
答案
89.【范文】
An Unforgettable Experience
Last summer, I went to the beach with my family. It was a sunny day, and we all felt excited. We played beach volleyball and built sandcastles. My dad taught me how to swim, and I learned quickly. We also had a delicious picnic under a big umbrella. The sea was blue, and the waves were gentle. I felt happy and relaxed.
This experience was unforgettable because I not only enjoyed the beautiful nature but also learned new skills. I will never forget the laughter and joy we shared that day. It was a wonderful time with my family, and I hope to visit the beach again soon.
An Unforgettable Experience
Last summer, I went to the beach with my family. It was a sunny day, and we all felt excited. We played beach volleyball and built sandcastles. My dad taught me how to swim, and I learned quickly. We also had a delicious picnic under a big umbrella. The sea was blue, and the waves were gentle. I felt happy and relaxed.
This experience was unforgettable because I not only enjoyed the beautiful nature but also learned new skills. I will never forget the laughter and joy we shared that day. It was a wonderful time with my family, and I hope to visit the beach again soon.
解析
【分析】
首先审题明确题目要求：需写一个难忘的经历，选一个主题（如与家人出游），文章要包含具体经历细节、表达感受，语言通顺、词数100左右且无真实信息。解题思路为：1. 选贴近生活的主题（如海滩之旅），易填充细节；2. 结构分两部分：开头点题，中间叙述经历过程，结尾说明难忘原因；3. 加入环境描写和具体活动，让内容更生动，控制词数符合要求。
【解析】
1. 确定主题：选择“去年夏天和家人去海滩”的难忘经历，贴近生活易写作；
2. 标题：An Unforgettable Experience，直接点明主题；
3. 正文第一段：交代时间（Last summer）、人物（my family）、天气（sunny），具体活动（play beach volleyball, build sandcastles, learn to swim, have picnic），加入环境描写（blue sea, gentle waves）丰富内容；
4. 正文第二段：说明难忘原因（enjoy nature, learn new skills, share joy），表达对未来的期待，升华主题；
5. 检查：确保语言通顺，词数约100，无真实姓名和学校信息。
【答案】
An Unforgettable Experience
Last summer, I went to the beach with my family. It was a sunny day, and we all felt excited. We played beach volleyball and built sandcastles. My dad taught me how to swim, and I learned quickly. We also had a delicious picnic under a big umbrella. The sea was blue, and the waves were gentle. I felt happy and relaxed.
This experience was unforgettable because I not only enjoyed the beautiful nature but also learned new skills. I will never forget the laughter and joy we shared that day. It was a wonderful time with my family, and I hope to visit the beach again soon.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、话题作文（难忘经历）、英语语句连贯
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要求，主题明确，内容充实有细节，结构清晰（点题-叙事-升华），语言流畅自然，符合词数要求，无真实信息，完美完成写作任务，是优秀的参考范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先审题明确题目要求：需写一个难忘的经历，选一个主题（如与家人出游），文章要包含具体经历细节、表达感受，语言通顺、词数100左右且无真实信息。解题思路为：1. 选贴近生活的主题（如海滩之旅），易填充细节；2. 结构分两部分：开头点题，中间叙述经历过程，结尾说明难忘原因；3. 加入环境描写和具体活动，让内容更生动，控制词数符合要求。
【解析】
1. 确定主题：选择“去年夏天和家人去海滩”的难忘经历，贴近生活易写作；
2. 标题：An Unforgettable Experience，直接点明主题；
3. 正文第一段：交代时间（Last summer）、人物（my family）、天气（sunny），具体活动（play beach volleyball, build sandcastles, learn to swim, have picnic），加入环境描写（blue sea, gentle waves）丰富内容；
4. 正文第二段：说明难忘原因（enjoy nature, learn new skills, share joy），表达对未来的期待，升华主题；
5. 检查：确保语言通顺，词数约100，无真实姓名和学校信息。
【答案】
An Unforgettable Experience
Last summer, I went to the beach with my family. It was a sunny day, and we all felt excited. We played beach volleyball and built sandcastles. My dad taught me how to swim, and I learned quickly. We also had a delicious picnic under a big umbrella. The sea was blue, and the waves were gentle. I felt happy and relaxed.
This experience was unforgettable because I not only enjoyed the beautiful nature but also learned new skills. I will never forget the laughter and joy we shared that day. It was a wonderful time with my family, and I hope to visit the beach again soon.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、话题作文（难忘经历）、英语语句连贯
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要求，主题明确，内容充实有细节，结构清晰（点题-叙事-升华），语言流畅自然，符合词数要求，无真实信息，完美完成写作任务，是优秀的参考范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
