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[2025江苏扬州期中]“社”想未来，“团”聚精彩。今年学校开办各种社团，丰富中学生课余生活，如Reading Club、Travelling Club、DIY Club，以此彰显多样的校园风采。假设你是张华，想申请加入其中的一个俱乐部，请根据以下问题给王老师写一封英语申请信。
(1)What are you like? (personalities, hobbies…)
(2)Which club would you like to join? (only one)
(3)Why would you like to join the club? (reason, hope…)
注意事项：
(1)语句通顺，意思连贯，可适当发挥；
(2)词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
(3)不得使用真实的个人及学校信息。
Dear Miss Wang,
I’m Zhang Hua in Grade 7.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Hua
[2025江苏扬州期中]“社”想未来，“团”聚精彩。今年学校开办各种社团，丰富中学生课余生活，如Reading Club、Travelling Club、DIY Club，以此彰显多样的校园风采。假设你是张华，想申请加入其中的一个俱乐部，请根据以下问题给王老师写一封英语申请信。
(1)What are you like? (personalities, hobbies…)
(2)Which club would you like to join? (only one)
(3)Why would you like to join the club? (reason, hope…)
注意事项：
(1)语句通顺，意思连贯，可适当发挥；
(2)词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
(3)不得使用真实的个人及学校信息。
Dear Miss Wang,
I’m Zhang Hua in Grade 7.
I am an outgoing and friendly person with a passion for creativity.
In my free time, I enjoy drawing and making handicrafts. So I would like to join the DIY Club.
I have always been fascinated by the idea of creating something unique with my own hands. Joining the DIY Club will allow me to learn new skills, share my ideas with others, and make new friends who have similar interests.
I hope to contribute my creative ideas and collaborate with other members to create wonderful projects.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Hua
答案
【参考范文】
Dear Miss Wang,
I'm Zhang Hua in Grade 7. I am an outgoing and friendly person with a passion for creativity.
In my free time, I enjoy drawing and making handicrafts. So I would like to join the DIY Club. I have always been fascinated by the idea of creating something unique with my own hands. Joining the DIY Club will allow me to learn new skills, share my ideas with others, and make new friends who have similar interests. I hope to contribute my creative ideas and collaborate with other members to create wonderful projects.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Hua
知识拓展
change 作动词，意为“改变；变化”；作可数名词，意为“变化；改变”。
高分技巧
本题需要准确区分导致他自豪的原因和他努力后的回报。根据第三段的“... he makes it to the top!” 及“He looks around and see a beautiful view of the city.”可知“看风景”是登顶后的奖励，而不是让他自豪的直接原因；根据最后一段的“He is proud that he doesn't give up.”可知让约翰自豪的不是“风景”，而是“不放弃”。
Dear Miss Wang,
I'm Zhang Hua in Grade 7. I am an outgoing and friendly person with a passion for creativity.
In my free time, I enjoy drawing and making handicrafts. So I would like to join the DIY Club. I have always been fascinated by the idea of creating something unique with my own hands. Joining the DIY Club will allow me to learn new skills, share my ideas with others, and make new friends who have similar interests. I hope to contribute my creative ideas and collaborate with other members to create wonderful projects.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Hua
知识拓展
change 作动词，意为“改变；变化”；作可数名词，意为“变化；改变”。
高分技巧
本题需要准确区分导致他自豪的原因和他努力后的回报。根据第三段的“... he makes it to the top!” 及“He looks around and see a beautiful view of the city.”可知“看风景”是登顶后的奖励，而不是让他自豪的直接原因；根据最后一段的“He is proud that he doesn't give up.”可知让约翰自豪的不是“风景”，而是“不放弃”。
解析
【分析】
本题为初中英语应用文写作题，要求以张华的身份给王老师写一封申请信，需覆盖三个核心要点：①介绍自身性格、爱好等；②明确申请加入的俱乐部（仅选一个）；③说明加入该俱乐部的原因与期望。写作时需注意语句通顺、意思连贯，词数约80词，使用给定的开头和结尾，不得使用真实个人及学校信息。解题思路：先在给定开头后，先介绍自身性格与爱好，再选择DIY俱乐部，接着阐述加入的理由（如喜欢动手创作、想学习技能、结交志同道合的朋友），最后表达对加入俱乐部的期望，确保内容紧扣要点、衔接自然。
【解析】
按照写作要求，完成申请信正文：
1. 介绍自身：I am an outgoing and friendly person with a passion for creativity. In my free time, I enjoy drawing and making handicrafts.
2. 说明申请俱乐部：So I would like to join the DIY Club.
3. 阐述原因与期望：I have always been fascinated by creating something unique with my own hands. Joining the DIY Club will allow me to learn new skills, share my ideas with others, and make new friends who have similar interests. I hope to contribute my creative ideas and collaborate with other members to create wonderful projects.
【答案】
I am an outgoing and friendly person with a passion for creativity. In my free time, I enjoy drawing and making handicrafts. So I would like to join the DIY Club. I have always been fascinated by creating something unique with my own hands. Joining the DIY Club will allow me to learn new skills, share my ideas with others, and make new friends who have similar interests. I hope to contribute my creative ideas and collaborate with other members to create wonderful projects.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、申请信写作、英语语句连贯
【点评】
本题考查初中学生的英语应用文写作能力，要求紧扣题目给出的三个要点组织内容，语言需通顺连贯，符合书信格式，是初中英语常见的写作题型，能有效考察学生的英语表达与逻辑组织能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为初中英语应用文写作题，要求以张华的身份给王老师写一封申请信，需覆盖三个核心要点：①介绍自身性格、爱好等；②明确申请加入的俱乐部（仅选一个）；③说明加入该俱乐部的原因与期望。写作时需注意语句通顺、意思连贯，词数约80词，使用给定的开头和结尾，不得使用真实个人及学校信息。解题思路：先在给定开头后，先介绍自身性格与爱好，再选择DIY俱乐部，接着阐述加入的理由（如喜欢动手创作、想学习技能、结交志同道合的朋友），最后表达对加入俱乐部的期望，确保内容紧扣要点、衔接自然。
【解析】
按照写作要求，完成申请信正文：
1. 介绍自身：I am an outgoing and friendly person with a passion for creativity. In my free time, I enjoy drawing and making handicrafts.
2. 说明申请俱乐部：So I would like to join the DIY Club.
3. 阐述原因与期望：I have always been fascinated by creating something unique with my own hands. Joining the DIY Club will allow me to learn new skills, share my ideas with others, and make new friends who have similar interests. I hope to contribute my creative ideas and collaborate with other members to create wonderful projects.
【答案】
I am an outgoing and friendly person with a passion for creativity. In my free time, I enjoy drawing and making handicrafts. So I would like to join the DIY Club. I have always been fascinated by creating something unique with my own hands. Joining the DIY Club will allow me to learn new skills, share my ideas with others, and make new friends who have similar interests. I hope to contribute my creative ideas and collaborate with other members to create wonderful projects.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、申请信写作、英语语句连贯
【点评】
本题考查初中学生的英语应用文写作能力，要求紧扣题目给出的三个要点组织内容，语言需通顺连贯，符合书信格式，是初中英语常见的写作题型，能有效考察学生的英语表达与逻辑组织能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
